[Silverstone93]

Very well written update.. Aap Disha ki confused mindset Ko acche se describe kat rage ho... Story Aap Apne hisab se likhiyega jo filhal hamare liye suspense hai.. keep it up. 
One request- Use more pictures to describe situation. (It is just a request).

[DEVIL]

Very well written update.. Aap Disha ki confused mindset Ko acche se describe kat rage ho... Story Aap Apne hisab se likhiyega jo filhal hamare liye suspense hai.. keep it up. 
One request- Use more pictures to describe situation. (It is just a request).

Thanks alot bro....
I will try to add more pics for sure...

[shan123]

ऐसा लगता है कि करण कम वर्ग के आदमी के साथ यौन संबंध रखने के लिए देखना चाहते हैं। इस तरह की कहानी असाधारण है। मैंने बनारसी पनवाला नामक xossip में ऐसी कहानी पढ़ी थी। अगर आप इस तरह की कहानी लिखना चाहते हैं, तो यह कहानी होगी इस मंच में एक ब्लॉकबस्टर। इस संबंध में मेरे पास एक सुझाव है। दीशा को यह नहीं जाने दें कि करण चाहता है कि वह भक्ति के साथ यौन संबंध रखे...

[DEVIL]

ऐसा लगता है कि करण कम वर्ग के आदमी के साथ यौन संबंध रखने के लिए देखना चाहते हैं। इस तरह की कहानी असाधारण है। मैंने बनारसी पनवाला नामक xossip में ऐसी कहानी पढ़ी थी। अगर आप इस तरह की कहानी लिखना चाहते हैं, तो यह कहानी होगी इस मंच में एक ब्लॉकबस्टर। इस संबंध में मेरे पास एक सुझाव है। दीशा को यह नहीं जाने दें कि करण चाहता है कि वह भक्ति के साथ यौन संबंध रखे...

Thanks friend...
Aapka jo koi bhi suggestion hai, please mjhko private msg mai acche se bataiye..

[Vamp]

yah ek bahut garm aur kaamuk kahaanee hai. krpaya niyamit update den.

[DEVIL]

yah ek bahut garm aur kaamuk kahaanee hai. krpaya niyamit update den.

Thanks friend..

[DEVIL]

Bhai add more public humiliation make her fuck by different bhikharis

Puri koshish krunga...

[KGB]

Very good start.Keep going.

[Bimal]

बहुत अच्छा शुरूआत। अगले अद्यतन के लिए इंतजार कर रहा है।

[hfmwife]

Brother, I am waiting eagerly for your next update.

[DEVIL]

Very good start.Keep going.

बहुत अच्छा शुरूआत। अगले अद्यतन के लिए इंतजार कर रहा है।

Thanks alot... Update jald he aa jaenga...

[DEVIL]

Brother, I am waiting eagerly for your next update.

I will update as soon as possible bro..

[Kinkyboy]

आपकी नई कहानी के लिए बहुत धन्यवाद। आपकी लेखन शैली उत्कृष्ट है। पात्रों के बीच कामुक बातचीत एक कहानी को बहुत गर्म और कामुक बनाती है। मुझे उम्मीद है कि आप इस मामले पर विचार करेंगे। आपकी शुभकामनाएँ।

[Wanton]

bahut garm aur kaamuk shuruaat. agale updaten ke lie intajaar kar raha hai.

[Rumana]

Very hot story.waiting for next update.

[DEVIL]

आपकी नई कहानी के लिए बहुत धन्यवाद। आपकी लेखन शैली उत्कृष्ट है। पात्रों के बीच कामुक बातचीत एक कहानी को बहुत गर्म और कामुक बनाती है। मुझे उम्मीद है कि आप इस मामले पर विचार करेंगे। आपकी शुभकामनाएँ।

Thanks alot bro.....
Welcome to the Thread....

[DEVIL]

bahut garm aur kaamuk shuruaat. agale updaten ke lie intajaar kar raha hai.

Very hot story.waiting for next update.

Thanks alot Friends.... 
Will update very shortly....

[DEVIL]

Agle din ki subah hoti hai...

Disha uthke naha leti hai aur ready hai......
Aur ek sexy se saree nikal ke pehenti hai..
Blouse uska bahut chota sa tha aur Disha ke Mulayam goore badan ko saaf darsha rha tha .... Peeche se blouse backless tha..
Aur saree kamar ke neeche the... Jisse uske patli goori kamar saaf najar aa rahi thi.... Cehre pe wo halka sa make-up kar leti hai and hamesha ki tarah red glossy lipstick laga leti hai jo ki uske khoobsurat cehre ko aur jyda khoobsurat bana rahi thi.... Sharir pe khusbudar perfume chidak kar wo ready ho jati hai.......

Aaj Disha aur bhi jyda sexy lag rahi thi ( uppar di gayi pic ke jaise ) kisi bhi mard ka katal kar sakti thi aaj Disha apne katil looks aur adaoo ke saath....

Par Disha ye sab ek Bhikari ko tease karne ke liye kar rahi thi.... Wo Buddha Bhikari jo ki uske standard ke aas pass kahi bhi fit nahi bethta .... Jo ki behad jyda ganda aur badsurat hai.... aur uske baap ki umar se bhi jyda buddha ......

Disha ready hokar nasha kar leti hai and tabhi uske pati Karan ka call ata hai...

Karan : Hello Darling kaise ho....?

Disha : kaise rahungi Karan thik he hu...
Tumko miss kar rahi hu....

Karan : ha Darling mai samjh sakta hu...
Bas kuch din thoda adjust kar lo please...

Disha : ha Karan koi baat nhi hai.... Tum kya kar rahe ho... ?

Karan : kuch nhi bas Meeting ke liye jaa raha tha to socha ki baat kar lu pehle tumse...

Disha : accha.... 

Karan : Bhikari Baba aane wale honge na.
Tum ready ho gayi Disha ....

Disha : haa Karan ho gayi ready mai......
Tumhare Buddhe Bhikari baba ke liye...
Muskuraate hue Disha bolti hai....

Karan : dekhna Disha kahi jaan se na maar dena uss bechare buddhe ko apne haseen adaoo se aaj ...  kahi wo tumhari sundarta ke aage dam na todd de....

Disha : Sharmate hue Shutup Karan......
Stop teasing me.... 

Karan : Disha darling tum bore ho jati hongi na din bhar ....

Disha : haa karan kya karu aab... ?

Karan ke Kamine dimag mai ek khayal aata hai.......

Karan : ek kaam kyu nhi krti Disha Bhikari baba ko raat mai Dinner pe invite kar lo na... Tumhara mann bhi behel jaenga aur bechare  baba pe daya bhi ho jaengi... Unko tumhare jaise khoobsurat bala ke saath time spend karne mil jaenga.... Kitni khusi hongi baba ko........

Disha : ye sab jyda ho raha hai Karan....
Din ka to thik tha par raat mai kaise unko Dinner pe bulao.... Uppar se tum bhi nahi ho... Ek to waise he unko zeelna mushkil ho raha hai... Uppar se aab tum ye bol rahe ho...... Mujse nhi honga.....

Karan : please Disha samjho meri baat ....
Bechare baba raat ko bhi to aise idhar udhar bheek mangte hue firte honge... Unko dinner kara dongi agar to unko kitna accha lagenga .... 
Raat mai unko tumhare jaise khoobsurat aurat ke kareeb aane milenga to unke dil ko kitna sukoon milenga.....
Konsa kuch jyda karne bol raha hu...... Bas unke dil ko thoda behlane bol raha hu.... Unpar thode daya karo... Aise bhedbhaav mat karo unse....

Tum bhi chaar baate kar lena unse .. tumko bhi accha lagenga Disha .... 

Disha : thik hai Karan jaisa tum kaho....
I hope koi uch neech na jo jae.....

Karan : nahi hongi jaan .... Bas unke saath coperate karna thoda ...... Chlo Disha mai rakhta hu call...... Mujhko meeting ke liye  jana hai ..... 

Disha : thik hai Karan .... Byee.....

Karan : bye Disha........

Disha confused thi usne haan to bol diya tha par usko ajeeb lag raha tha Bhikari baba ko Dinner pe bulane se aur uske saath Dinner karne se.......
Wo soch rahi thi ki kaise uske jaise haseen sexy aurat ek Buddhe Bhikari ke sath dinner karengi....
Usko thode ghinn bhi aa rahi thi... Par ab haa bhi to bol di thi Disha ne to aab karna to padenga he .... Wo apne aap ko finally mana he leti hai Bhikari ko dinner pe invite karne ke liye ......

Aab usko Bhikari baba ke aane ka intejar tha.... Jiske liye wo abhi sajh dhaj ke bade sexy saree mai bethi thi....  Usko Buddhe Bhikari se ghin bhi thi par wahi dusri taraf Uske dil mai ek bechaine bhi  thi Bhikari ke aane ki.....

Disha ko aaj Bhikari baba ko akele he Nashta karna tha... Wo iss wakt akeli thi ghar mai.....Usko thoda dar bhi tha iss baat ka.......

Aur subah ke 10 bajte hai and door bell bajti hai.....

Disha ka dil jorse dhadakne lagta hai doorbell ki awaaj se... 
Disha Muskurati hue gate kholne chal padti hai....

Gate kholte he samne Bhikari baba khada tha... Wahi hamesha ki tarah gande fatte hue kameez aur dhoti.... Apna kaala Badsurat muh lekar apne kaale gande daat nikalta hua gate ke samne khada hue tha , bahut ganda lag raha tha wo...


Disha ko dekhte he uska dil teji se dhadak uthta hai...... Disha ka goora makhmali badan dekhte he uske muh mai paani aa jata hai..... Aur uska lawda dhooti mai akad jata hai ......
Wo apne kaale moote hoonth par apni jeeb ferte hue apna lawda dhooti ke uppar se adjust karta hai wo bhi Disha ki aakho mai dekhte hue......

Disha : ye sab dekh kar hairaan reh jaati hai aur uska dil bhi dhadakne lagta hai...
Disha ko ghin to aa he rahi thi par wo ye show nhi karna cahti thi....

Disha apne haseen cehre pe adaaa ke saath ek kaatil muskurahat laate hue Bhikari baba ki aakho mai dekhti hai... 

Disha : aa gaye Baba jiii........ Aayiye na andar.... Aur wo apni sexy adaa ke saath muskurati hue peeche mudh kar Bhikari ko andar bulati hai....

Bhikari Disha ki iss adaa ka deewana ho gaya tha.... Disha ne usse pagal kar diya tha... Uske andar ki soyi hui hawas aur bad jati hai....

Aur wo Disha ke peeche chal kar andar aane lagta hai....

Disha apni kamar matkate hue aage chal rahi thi aur uski goori makhmali peeth aur sexy mulayam gaand iss wakt Bhikari
Ki aakho ke samne thi.....

Bhikari Disha ki nangi peeth aur kamar dekhta he reh jata hai...  Uska man kar rha tha ki jaake usko peeche se zhapat le..
Par Bhikari khudpe control karta hai... Wo nhi cahta ki usko Disha ghar se nikal de warna jo najara dekhne milra hai wo bhi nhi milenga.....

Andar aane ke bad.......

Bhikari : Madam jii.... Sahab nhi dikh rahe ghar pe....

Disha : are baba wo seher se bahar gaye hai kaam ke silsile mai.... Ek hafte baad aayenge.... 

Ye baat sun kar Bhikari ka shaitani dimaag doodne lagta hai....
Disha ghar pe akeli rahengi aur Bhikari iss wakt uske ghar mai tha uske saath .... Ye baate sochke uska ghoon garam hone lagta hai.... Par kuch karne ki usmai himmat kam thi....

Bhikari : accha madam.... Apko akele dar nhi lagta ?

Disha : nhi Baba.... Nahi lagta dar.....
Muskurate hue ek adaa ke saath waise bhi mai akeli kaha hu Baba..... Aap ho na mere saath..... Mere kareeb..... Ho na .....

Bhikari ko to koi saap sung gaya tha.... 
Uska to dimag he kaam krna band kar deta hai iss baat se.....

Disha : kaha kho gaye babajii.......

Bhikari : ji madam jiii...... Ham hai na aapke saath.... Apke bahut kareeb ......
Apko koi dikkat nhi hone denge...... Wo apne kaale daat nikalte hue kehta hai.....

Disha bhi uske aakho mai dekhti hue muskura deti hai.... 

Disha :  muskurati hue... chaliye Baba aap nashta kar lijeye.... Baki ki baate khate khate karna.....

Bhikari ko disha ke adayee  deewana bana rahi thi.... Wo Disha ka sundar cehra dekh kar ek aahhhh bhara hai.... aur khudko kaabu krta hai.....

Bhikari : ji madam.......
Aur wo neeche Beth jata hai naste ke liye.

Disha kitchen mai se nashta lekar aati hai.... 

Disha naste ki plate serve karne ke liye  neeche zhukti hai to uske blouse mai se uske goore Cleavage dikh rahe the.....

Bhikari ke aakhe wahi atak gayi thi... Uske muh mai paani aa raha tha wo najara dekh kar.... 

Disha bhi Bhikari baba ko dekhti hai aur usko pata chalta hai ki Baba ke najre iss wakt kaha hai..... 
Disha ke haseen cehre pe hasi aa jati hai..

Disha :  ahmm ahmmm.... kaha kho gaye ..

Bhikari jisse ekdum hadbaba jata hai.....

Bhikari : wo mai..... wo..... kahi nhi madam bas aise he..... 

Disha : koi baat nahi babaji.... 

Fir Disha chai ka cup pakdane ke liye apne komal haath aage badati hai aur iss bar firse Bhikari apne kaale maile haato se Disha ke naajuk goore haatho ko tham leta hai.... Aur ektukk Disha ki nashili aakho mai dekhta rehta hai apne gande kaale daat nikal kar....

Disha bhi usse kuch nahi bolti.... Disha ek kaatil adaa ke saath uski aakho mai dekhti rehti hai..... Jisse Bhikari ki himmat bad jati hai.... 

Bhikari bhi uski aakho mai aakhe dale apne gande haato se uske komal goore haatho ko sehlata hai.... 

Disha sharma jaati hai .... Aur apne cehre  par ek kaatil muskurahat laate hue apna neechla hoonth daato mai daba leti hai...
Aur apna haath chudaati hui khadi ho jaati hai..... 

Ye sab kisi bhi aadmi ko pagal karne ke liye kaafi tha... Aur ye to ek Buddha Bhikari tha jisne saalo se kisi aurat ka nhi chua tha... Aur aab chu bhi raha tha to ek hoor ki pari ko.....

Disha pass he rakhe sofe pe jake beth jaati hai... Aur muskurati rehti hai....

Disha : baba aise dekhte he rahonge ki khaonge bhi.....

Bhikari : jii.... Madam jiii...... 

Aur Bhikari wahi jungliyo ki tarah khane lagta hai..... Disha usko de dekhti rehti hai... Usko daya bhi aati hai bechare baba par.... aur thode ghinn bhi.... 

Bhikari jaldi se nashta khatam karta hai..
Aur uthke khada ho jata hai....

Bhikari : Dhanyawad madam jii.... Bahut swadisth nashta banaya tha aapne, dil khush ho gaya.. aap bahut acchi hai madam......

Disha : muskurati hui thank you Babaji....

Bhikari : chaliye madam ji ham chalte hai.. man to uska Disha se dur jane ka tha nahi par usko bolna padta hai.....

Disha : are Babaji..... Bethiye na kuch der aur fir chale jana.... Kuch baate karte hai waise bhi Karan nahi hai to bahut borr ho jaati hu akele....

Bhikari ye sun kar khushi se jhoom uthta hai... Shayad bhagwan ne uske dil ke sun li thi.....

Bhikari : jii madam ji... Kyu nahi.... Ye to hamara sobhagya hai ki ham aapke jaise koobsurat ameer ghar ki mahila ke sath baat chit karne milenga .... Warna hame to log dhutkaar ke dur se he bhaga dete hai.....

Disha : aise koi baat nhi hai baba.... Mai sabko ek jaisa manti hu... Koi chota bada nahi hota.....

Bhikari fir uske paas jakar uske paav ke paas neeche beth jata hai......

Disha : to baba apne bataya nahi ap kaha rehte hai... Apki family .... ?

Bhikari : yahi paas ek zhopad patti mai rehta hu madam ji.... Biwi ko mare 10 saal ho gaye.... Ek ladka tha wo ghar se bhag gaya tha.... mera iss sansaar mai koi bhi nahi hai.... Bhikk mangkar he iss budhape mai jeevan bitana padta hai....

Aur wo rone jaise shakal banata hai....

Disha ko uspar bahut daya aati hai.... 
Wo neeche utar ke Bhikari ke kandhe par apne komal haath rakh deti hai.... 

Dukhi mat ho baba.... Aap chinta mat karo mai aur karan hai na apke saath apki family.... Ab apko kabhi akela nhi lagenga..... 
Iss wakt Disha Bhikari ke thoda kareeb thi aur uski naak mai Bhikari ke shareer ki durgand aa rahi thi....

Bhikari : sach madam.... 

Disha : haa babajiii..... wo Bhikari ke haatho par apne dono komal haath rakhte hue bolti hai..... 

Bhikari ka dil joro se dhadakne lagta hai aur uski fati hui dhooti mai uska kaala lund akadne lagta hai.... Jo ki Disha shyd notice kar sati thi.....

Disha fir uska haath thame he usse sofe par betha deti hai aur khud bhi beth jati hai.... Dono ke beech thoda sa he faasla tha... Jo ki bahut exiting tha.... 

Ek buddha galeez Bhikari ek ameer ghar ki sundari ke saath, uske barabar betha hua tha........

Bhikari : aap bahut mahan hai madam ji...
Jitne jyda sundar aap hai utna he sundar apka dil bhi hai.... 

Disha : ek kaatil muskurahat ke sath ... Itne bhi kya sundar hu mai baba..... 

Bhikari : are madam jii... sach mai iss dunia mai aapse jyda sundar koi ho he nhi skta.... Hamne to apse jyda Khoobsurat aur koi nhi dekha...... 

Disha kaafi jyda sharma jaati hai..... 

Disha : muskurati hui.... bas bhi keejiye baba kitne taarif karonge....

Bhikari : are madam apki jitne tarif kare kam hai......

Disha : muskurati hui accha aisa kya hai mujhmai jo sabmai nhi hai...... Disha ye sawal badi adaa ke saath Bhikari ke aakho mai dekhti hui puchti hai.....

Bhikari ka dil jaise bahar aane ko ho raha tha .... Disha ki adayee usko pagal bana rahi thi..... Wo Disha ke thode kareeb aa jata hai..... Aur apne kale gande haatho se Disha ke goore komal haathon ko thaam leta hai.... 

Dono ek dusre ki aakho mai dekh rahe the iss wakt....

Disha ki bhi saase tej chlne lagti hai aur uske boobs uppar neeche ho rahe the....

Disha : batao na babajii............ Aisa kya khaas hai mujhmai..........

Bhikari : uski aakho mai dekhta hua...... kya nahi hai madam  ye pucho......

Apka ye doodh jaisa goora badan chu bhi lo to kala pad jae..... Apki ye nashili aakhe kisi ko bhi nasha chad jae inse..... 

Apka ye haseen cehra.... Dil karta hai isse dekhte he rahu..... 

Disha : shatmate hue..... Aur baba.....

Bhikari : apke ye kaatil muskurahat mujhko deewana bana liya hai isne......
Apke ye laal raseele hoont..... Jitna raas bhara honga inmai .... Jee karta hai inhe khaa jau........

Disha : sharmate hue.... Aur babaji.....

Bhikari Disha ke thoda aur kareeb aa jata hai... Aab dono ke beech bilkul kam fasla tha .... Bhikari ko Disha ke badan ki khusboo pagal kar rahi thi.......

Bhikari : apki ye patni naajuk kamar....
Apka ye madmast figure... Bilkul hisaab se bana he apka badan.... Har jagah jitna hona cahiye utna he charbi hai....
Uppar se apke Sharir ke upbhaar masha alla kya kaha jayeee.... kisi ko bhi apna aashiq banane ke liye kaafi hai......

Badi fursat se banaya honga aapko bhagwan ne madam jii......

Disha : apna cehra sharam ke maare apne dono haatho mai chupa leti hai.... Bass bhi kijeyee babaji.... kitne tarif karonge meri...

Bhikari apne gande haath se Disha ke cehre par se uske komal haatho ko hatata hai..... 

Dono ek dusre ki aakho mai dekh rahe the... 
Disha ka dil zorse dhadak raha tha.... Uske Cehre par ek kaatil muskurahat aa jati hai... 

Bhikari ki himmat thode aur bad jaati hai
Wo Disha ke thoda aur kareeb aata hai aur apna cehra kareeb lata hai.....

Disha sharmate hue ek adaa ke saath uth khadi hoti hai..... Aur thoda aage jaake Bhikari ke taraf apni nangi goori peeth karke khadi ho jaati hai....

Bhikari bhi uthkar Disha ke pass jata hai..
Aur wo Disha ke peeche jakar Disha ke kaan mai dheere se bolta hai....

Bhikari : kya hua madam jiii.... Uth kyu gayi aap .....

Disha ki dhadkane bahut tej chal rahi thi.
Wo khudko control nhi kar paa rahi thi....
Disha kuch nahi bolti bas chup chap sharmate hui neeche dekhti rehti hai.....

Bhikari ke himmat badti hai wo dheere dheere aage badna cahta tha......

Bhikari apne gande kaale haatho ko Disha ke goori nangi peeth par rakh deta hai aur usse sehlane lagta hai.......
Aur apni naak Disha ke baalo mai lagane lagta hai .... Usse Disha ke badan ki khusboo pagal bana rahi thi.......

Disha bhi kaafi garam ho gayi thi.... Uske dimaag ne jaise kaam krna band kar diya tha..... Uski saase tej chal rahi thi.... Aur boobs uppar neeche hil rahe the.....

Bada he Erotic najara tha....... 

Bhikari apne gande kaale moote hoonth Disha ki goori peeth par rakh deta hai....
Aur usse chum leta hai...... 

Disha : aaaaahhhhhhhhhh............ 

Bhikari aab thoda aage badkar apne gande kaale haath Disha ki goori kamar par le jata hai aur dheere dheere apne haath sehlate hue Disha ki kamar se hote hue uske goore pait ke taraf le jane lagta hai.....

Disha ki halat iss wakt kaafi buri ho gayi thi.... Uska khud pe se kaabo kho sa gaya tha..... Usko iss baat ka ehsaas nhi tha ki wo iss wakt ek buddhe Bhikari ke sath hai.... 

Bhikari ka lund puri tarah se tann chuka tha aur uski dhooti faadkar bahar ana caah rha tha.....

Uska lund dhooti mai se Disha ki mulayam Gaand pe gadta hai..... Disha ko ye samjhne mai deri nhi lagti ki wo kya hai..... 

Disha ko isse ek bahut tejj zhatka lagta hai.... Usko realize hota hai ki wo kya kar rahi hai.... Ek buddhe Bhikari ke saath ye sab chhiiiiii....... Usse khud par sharam aa jati hai.....

Disha ekdum se Bhikari se alag ho jati hai....

Disha : ye aap kya kar rahe hai baba..... 

Bhikari ki to isse gand fatt jati hai .... Wo sochta hai aaj to gaya kaam se.... aab kabhi usko iss ghar mai ghusne ko bhi nahi milenga..... 

Bhikari : maaf kardo madam.... Galti ho gayi mujhse bahut badi.....

Disha : baba mai aapki beti ki umar ki hu..
Shadi shuda hu.... Apne pati se bahut pyar karti hu.... Apne kya sochkar ye sab kiya...

Bhikari : maafi cahta hu madam.... Kya karu itne saalo se kisi aurat ka sukh nhi mila... Aapke kareeb aane se behak gaya tha mai madam.... Mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi madam...... Mujhko maaf kardo aage se aise galti kbhi nahi karunga.... Aur wo rone lagta hai.........

Disha ko Bhikari pe taras aata hai.... Usko samjhta hai ki bechare baba saalo se aurat ke sukh ke bhuke hai.... Ye to bahut normal hai..... Inki jagah koi bhi hota to aisa he krta..... Mere jaise khoobsurat aurat inke kareeeb gayi to bechare baba ko to behakna he tha..... Galti meri hai ki maine khud par kaabu nahi kiya.........

Disha : mai samajh sakti hu baba aapka dard.... Aapki koi galti nahi hai.... Bas dhayan rakhna aage se aisa nahi hona cahiye....... 

Bhikari : jii madam.... Aage se aisa nhi honga .... 

Disha : thik hai baba aab aap jaa sakte ho.

Bhikari : ji madam... Aur wo bahar jaane lagta hai.....

Disha : are babajiii.... Suno.....

Bhikari : jii madam jii.... Boliye na....

Disha : raat mai khana kaha khate ho..?

Bhikari : koi thikana nahi rehta madam... 
Jo khana khila de wahi kha lete hai...

Disha : accha babaji..... Muskurate hue....Raat ka khana mere saath khana cahonge .... ?

Bhikari ka dil ye sun kar khushi se jhoom uthta hai....

Bhikari : jiii madam jiii.... Apka bahut bahut Dhanyawad......

Disha : ek kaatil hansi ke saath... Thik hai to baba.... Raat ko aa jaiyenga..... 

Bhikari : apne kaale peele daat nikalta hua......thik hai madam jii........

Aur Bhikari wapas chala jata hai.......

Bhikari aaj bahut khush tha ek to aaj jo hua tha uske liye madam ne usko kuch nhi bola tha.... Uppar se usko uss husn ki pari ke saath dinner karne milne wala tha aaj.... Bhikari ki to lottery lagne wali thi aaj.... jiss haseena ke sapne bhi dekhna uske liye namumkin tha wo ussi ke sath, akele raat mai Dinner karne wala tha........

Disha gate laga kar washroom mai chali jati hai apna face pe paani dalti hai aur apne goore haath jo ki Bhikari ke chune se gande ho gaye the unko dhoo leti hai...

Fir wo room mai jaane ke baad mirror ke samne jaake beth jaati hai aur sochne lagti hai....

Disha : kya sach mai itni jyda Khoobsurat hu mai jitna wo Baba bata rahe the..... Wo khudko mirror mai niharne lagti hai.....
Uske cehre par sharam aa jati hai........

Aaj jo kuch bhi hua usmai bechare Baba ki kya galti hai.... Aab jiss gande Bhikari ke aage koi gandi kaali aurat bhi nhi jaati hongi jo itne saalo se bhuka hai.... Uske aage itni sundar aurat ayengi to wo behakenga he na.....

Mujhko he khud pe kaabu rakhna cahiye tha..... Kaise mai unke chune se behak gayi thi.... Kaise ..... Kyu unke chune se mera badan tadap utha tha jaise kitne time se pyasi hu mai..... Hu bhi to sahi... 
Karan dhyaan kaha dete hai mujh par...
Wahi jo baba kitne taarif kar rahe the meri.... Kitne kadar hai unhe meri....meri sundarta ki.... 

Kadar hai to kya hua .... hai to Buddha Bhikari he na.... Kaise mai ye bhul skti hu.... Mai ek high society mai rehne wali lady hu.... Mera ek status hai ... Mujhko khudpe control karna padenga.......
Bhale he wo mere kareeb aaye par mai nhi behekungi..... 

Aage se dhyaan rakhungi iss baat ka....
Iss baat ka ki mai kya hu aur wo kya hai ek Bhikari..... 

Uske mann mai aab raat ke Dinner ka khayal aa jata hai... Usko aaj uss Buddhe Bhikari ke saath Dinner karna tha.... Jaisa uske patidev ne kaha tha..... Aur ha uss Bhikari ko tease bhi to karna tha apni kaatil aadaoo se.... Apni sundarta ke jalwee  dikhane the uss buddhe baba ko...

Disha thoda confused thi ki jaise wo ye sab manage kar payengi.... Kaise .......
Par karna to tha he.... Promise jo kiya tha usne apne pati Karan ko....

Disha finally khudko mana he leti hai raat ke liye aur apni sundarta ka jadu Bhikari baba par karne ke liye......





Aab aage ye dekhna tha ki raat mai kya hota hai...
Aur kaise Disha apne husn ka jadu Bhikari baba pe bikherengi.....

[Silverstone93]

Story development is good. Keep it up. Aisi types ki stories aage jake mostly track kho deti hai.. Hope you have fixed plot to proceed with the story and give meaningful climax to it. All the very best. Keep it up.

[Veer]

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