08-10-2019, 11:59 AM
(08-10-2019, 11:09 AM)ShaifBD Wrote: please do
10 -15 comments and do bad mai new thread chalu kr dungi
Adultery Main , meri family aur mera gaon --by 123fuckeravi
10 -15 comments and do bad mai new thread chalu kr dungi
08-10-2019, 12:03 PM
08-10-2019, 12:54 PM
#Monikat ji please aap jarur likhe kyoki ye kahani ki jaisi koi kahani hi nhi mili mujhe
08-10-2019, 01:24 PM
if u can reach expectation of this story u can continue write
15-11-2019, 04:02 PM
Ab samajh mein aayaa iss story ko itne saare updates kyu hua hain... ek ek pal ko badi dhyaan se dil lagake likha hain iss writer ne... aisa likhnaa koi aasaan kaam nahi hain. Agar kisi ko iss story ko continue karna hain tho pehle usko ek yaa do baar nahi 300-400 baar sochna chahiye. Kyun ki... iss story ko jaldi jalidi nahi balki dheere dheere likhna hain. Warna sab pe bahut bhaari pad jaayega.
Ye sab mein iss story mein sirf aakhri 2 updates (avi aur bhgwaan ke beech sapne wala updates) hi padhke bataa raha hun.
Phir poora updates padhne waale doston ka feelings bhi ek baar sochna.(Please forgive for my hinglish if you find any mistakes in it. ;))
Okay guys...
Really, this story got great novelty in it. Please anyone who are willing to continue this, need that in them as well. Poora ka Poora. Otherwise, you are spoiling it for sure. MIND IT!
Ye sab mein iss story mein sirf aakhri 2 updates (avi aur bhgwaan ke beech sapne wala updates) hi padhke bataa raha hun.
Phir poora updates padhne waale doston ka feelings bhi ek baar sochna.(Please forgive for my hinglish if you find any mistakes in it. ;))
Okay guys...
Really, this story got great novelty in it. Please anyone who are willing to continue this, need that in them as well. Poora ka Poora. Otherwise, you are spoiling it for sure. MIND IT!
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17-05-2020, 12:23 PM
Avi Bhai apki story bohot achhi hai aur abhi to bahut kuch baki hai story mein. So please story ko continue kijiye.
23-06-2020, 04:36 PM
Ye story to xossip pe chal rahi thi Avi bhai ki aur eske 5 part complete ho gye the and part 6 running tha and 1300 + updates waha padh chuke hai kya xossip pe kaha se band hui usse aage bhi badegi ye story ka yaha copy paste ho raha tha .????
13-07-2020, 08:39 PM
Bhai bilkul begining se start ki hai story avi bhai
13-07-2020, 08:41 PM
Maine tumhari story padhi hai xossip pe or maine wha se story chodi thi jaha badi chachi avi ko komal ke sath pakad leti hai bhai jaldi jaldi updatr do
13-07-2020, 10:12 PM
Avi Bhai is not available in this forum...
28-04-2021, 12:12 PM
This story has been continued by: Sarkaar333
on this forum.
The link is given below:
https://xossipy.com/thread-35387.html
on this forum.
The link is given below:
https://xossipy.com/thread-35387.html
14-06-2021, 03:20 PM
Avi ki wait chod do uski death ho chuki hai
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