[Sagar s]

Fantastic bro...eagerly waiting to see kavita ....and her condition :)

[twinciteeguy]

full of info and logic

[Sarvesh Siva]

Great narration

[sunniappan]

Excellent

[karimeduramu]

Splendid narration. Will manu marry jaya or go back to that bitch and fall in her ditch.

[Shriya George]

Beautiful narration. interesting thought process.

[kamdev99008]

why are you wasting your valuable time to demotivating the author and readers...........
if you are not interested, then don't visit here....... 
is anyone pressurizing you to read this sequal????

what the writer write?........... it's writer's choice........ not yours or others
what the readers read?.......... it's readers choice......... you can have the choice for yourself only, not for others
where the writer write?........... it's writer's and admin's right, not yours and any other person's

so don't try to impose your logic on writer and other readers........... make your choice and chill

it's like that hindi proverb 
बेगानी शादी में अब्दुल्ला दीवाना 

या एक और भी है

तू कौन?
में खामखाँ

banghead: banghead: banghead: banghead: banghead:

[Dhundari]

why are you wasting your valuable time to demotivating the author and readers...........
if you are not interested, then don't visit here....... 
is anyone pressurizing you to read this sequal????

what the writer write?........... it's writer's choice........ not yours or others
what the readers read?.......... it's readers choice......... you can have the choice for yourself only, not for others
where the writer write?........... it's writer's and admin's right, not yours and any other person's

so don't try to impose your logic on writer and other readers........... make your choice and chill

it's like that hindi proverb 
बेगानी शादी में अब्दुल्ला दीवाना 

या एक और भी है

तू कौन?
में खामखाँ

banghead: banghead: banghead: banghead: banghead:

clp); yr):

[Siva82]

why are you wasting your valuable time to demotivating the author and readers...........
if you are not interested, then don't visit here....... 
is anyone pressurizing you to read this sequal????

what the writer write?........... it's writer's choice........ not yours or others
what the readers read?.......... it's readers choice......... you can have the choice for yourself only, not for others
where the writer write?........... it's writer's and admin's right, not yours and any other person's

so don't try to impose your logic on writer and other readers........... make your choice and chill

it's like that hindi proverb 
बेगानी शादी में अब्दुल्ला दीवाना 

या एक और भी है

तू कौन?
में खामखाँ

banghead: banghead: banghead: banghead: banghead:

Nicely said...  clp);

If they don’t like this sequel I wonder why they keep coming back to read update  banghead:  banghead:

[twinciteeguy]

why are you wasting your valuable time to demotivating the author and readers...........
if you are not interested, then don't visit here....... 
is anyone pressurizing you to read this sequal????

what the writer write?........... it's writer's choice........ not yours or others
what the readers read?.......... it's readers choice......... you can have the choice for yourself only, not for others
where the writer write?........... it's writer's and admin's right, not yours and any other person's

so don't try to impose your logic on writer and other readers........... make your choice and chill

it's like that hindi proverb 
बेगानी शादी में अब्दुल्ला दीवाना 

या एक और भी है

तू कौन?
में खामखाँ

banghead: banghead: banghead: banghead: banghead:

AGREE TOTALLY

[xx30]

I'm writing this post for all those who're reading this story chapter by chapter patiently with an anticipation of a conclusion in which manu will have his revenge on kavita or they'll be separated or manu will be fucking Gowri, or he'll be with someone else, guys that's not happening. They're not getting divorced, infact they'll be together and also have kids, the author has already given a hint of that at the beginning of the story. 
This is a feminist version of the story where all the female characters (both Kavita and Gowri) will be stereotyped as totally innocent, guiltless and pure. Kavita will be shown as a caring,dutiful,faithful, adarsh indian biwi who is totally devoted to her husband. Their happily married life was totally destroyed when a devil in disguise prem arrived in their life. He drugged both of them, bullied the man, blackmailed and bangd the woman, forced the faithful innocent wife to sleep with him for months and treated the man as a slave in front of the innocent virtuous wife who couldn't resist (instead encouraged) because she was under the influence of some drugs but finally she listened to her inner voice, with the help of psychiatrists,counselling, mind control, sex education some guruji and ....Bla...Bla...Bla.. they'll eventually get rid of the devil and the faithful wife will be reunited with her hero Manu and they'll live happily ever after .
This is what happens when you leave a story incomplete and it gets a lot of attention, you will start getting different versions of it .
Soon there will be a gay version in which Amir and Manu will rediscover their sexuality and start making love with each other leaving Kavita and Gowri .
Then there will be a misogynist version where Kavita will conspire with Prem and try to kill Manu.
This feminist version is just the beginning plenty more to come.

[Sagar s]

I'm writing this post for all those who're reading this story chapter by chapter patiently with an anticipation of a conclusion in which manu will have his revenge on kavita or they'll be separated or manu will be fucking Gowri, or he'll be with someone else, guys that's not happening. They're not getting divorced, infact they'll be together and also have kids, the author has already given a hint of that at the beginning of the story. 
This is a feminist version of the story where all the female characters (both Kavita and Gowri) will be stereotyped as totally innocent, guiltless and pure. Kavita will be shown as a caring,dutiful,faithful, adarsh indian biwi who is totally devoted to her husband. Their happily married life was totally destroyed when a devil in disguise prem arrived in their life. He drugged both of them, bullied the man, blackmailed and banged the woman, forced the faithful innocent wife to sleep with him for months and treated the m :)

Hhahahahahh

[killthecheats]

Different approach, great homework, beautiful narration. Hats off to you.

[manasi]

Dear all,

Wish you all a happy Diwali celebration.

Due to some reasons, I started this tribute to explore possible motives of the protagonist depicted by indiansubmale. Being an average human, I could get wrong at any point. I was well aware of the fact that this forum may not be appropriate to explore with logic. While I was skeptical of the viewership, the truth overwhelmed me. Many readers welcomed my logical explanation. I have sincerely avoided miracles and religious preaches. I devoted to more science and societal norms in explaining the characters. Astrologers and religious leaders did not figure in my explanation as I personally don't believe in them. Guruji here represents a spiritual leader above any religion and more of a psychiatrist and social worker. I never wanted any readers gets personally affected with my tribute. 


The latest posting of xx30 suggests that he is deeply pained by unknown reasons. Normally no readers behaves this way. Readers are always welcome to criticize within the scope and I had well defined my scope in the very beginning. Though there may be many reasons for his discomfiture, I personally feel guilty of causing him undesired pain beyond my sensible knowledge. Even though, I am within my freedom and at liberty to ignore him, it pains me thinking above.


While I am committed to end this tribute by year end, a thin line of doubt arising in my mind. Will it be appropriate to be a cause of pain to any readers in this forum where most of the readers join here to get some pleasure? To tell the truth, I am confused. You readers suggest. I was due to post my next update on 15th Nov morning which I am withholding for another 24 hours for readers to decide.


Out of 7 scheduled updates for this month, I am a bit late, as only 2 are published. I can withhold all the updates and post all in one go by year end. This may help xx30 not to lose his mental composure step by step. I am not against his criticism. I am afraid of him losing his psychological balance.


Your valuable suggestions are welcome for taking a positive decision. Please help me to decide.

Thank you all.

Have nice times.

[drillhot]

Hi Manasi, please write the story'as per your initial plan. Never deviate based on individual thoughts. Treat them as haters and just move on ignoring.

[Jeevanantham]

Hey Manasi... Keep it up with your writing.. don't turn back your thoughts.. write as per your idea.. you are always welcome ...

[Siva82]

Dear all,

Wish you all a happy Diwali celebration.

Due to some reasons, I started this tribute to explore possible motives of the protagonist depicted by indiansubmale. Being an average human, I could get wrong at any point. I was well aware of the fact that this forum may not be appropriate to explore with logic. While I was skeptical of the viewership, the truth overwhelmed me. Many readers welcomed my logical explanation. I have sincerely avoided miracles and religious preaches. I devoted to more science and societal norms in explaining the characters. Astrologers and religious leaders did not figure in my explanation as I personally don't believe in them. Guruji here represents a spiritual leader above any religion and more of a psychiatrist and social worker. I never wanted any readers gets personally affected with my tribute. 


The latest posting of xx30 suggests that he is deeply pained by unknown reasons. Normally no readers behaves this way. Readers are always welcome to criticize within the scope and I had well defined my scope in the very beginning. Though there may be many reasons for his discomfiture, I personally feel guilty of causing him undesired pain beyond my sensible knowledge. Even though, I am within my freedom and at liberty to ignore him, it pains me thinking above.


While I am committed to end this tribute by year end, a thin line of doubt arising in my mind. Will it be appropriate to be a cause of pain to any readers in this forum where most of the readers join here to get some pleasure? To tell the truth, I am confused. You readers suggest. I was due to post my next update on 15th Nov morning which I am withholding for another 24 hours for readers to decide.


Out of 7 scheduled updates for this month, I am a bit late, as only 2 are published. I can withhold all the updates and post all in one go by year end. This may help xx30 not to lose his mental composure step by step. I am not against his criticism. I am afraid of him losing his psychological balance.


Your valuable suggestions are welcome for taking a positive decision. Please help me to decide.

Thank you all.

Have nice times.

Manasi - XX30 user has complete freedom to ignore this thread if he feels it’s not satisfying his wish list. Nobody can satisfy each and every person thought and well wishes. Just for one person negative comment altering the plan isn’t correct according to me. There are 100 of other user who like ur writing and the way it’s moving towards a logical end. As a writer u have complete freedom how and what to write. If somebody like it they can follow and if somebody doesn’t like it they won’t follow ur writing. It simple . We shouldn’t complicate this any further ignore and move on with your story as u envisioned 

Look forward to your update on 15th. Take care and stay safe

[xx30]

First Of all 
I wish you a very happy Diwali Manasi, 
Please continue with your post, don't bother my presence, I didn't write that post to stop you, there are some readers who are expecting what they shouldn't be like Manu divorcing Kavita, I wrote it for them so that they dont feel cheated at the end.
As far as I am concerned I am enjoying this non erotic feminist version . It's a all new experience. 
Please continue and don't bother my coments, there are others like Kamdev and all to curse me.
Please continue with your story, wish you all the best.

[kamdev99008]

Dear all,

Wish you all a happy Diwali celebration.

Due to some reasons, I started this tribute to explore possible motives of the protagonist depicted by indiansubmale. Being an average human, I could get wrong at any point. I was well aware of the fact that this forum may not be appropriate to explore with logic. While I was skeptical of the viewership, the truth overwhelmed me. Many readers welcomed my logical explanation. I have sincerely avoided miracles and religious preaches. I devoted to more science and societal norms in explaining the characters. Astrologers and religious leaders did not figure in my explanation as I personally don't believe in them. Guruji here represents a spiritual leader above any religion and more of a psychiatrist and social worker. I never wanted any readers gets personally affected with my tribute. 


The latest posting of xx30 suggests that he is deeply pained by unknown reasons. Normally no readers behaves this way. Readers are always welcome to criticize within the scope and I had well defined my scope in the very beginning. Though there may be many reasons for his discomfiture, I personally feel guilty of causing him undesired pain beyond my sensible knowledge. Even though, I am within my freedom and at liberty to ignore him, it pains me thinking above.


While I am committed to end this tribute by year end, a thin line of doubt arising in my mind. Will it be appropriate to be a cause of pain to any readers in this forum where most of the readers join here to get some pleasure? To tell the truth, I am confused. You readers suggest. I was due to post my next update on 15th Nov morning which I am withholding for another 24 hours for readers to decide.


Out of 7 scheduled updates for this month, I am a bit late, as only 2 are published. I can withhold all the updates and post all in one go by year end. This may help xx30 not to lose his mental composure step by step. I am not against his criticism. I am afraid of him losing his psychological balance.


Your valuable suggestions are welcome for taking a positive decision. Please help me to decide.

Thank you all.

Have nice times.

why you are behaving like manu........ manu sharma 
...............
confused by :
-feelings of others
-care of others
-actions of others
-knowledge of others
and above all
-happiness of others

i don't think ........ i'm born to make all world happy
-i'm here to make myself happy
and expecting same to others..........
if they want happiness....... they have to act on their own........ i don't belive in charity
charity makes the recipient.......handicapped, unable and disabled

i am not reading this story to make you happy........ i am reading for my own happiness

so don't make yourself a fool............by infections of any other's feelings
 
if you feels, you are writing this story for yourself, for your happiness, for your satisfaction
then do it...... without considering anyone's feelings.......... including me

.......................................................
learn something from what you are quoting in this story  :) 

waiting for next update eagerly...............
if you are annoyed by xx30's comments .......... report to mods and ban him for posting on your thread or even forum too
but don't make us waiting and story hanged...........because of him

update next plz

[Ramesh_Rocky]

why you are behaving like manu........ manu sharma 
...............
confused by :
-feelings of others
-care of others
-actions of others
-knowledge of others
and above all
-happiness of others

i don't think ........ i'm born to make all world happy
-i'm here to make myself happy
and expecting same to others..........
if they want happiness....... they have to act on their own........ i don't belive in charity
charity makes the recipient.......handicapped, unable and disabled

i am not reading this story to make you happy........ i am reading for my own happiness

so don't make yourself a fool............by infections of any other's feelings
 
if you feels, you are writing this story for yourself, for your happiness, for your satisfaction
then do it...... without considering anyone's feelings.......... including me

.......................................................
learn something from what you are quoting in this story  :) 

waiting for next update eagerly...............
if you are annoyed by xx30's comments .......... report to mods and ban him for posting on your thread or even forum too
but don't make us waiting and story hanged...........because of him

update next plz

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