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Amrita character assassinated. Nothing to continue.
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Dear friends, I wish to continue this story. Who all are interested. But i will be able to prepare and post it during Feb only. suggest me how to take it further and I will try to implement readers imagination or fantasy. Thanks.
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Hi dear. It's a great story. Would love to read further updates. Do write whenever you have time. A few suggestions:
1. You can make her open about her body and sexuality.
2. In village she can go for open river bath where she is casually nude in front of ladies in the beginning, later on men also.
3. Getting treatment from village doctor who of course would ask her to be naked. First she is naked inside the doctor pvt cabin, but due to some situation, she has to come out in the open where she is seen naked by other patients...
4. Goes to barber for haircut but also gets her pussy shaved..
5. Village temple pooja. Where the priest ask her to do some nude ritual..
6. Getting kidnapped by thugs who ask her to do nude mujra in order to get released.
7. Getting henna from a guy and afterwards the guy also applies henna on her whole body..
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Adventures have become disgusting.
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I need more dirty and nasty thing
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nice story so far.. only thing missing in the story so far is a gang bang and his hubby being a cuckold. Great writing OP..
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Waiting for your update bro
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very good story , update please