20-04-2019, 12:24 PM
vah vah bahut badhiya update hai bahi.
(21-04-2019, 12:26 PM)Smalldick Wrote: Great work brother.Please let Karim alone seduce different female members of the family like the karim of BUDDHA TAILOR and Bade ghar ki bahu, betiyan.It seems to me if you add many male characters,the story may lose it attraction to the readers.Wish best of you.
(21-04-2019, 07:09 PM)Starkmen Wrote: DEAR ALL READERS. THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS AND SUGGESSION.Ok Brother,write this story according to your fantasy.I hope you will start another story in which a low class man will seduce multiple conservative and faithful female members of a very rich and aristocratic family and will make them his personal whore one by one.Thanks a lot for writing this super hot story.
BUT MEIN ISS STORY KO THODA ALAG LIKHNA CHAHTA HU. GENERALLY STORIES ME 1 SE JYADA FEMAIL CHARACTERS HOTI HAI. PHIR STORY KI MAIN FEMAIL CHARACTER KA IMPORTANCE KAM HO JATA HAI.
ISILIYE MENE ISS STORY ME EK HI FEMAIL CHARACTER KO CHUNA. ARCHANA - JO AKELI HI MULTIPLE SEX ADVENTURES KO SAHEGI. JISME DARD HOGA, PYASS HOGI, ROMANCE HOGA, PYAAR HOGA, MILAN KI CHAHAT HOGI.
SAYAD AAPKO JO FANTASY CHAHIYE YE ISME NA BHI HO. PHIR BHI ME KOSHISH KARUGA USS TARAH LIKHNE KI
HOPE U ENJOY.
(21-04-2019, 07:09 PM)Starkmen Wrote: DEAR ALL READERS. THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS AND SUGGESSION.
BUT MEIN ISS STORY KO THODA ALAG LIKHNA CHAHTA HU. GENERALLY STORIES ME 1 SE JYADA FEMAIL CHARACTERS HOTI HAI. PHIR STORY KI MAIN FEMAIL CHARACTER KA IMPORTANCE KAM HO JATA HAI.
ISILIYE MENE ISS STORY ME EK HI FEMAIL CHARACTER KO CHUNA. ARCHANA - JO AKELI HI MULTIPLE SEX ADVENTURES KO SAHEGI. JISME DARD HOGA, PYASS HOGI, ROMANCE HOGA, PYAAR HOGA, MILAN KI CHAHAT HOGI.
SAYAD AAPKO JO FANTASY CHAHIYE YE ISME NA BHI HO. PHIR BHI ME KOSHISH KARUGA USS TARAH LIKHNE KI
HOPE U ENJOY.
(21-04-2019, 07:09 PM)Starkmen Wrote: DEAR ALL READERS. THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS AND SUGGESSION... Bro apne kahani bi achi chuni he or kahani ka plot bi sahi chuna..... Aesi hi Story sabko pashnd he or kahani me ek hi Patra ko nay mile aesa karo. Is kahani me sab lana. BDSM, douiminet,randipana,gali,kinky sabkuch. Asha karta hu ki apki kahani bahot aage jai. Par Time se kahani dete rahena
BUT MEIN ISS STORY KO THODA ALAG LIKHNA CHAHTA HU. GENERALLY STORIES ME 1 SE JYADA FEMAIL CHARACTERS HOTI HAI. PHIR STORY KI MAIN FEMAIL CHARACTER KA IMPORTANCE KAM HO JATA HAI.
ISILIYE MENE ISS STORY ME EK HI FEMAIL CHARACTER KO CHUNA. ARCHANA - JO AKELI HI MULTIPLE SEX ADVENTURES KO SAHEGI. JISME DARD HOGA, PYASS HOGI, ROMANCE HOGA, PYAAR HOGA, MILAN KI CHAHAT HOGI.
SAYAD AAPKO JO FANTASY CHAHIYE YE ISME NA BHI HO. PHIR BHI ME KOSHISH KARUGA USS TARAH LIKHNE KI
HOPE U ENJOY.