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Please continue the story please
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Teacher ni malli maku kavali okkasari malli update please
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Hello Sir,
ఏంటి ఇంకా Update లేనట్టేనా...
Please Don't Stop,
తొందరగా update ఇవ్వండి...???
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నిశీధిలో ఉషోదయం టీచర్ లా ఎదురే వస్తే
చిలిపి కనులు తాళమేసే చినుకు తడికి చిందులేసే
మనసు మురిసి పాటపాడే తనువు మరిచి భారత్ ఏమో ఆటలాడే..
Update brother
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Emi ipoledu bro meekosam mee stories updates kosam eduru chutu vuntam. Maaku nammakam vundi bro.
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dom nic torrento brother, endi ee rachha? your mastery over characters and expressing their emotions is unbelievable. Edo views ekkuva unnai bane undi untundi kasta chadivi kottukundam ani start cheste wow! what a narration & visualisation! and more over each update is huge so I can understand the amount of time you had to spend on this, thank you so much. But having said all that, regrettably I lost track of the plot and there were so many variations in the story which I couldn't keep up with! plus Inception and memento movies rendu mix cheste vachhinattu undi plot jumping from present to past every so often which made it really difficult to enjoy, Repetitively there were way too many sub plots and characters with extensive narration prolonging the overall story which would only add very little benefit to the end reader, I think this happened because you taking suggestions from us readers but that's useful to some extent but meeru heavily bomabrded with ideas I guess. Please don't get me wrong, I'm not saying it's bad but it had every opportunity to become a one of the greatest classics in telugu erotica! This story hits you on so many levels because it's relatable endukante core story is about true love which is greater than sex! so adi express cheyatam lo meeru 200% successful almost maa andari cheta edipincharu . cheppandi ee site lo enni stories genuinely tickle your emotions and make you cry? overall it's been a pleasure reading this story and keep up the good work!
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6 years meru rasena story ni inkaokaru rastanu antey Ela broo opukunaru anta kastapadi rasaru story ni merey ending esta it will be good I think so it's on you tho it's ur story the best I read so far all the in xossipy
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Whoever going to rewrite this story better open a new thread rewrite from the star by making necessary changes.
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Continue cheyandi bro but same style
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No bro evaru rasthe emundi cheppu ?
Praveen bro meeru twaraga update ivvandi
Eagerly waiting
మీకు నా స్టోరీ ఎంటర్టైన్మెంట్, నాకు మీ రెస్పాన్స్ ఎంటర్టైన్మెంట్, ఒకటి లేకపోతే ఇంకోటి రాదు
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Dom nic bro I accidentally read your short film story, damn it's a sex bomb! usually I don't like cuckold but that was an exception by miles!! probably only story I ever read repetitively to jack off!! It was filthy, horny and sexy. I also read 'mother padma' I felt it was bit much but it has your usual magic. If there are any other mother stories you wrote please direct me towards them. Thank you so much for all your hard work.
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Machi story ni Ela dead story ga end chasaru appudu e story frst page chusuna update vachindi emo ani chustanu but update radu ani telusu enduku oka hope e stories chala sarlu chadivanu but eppudu bore kotaledu someone give this story ending plz