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Hello Krish, Continue............
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waiting for update.................!
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So much delay, I am not looking further for update. Enthusiasm is killed by so long time.
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If story is very twisting & so much happening within few days after days, then it would be better if update were too much high no. of frequencies days after days.
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I apologise for the delay in update. The next update is a bit longer than usual and I need some more time. It should be ready by tomorrow and I'll be posting it on Sunday.
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I could bearly remember the twists and turns in this story.
Sissy me
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What are your other Stories. It will be great if you can post them too.. link ?? Or upload PDF.. thank you... I guess they would also be as erotic as them
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Krish, I think you too busy to give the update....
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Sorry guys. It was a big update and it took more time than I thought. Finally it's here. In a couple of minutes.
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Again a cliffhanger. You should write mystery novels or even better scripts for serials or movies.
The only thing am not liking is the slownes of the updates, the mystery not being resolved and the fate of Anvita still hidden and hanging in the balance by a thread. Waiting for more and more updates. If possible try to increase the frequency of updates.
Stellar job as always.
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It's a big update Krish it took me to read the update 1h+ time
I can't imagine How much time it will take you to type it.
I appreciate your hard and I found some mistakes in script
Some times I can't understand who is speaking to who .
Finally at the end as usual you are making us impatient for next update
Maybe next update in anvita point of view.
Post next update as soon as possible.
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I am back. can't hold temptation to read your update. A said that "beauty never have brain". Now I knew that I applied for men too. I am dumbstruck after reading this update. Can't write what I am feeling now.
Another, technically atul not cheated on anvita but logically when He slept with ridhima for whole night he already chated to anvita.
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Manish is real impressive man. He is very clever & Sharp Minded. The way he stole ridhima just below from nose of atul is very impressive. He acted like Shark.
Now, I think atul's father understands that his son is emotional fool and have confidence problem with his personality so he treated him like that.
1. ridhima for out with him just for sex but he was busy with alcohol. what a fool ?
2. His biggest mistake was to allow Manish to interfere with their night and allow him to take them into his house. What atul was thinking that any third person is interested to entertain them to have sex with their girlfriend in his house just for social welfare. If you can afford and have no problem then nobody will go into someone house in presence of others with dates.
Krish, I think next update have to throw light on manish's trick with ridhima to get into her pant. else this it would be appreciated if you write comment to clear what atul did mistake and the incidence where atul started to loose ridhima. I doubted that Manish was following them since their first met and there randomly meeting were not accidental.
I fear this incidence anyhow will be change to anvita as she is going to know about this.
For atul, " Na maya mili na ram "
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Hey krish_999,
Thanks for resuming the story, Love you for your commitment and ofcourse the quality erotica.
I wish, whenever you have time please do post your older stories too.