[Raghu]

waiting eagerly bro.

[Rahul007]

waiting Ajay bro.

[Mafiadon]

waiting eagerly bro.

[Terminator]

Ajay bhai,please update

[parizad333]

ajay bhai aj saturday he aj to day di do ek dhaansu update

[Bonita]

Ajay bhai,please update dijiye

[Introvert]

Brother,please update

[Vamp]

Ajay bhai, please update

[Rahul007]

Waiting for the next update

[rabiakhan338]

waiting more

[Ajaykumar82]

update likh raha hoon jab time milega main usey post kar dunga.............bhai logon zara bhi time nahin mil raha samjha karo yaaron.........bus do char dinon ke baad is kahani ke update pehle ki tarah regular aayengey.........

[Nadeem]

Its ok janu.....

[Rohit]

update likh raha hoon jab time milega main usey post kar dunga.............bhai logon zara bhi time nahin mil raha samjha karo yaaron.........bus do char dinon ke baad is kahani ke update pehle ki tarah regular aayengey.........

Okay, buddy, will be waiting patiently.

[parizad333]

Bro Ajay aaj kuch umeed he kya hamari raat rangeen honay ki?

[Mahi Maurya]

आपकी कहानी बहुत ही मस्त है
मेरी नजर से एक ही कमी नजर आ रही है और वह है गंदे शब्दों की कमी।

कहानी में काव्या से बदला लिया जा रहा है बेटे की मौत का और उसके साथ व्यवहार भी थोड़ा गंदे शब्दों से होना चाहिए

[Mafiadon]

waiting brother.

[Prash2019]

Waiting bro

[ramumargaya]

Waiting.

[rafiqshaikh9059]

superb writer ho yar aap ajay kumar kya likhte ho maza aa gaya padh kar

[Ajaykumar82]

Gand marli samajhte ho aap? Wahi kiya hai aapne is story ke sath.

please do not use this type of language.........main manta hoon ki main is kahani par pichley kuch dinon se upade nahin de paa raha hoon iska ye matlab nahin ki aap comment mein kuch bhi likheney............meri bhi kuch problems hain mere ghar par pichely 2 mahinon se kaam chal raha hain.........main ghar ka kaam dekhun ki sab kuch chodhkar aap sab ke liye kahani likhta rahun..........agar is tarah ke aagey mere thread par comments aaye to main aab is baar main likhn zaroor choh dunga............fir baad mein ye mutt kehna ki maine kyon kahani adhuri chodh di....aagey aap sab khudd samajhdar hain.............