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Romance సారీ టీచర్..... {Index Available} completed
Basu,

Nenu chadivina kathalallo denikaina chaduvukuntu velladame thappa. reply ivvalaedu. ivvali anipincha ledu. Feedback nachchakapote ila istunna ani emi anukoku.
intavaraku rasina verevalla reviews nenu chudakunda ne review istunna....
ee kathalo matram edo different undi. daanigurinchi feature lo chuddam.

enti basu e story? ekkadaina jarigina katha na? or only creativity na ? naku telisi konta real story kuda undi anukuntunna.


hero character lo enti inni variations:
1. recent cinema love stories lo Arjun reddy and Geetha govindam story kanna strong ga undi.
2. evaru em chebte ala influence ipothadu
3. evaritho ela matladali teleedu(less common sense)
4. mondigatham
5. sonthaga alochinchaledu
6. sontaga alochinchi manchi ga maare avakasham kanabadatam ledu.
7. avamanalu chala ekkuva paddadu
8. dhookudu ekkuva, enta mataina anestadu. kasta maturity unte baguntundi last ki
9. stage by stage, prathi distubance lonu vaadi character neechanmga marutundi migatavalla drushtilo. last ki emouddo chudali
10. ilanti vadu evarni cheskunna valla life spoil avutundi. he has to change his behaviour.
11. telugu cinema laga katha anta hero chuttune katha ekkuvaga tirugutundi.
12. mundulo sex kosam aaratam.
13. taruvatha effection undi and love undi
14. ipudu virakti kanabadutu undi (ipudu ilage undali)

konchem hidden twist lu clear cheyaledu. feature lo proper clarity untundo ledo.

kaani hero heroin character la ni baaga nalipesaru brother. vammo nenu inni variation chadivina naaku thala edola undi.


Feature expectation:
1. Hero, heroin ni kalapalante - May be feature lo hardest twist undochchu. ante past lo aaroju siddhu, harika lu trap chesi heroni edo chesi undochchu.
2. Inka feature lo hero tananta tane shiksha veskovali. pelli ki panikirakunda(ledante act chesi andariki duranga batakali). ledante vadilo marpu radu.
3. Intavaraku katha lo hero kungi podam varaku vachchindi, kani vadilo mapu sarigga kanabadatam ledu. ika mundu marpu vachchi andaru kalisipotharo ledante inka kungi poyi. shaswatham ga duram avutado.
4. naaku telisi meeru story ending lo hero /heroin /iddarni champestaremo anipistundi.
5. naaku telisi heroki maturity raanantha varaku vaadi konte panulu & chupulu aapukoledu.

Request:
1. heroin gunde pagala kunda chudandi veelu ite
2. e story only creativity ayi unte hero manchi ga marela chudandi
3. hero heroin lu kaneesam emotional ga daggaraite baguntundi

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Other Readers: Please dont insult me after checking my review. This review might gives good or bad opinion to anyone. But i would like to share my opinion with Story writer.

Story Writer: Expecting a proper reply if my review satisfies you..!
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Nice story...,, - by Praveen kumar - 14-11-2018, 11:21 AM
RE: భరత్ అనే నేను..... - by Cool Boy - 26-02-2019, 11:12 AM
RE: భరత్ అనే నేను..... - by Cool Boy - 27-02-2019, 10:05 AM
RE: భరత్ అనే నేను..... - by Cool Boy - 17-02-2019, 08:17 PM
RE: భరత్ అనే నేను..... - by Cool Boy - 21-02-2019, 10:04 AM
RE: భరత్ అనే నేను..... - by Cool Boy - 25-02-2019, 09:05 AM
RE: భరత్ అనే నేను..... - by Cool Boy - 25-02-2019, 12:12 PM
RE: భరత్ అనే నేను..... - by Cool Boy - 25-02-2019, 12:14 PM
RE: భరత్ అనే నేను..... - by Cool Boy - 02-03-2019, 11:15 AM
RE: భరత్ అనే నేను..... - by akhilapuku - 18-11-2019, 07:36 PM
RE: సారీ టీచర్..... {Index Available} - by Aryan1111 - 22-10-2021, 09:45 PM



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