[Palikamal]

Dosto main ek story likh lea mere yaar de khen te pehla main kde koi story ni likhi so ajj pehli bar kosis kr rya likhan di j vdia laggi ta jror comment krna ni na shi ... dhanvad

[Loverboyjassi]

22 story likhn laga badi wadia gal aa tu already story read kitia honia punjabi ithe feedback normal aundi aa so ena phela hi khyaal rakheo mostly har update te 4-5 reply hunde ne. So j start karn laga ta eh phela hi dekh lo

[Palikamal]

22 story likhn laga badi wadia gal aa tu already story read kitia honia punjabi ithe feedback normal aundi aa so ena phela hi khyaal rakheo mostly har update te 4-5 reply hunde ne. So j start karn laga ta eh phela  hi dekh lo

Y appa nu feedback tk koi chakr ni jis veer nu changi lagge oh comment krde jis nu na changi laggi oh na kre appa doje writers vangu eh ni dakhna v j comment ayunge ta hi agge likha ge m ta likhni ni c bt ek yaar mitar gl pai gya khenda likh y ta krke likh rye ah appa jihda update dena oh dena hiaa chae koi like kre chae na kre mnu pta apne varge vich vichre pad k swaad lain wale v hunde ah jihde ni comment kr sakhde ja krde .appa v pehla ida hi krde rye ah so sareya da maan rakha ge but story pehli bar kikh rya pta ni kida di hayu