[fudditerifruitvargi]

nava thread start karan lagga es vich 5 10update waliya kahniya hon giya. har kahani jah teh pure adultry jah pure Incest.

[Kudichod]

Good keep it up

[fudditerifruitvargi]

Kadra keemta (update 1) intro

"ahh ahhh edda hi, thoda hor zor naal, haannn, thoda tezz karo please, ahh hayeee, nahi nahi,, rukoo" simran raj jehda es vele usdi fudi vich paa ke chod riha si da pani nikal janda nu kehndi "ki gal kiha si ke ruk jao thoda time, mainu hor chahida si thoda time haale"
Raj usdi fudi vicho lann bahar kad naal hi lama painda hoya "ki gal, jaan hor chudna tu, kinna chod lao, teri agg pata nahi kidda di, thandi nahi hundi"
simran thode gusse vich "agg thandi ho jani si, tuc thoda time hor kar dinde, rukiya nahi si janda"
raj simran nu baaha vich lainde hoye "gusse kyun hundi, thoda time ruk, dubara chod dinda tainu"
simran usdi baaha vicho bahar nikaldi hoyi apne godiya tak utaari slwar nu utte kardi hoyi "rehan deo, ajj tak bujhi tuhade kolo eh agg, jehda hun dubara karna tuc, chup karke sohn javo, main nahi kuch karna" simran raj val pith kar sohndi hoyi.
Duje din savere raj apne bed teh sutta hunda, Simran usnu jagaunde hoye "suno,  uth javo, 8 vaj gaye, paronthe bana ditte, cha vi bna ditti, tyaar ho ke kha leo, mein chaldi aa"
raj simran nu jehdi es vele soohe rang di kurti teh pajami vich hundi nu vekhde hoye "savere savere chali sehar vich kehar dhaun"
simran hasde hoye "kam teh chali aa, kehar dhaundi jis itte, oh teh sutta haale tayi, eh ni ke savere uth thoda bahut kam hi karwa deva"
simran ik vaar apde app nu sheeshe vich vekh ghar toh bahar nikal jandi eh.
simran apni car vich behndi hoyi ik vaar fer sheeshe vich vekh thodi jahi lipstik bag vicho kad laundi eh teh fer car start kar office val tur paindi eh
simran da ofic ghar toh koi 20 ku minute di drive teh si.
simran sehar deh ik bahut wadea ilake vich rehndi si teh ik consultancy agency vich kam kardi si
simran car parking kar apde ofic val tur paindi eh, teh ofic vich enter hunde hi oh kamal jo ke usdi bahut wadea dost eh, naal mildi hoyi "ki gal ajj mere naalo vi pehlay aa gayi, ghare kam ni si koi ki"
kamal hasdi hoyi "yaar eh teh delhi gaye hoye neh 3 dina layi, ghar vich kam hi koi nahi, eh hunde teh ah kar lao oh bana lao, eh nahi miliya, oh nahi miliya"
simran vi hasdi hoyi "chal tu kar kam l, mein vi vekha ki-ki siyapa eh ajj karan wala" 
simran apne cabin vich jandi eh teh koi adhe ghante baad ik munda jisdi haale college vich pardan di umar si, par ofic vich chah pani jah hor nikke nikke kam karda si osde cabin vich aa ke "madam tuhanu vadde sir bula tahe neh"
simran ik nazar os val mardi teh fer computer teh kuch type kardi hoyi "ok, naale cha vich khand thodi jiyada pavi, kal vaang feeki jahi nah bana devi"
teh simran apne cabin vicho bahar aa vadde saab deh ofic val tur paindi eh.
simran darwaje teh thoda dastak dindi teh andro awaz aundi eh " simran ajao"
"good morning sir, tuc bulaiya mainu"
simran ofic andar jah chair teh behndi hoyi
vadde sir ik 50 ku saal da insaan si jisda naam Rohan si, oh simran nu vekhde hoye usde mommiya nu scan karde hoye "haan, oh canada waliya files ajj final kar deo, main kal asi embassy bhejaniya neh"
simran muskraunde hoye apni chunni naal apne momme dhakdi hoyi "sir kuch teh tyaar neh, kal shaam tak hi tyaar ho sakdiya neh sariya teh"
rohan "hmm, theek aa par kal shaam tak final kar deo please, asi pehlay hi late aa"
simran uth ke bahar nu au di hoyi "sure sir"
teh rohan osdi jandi di hildi bund vekh sochda "saali kitni sundar hain, par ghass vi dhalne nahi deti"
simran apne cabin vich aa kursi teh behndi hoyi " saala tharaki, aane bahane bula lainda maini, ehnu kon smjhve ke esdi daal ethe nahi galni"
ofic khatam kar simran ofic deh naal hi market si vich kuch sabhjiya lain jandi eh, teh mandeer jehdi aundi hi kuriya tadan aa, har ik munde bande budde di nazar simran utte hi hundi eh
simran sabji leh jad 4 5 munde jehde ke saare hi 24 25 saala deh si kolo langdi eh teh ik comment karda "gajara layi jani aa ajj, kal mooliya layi si, pata nahi ki ki lendi eh"
simran jandi hoyi sochdi "saale shaklo bihaari lagde, punjabi pata nahi kidda boli jande, jehda dekho saala khaan nu painda, kon smjhave ehna nu ke ethe daal kise di nahi galni"

eh teh si simran di har roz di hi routine jehdi ke pichlay ik saal toh chal rahi si, 
hun simran vaare, simran kaur 5 foot 6+ inch lambi, kankwane rang di, tikhe nain nakash, 32c deh momme, 28 inch lakk teh 34 inch di bhari bund jehdi kteh gol hare bhare patt, umar 25 saal viah nu 2 saal ho gaye, mukdi gal jatti bahut sohni si, teh usda gharwala raj jehda ke 5 foot 9 inch lamba teh dekhan vich vi stheek thaak si par 5 inch deh lann naal jatti nu santoshat karna usde vass di gal nahi si

[DRAGON WOLF]

We want long stories. They are full of slow seductiveness.

[Anmol Sidhu]

ghaintt

[Ilovesinghni]

Kia bat a

[Sarpanch]

Bhut khoob kaim script lagdi a

[doonknightz]

bahut sohne.....wadiya plot lag riha hai story da.....
umeed hai es waar hor v maza aayega padan wich.....sohna likhde ho....
let see what happens in upcoming updates....
eagerly waiting..........

[fudditerifruitvargi]

kadra keemta (update 2)

ghare aa ke simran apna kitchen da kam khatam kar raj nu awaz mardi hoyi "dinner tyaar eh, ajao"
raj kamre vicho "oh mein kha aya si, dasiya teh si ke dost di party si"
simran vi hasde hoye kamre vich jandi hoyi "ahoo pata, mazak kardi si" teh bed teh behndi hoyi "kidda si party"
raj simran nu khich ke apne utte paunde hoye "party wadea si, tu dass ofic kidda riha" teh simran di gardan deh jeeb feran lag painda..
simran raj de sirr vich hath ferdi hoyi 'bass udda hi si jive roz hunda"
raj simran deh bulla nul chumde hoye usnu apne thale paunde hoye "ajj bahut dil kar riha chodan nu"
simran vi raj deh gal vich baaha pundi hoyi "tuhada karda kado nahi, par ajj vich nah chhadio, thandi kar deo"
raj simran di panty teh kacchi nu iko vaar vich godiya tak karde hoye "ajj nahi vich chhad da, poora swaad dena tainu" teh lann nu fudi vich paa dinda.
simran haale poori garam vi nahi hoyi hundi teh 1 mint vich raj di pichkari nikal jandi
teh simran raj val vekhde hoye "eh ki si, tuc teh kiha si, thandi karu ajj"
raj usde naal lama painde hoye "pata nahi jaan ajj control nahi hoya"
simran apni lower teh kachi utte karde hoye thoda talkhi naal "ahoo, pehlay teh bahut control hunda si jive tuhade kolo"
raj simran nu hath laun lagda, simran usde hath nu para kardi hoyi "sohn javo hun, hor nah gussa chadavo mainu please" teh raj val pith kar sohn jandi eh
raj usde pith naal jud deh hoye "ki gal gussa ho gayi" 
simran vi pyar naal apne app nu raj naal jod deh hoye "gussa ho ke kithe maru, rehna teh tuade naal hi aa"
raj simran deh 32c deh momme nu hath vich fad ke ghutt deh hoye "enna ban than ke jandi aa, kinne bihariya deh sine agg laundi honi"
simran vi raj deh hath utte hath rakh ghutdi hoyi "hayee thoda zor naal ghut deo, kyun jatti hun bihariya deh sine hi agg lau, punjabi marr gaye"
raj vi simran deh momme nu zor naal ghut deh hoye "teh punjabiya deh siney vich agg laundi eh fer tu"
simran kehan teh laggi si ke punjabiya deh kyun jatt marr gaye, par fer apni bund nu raj deh ferho chuke  khade  lann naal ragad deh hoye "ehnu agg launi aa mein teh" 
raj simran nu ghut ke jaffi paa lainda teh usdi lower lah usdi latt chuk lann nu fudi vich paunde hoye "agg lagg gayi ehnu teh, hun chod da tainu changi tarah"
simran vi jehdi es vele poori garam si raj deh lann da swaad lainde hoye "kar deo changi tarah, ahh jidda dil karda udda kar deo, main teh app kehndi tuc changi tarah karo"
raj lann di raftar vadhaunde hoye "tainu baniya hi rabb neh mere layi aa, kinna wadea feel hunda tainu chod ke"
simran vi raj deh hath nu momme teh ghutdi hoyi lann teh fudi nu kasdi hoyi "mainu vi wadea feel ho riha, haaaan bahut wadea, ajj changi tarah karo"
raj jisda chtan wala hunda "es ehsaas nu dasiya ni jah sakda simran" teh 2 halke halke jhatke marr pani chhad dinda
simran raj deh lann nu fudi vich pani chhad da mehsoos kar "tuc fer ni ruke, changi tarah kar teh dinde, main teh fer vich hi reh gayi"
raj simran di fudi vich lan kad osnu ghuma jaffi paunde hoye "simran yaar kidda di agg tere  vich jehdi shaant hi nahi hundi, 2 vaar chod lao bhave 3 vaar"
simran raj naal jud di hoyi "tuc thodi der hor ruk jande,mein thandi ho jana si"
raj simran deh bull chumde hoye "2 vaar nahi, 2 bande vi chodan,  teri agg tad vi ni shaant honi"
simran sharma ke raj nu jaffi paundi hoyi "bass kariya karo, kise di lod nahi, bass tuc thodi der hor ruk jande, chalo chhado, raat bahut ho gayi hun sohnde aa, kal chutti aa apni dova di, kam bahut neh ghar deh karan wale" kehndi hoyi raj nu chum ke akha band kar laindi eh
raj vi simran deh mathe nu chum "theek eh" bol ke simran nu ghut ke jaffi paa ke sohn janda eh
duje din savere simran kitchen da kam khatam kar dindi eh teh raj nu laundry vicho awaz mardi hoyi "bazaar jah aoo, hun fer movie dekhan vi jana, eve late nah kar deo"
simran neh ik tight blue legging teh light green half sleev top paya hunda teh kapde machine vicho kad rahi hundi eh teh raj room  vicho bahar aunde hoye "bass adhe ghante vich aya, fer chalde aa"
raj ghar toh bahar nikal janda
simran kapde leh chhat teh jandi eh teh kapde paunde hoye usdi nazar sahmane wale ghar di chhat jisdi chhat ke uhna deh ghar naal judi hundi eh teh paindi jithe ik munda os val pith karke khada hunda, simran nu pata si ke eh ghar rajiv uncle da si teh, simran di uhna naal changi bandi si par uhna da teh koi munda nahi, ik kudi si, jisda viah ho gaya si teh simran sochdi "eh kon eh" teh fer apne kapde paundi hoyi sochdi "koi hove, ki fark painda, aya hou koi rishtedaar"
simran khali balti chuk thale jandi eh teh oh munda jisda naam guri si ghum ke simran di chhat val vekhda teh usdi nazar turi jandi deh 34 deh hips teh patlay lakk nu vekh sochda "saala eh kehda bomb turi janda ethe, saala 4 din vich pata hi nahi lagga ke aand gwaand vich bomb chal rahe neh teh mein sochi jana saala ghar kiraye teh kithe ujaad vich leh liya"
simran paudi jehdi ghar deh andar wale pase nu si utar ke duji balati bhar dubara chhat teh aa jandi eh teh kapde paun lagdi teh vekhdi ke munday da mooh us deh ghar val hi aa teh osnu ignore kar pith kar kapde paun lagdi,
munda osde balti vicho kapde chukan layi kodi hon karan lagging vicho dove hips teh vich di tared nu vekhda hi reh janda teh sochda "saali kodi hoyi kiddi sohni lagdi eh, lagging deh vich di hi lann fudi vich dhak deva saali deh"
simran kapde pah ke jado mudan lagdi usdi nazar munday naal mildi teh usnu apni bund val jhakda vekh andro andri gussa jiha karan lagdi ke munda osnu smile kar dinda, simran gusse jihe vich nak chada thale utar jandi eh teh thale beh sochdi "eh kon aa gaya rajiv uncle deh ghar, saala kidda jhaki janda si, haaye meri pyaari sehali nu ghoorda si (simran apne bund teh hath ferdi sochdi), kon eh, kado aya, kinne din rahu, dass gwaandi eh, edda nahi ke saleeka rakhe, ke kive rishtedaari vich rehna, jo vi aa munda hain teh sohna" sochdi simran hass paindi eh.
raj vapis aa janda teh simran nu baithi vekh puchda "jaana nahi movie layi, edda hi baithi aa"
simran uth bathroom val turdi hoyi "5 mint vich auni aa, tuc wait karo"
simran 15 minta baad ik patla gulaabi jiha kameez jis vich kali bra jhatiya mardi lag rahi si, teh thale tang matching pajami, jehde patta da ubar bihar jo vi smajh lavo, poori tarah darsa rahe si.
raj simran nu vekhda hi reh janda, janani bhave usdi hi si,  par har vaar osda husan os nu mantar mughad kar dinda si, teh simran nu make up karda vekh "film  vekhan chali aa ke vich kam karan chali aa"
simran hasde hoye "please chup riha karo, tuhade naal chali aa, tuhanu nahi pata ki karan chali aa"
simran teh raj ghar toh bahar aa car vich car bahar hi kad deh neh ke sahmanio rajiv uhna nu rok lainda
raj  car da sheesha lauhnde hoye "hanji uncle, kive oh"
"main theek aa tu dass, bahut dina baad disiya, simran tu kidda putt"
"bass kam vich bshut busy rehnda uncle"
raj bolda teh naal hi simran vi jawab dindi "mein vi theek aa uncle"
"acha tuhade val aun lagga si mein, gal suno, suneeta kole munda hoya kal, ajj hi aye asi utho, khushi layi party aa chhotti jahi, tuc dova neh auna, (simran val vekhde hoye) koi bahana nahi 6vaje tak aa javi ghar, tainu bshane banaun di bahut addat eh, bilkul suneeta vaang" rajiv raj teh simran nu bolda
"ji uncle aa javangay" raj jawab dinda.
teh rajiv nu bye bol gaddi ghar deh nere jehra nava multiplex khilya si val gaddi paa dinda
gaddi nu park kar lift rahi duje floor jithe ke tickets mildiya neh, uthe jande neh, teh raj line vich lag janda ticket lain layi, jehda ke lag-bhag khali hi hunda
raj ticketa leh simran kole aunde hoye, usnu cherde hoye "enni ban-than ke ayi, koi kadar paun wala nahi miliya"
simran vi hasde hoye "bahutiya galla nah maro, teh chalo pehlay hi late aa" teh ik vaar sahmane cornor val vekh jithe 4-5 munday khade si jehde simran nu hi vekh ke galla kar rahe si.
simran raj naal turde sochdi "kive vekhde si, mainu vi vekh vekh pata nahi ki galla kar rahe si, leh pata wali ki gal luche jihe luchiya galla hi kar rahe hongay, hor umeed vi ki kiti jah sakdi"
"movie bahut bore aa" sahmne parde teh chal rahi dabaang 3 nu vekhdi hoyi simran boldi eh "chalo utho chalde aa, mainu teh neend aun lag payi"
raj simran val vekjde hoye "tainu pata salman mainu kinna pasand aa, poori vekh chalde aa"
"mainu pasand nahi, tuhade kehan teh vekhan aa gayi, hun please chalo" simran tarla jiha marr boldi teh raj us naal uth bahar aa janda. car parking val jande hoye "khana kuch tu"
simran "nahi ghar chalde, rajiv uncle neh vi buliya eh, thoda bahut koi kam karwa dindi aunty naal"
raj hasde hoye "theek aa, udda vi uncle tainu bol hi rahe si ke bahane bahut banundi eh, ajj saare ulambhe lah dayi"
teh dove galla karde ghar aa jande neh
raj car vicho utarde hoye "simran tu edda kar jeh jana rajiv uncle val teh chal jah, mein baad vich aunda, tu teh kam karwauna mein ki karna uthe baithe neh"
simran hasde hoye "uhna naal nahi teh mere naal karwa deo kuch, kamchor jihe, acha mein chaldi tuc aa jao thode time nu"
teh simran rajiv uncle  deh ghar val tur paindi eh teh buha khula hunda teh sidha andar jah ke kitchen vich chale jandi eh

rajiv di gharwali jehdi ke 55 ku saal di si teh naam rani si jehdi ke pakode bna rahi si nu bulaunde hoye " aunty ji vadhaiya hon, nani ban gaye tuc"
rani hasdi hoyi "tu vi vadh ni dheeye, aa hi gayi tu, chal ah pakode bana deh mein, sabji cut dindi aa, jiyada nah pakavi, baad vich vi jado sabh neh auna, uddo dubara ik var fer kadahi vicho kadneh neh"
simran hasde hoye " nah chah nah pani, aunde nu hi kam teh lah deo"
rani hasdi hoyi "tera hi ghar aa dheeiye, jo dil karda kha pee leh, eh poochiya tainu pata mere toh hundiya nahi"
kehnde hoye rani rasoi vich duji self jithe sabjhiya payiya si nu chuk ke dhoan lagdi eh
simran pakode kad rahi si, teh rani sabjhi dhondi hoyi "veh mundiya kithe reh gaya, cut hoye ke nahi gandhe"
"bass 2 mint aunty ji, cut ditte" baharo awaz aundi eh
rani jawab vich "jaldi kar, fer tu bazzaro barfi vi liyuni aa"
"oh teh uncle leh aye si, dasiya nu uhna tuhanu" baharo awaz aundi eh
"nah mainu ni pata putt, bul gaye hone" rani jawab dindi
simran pakode kad ke rani nu " aunty ji eh teh kad ditte hor ki karna
"sabji dhar ni dheeye, oh piya cooker chuk leh" rani simran nu boldi teh fer bahar val mooh kar "veh leh aa hun apde lagdiya nu, sabji dharni aa"
"aa gaya aunty" teh munda darwaje kole aa janda eh, simran jisda mooh darwaje val hi hunda, darwaje utte khade munde nu vekhdi, jehda 6 foot da, chauri kad kaathi, teh jisneh es vele ik kaccha jeda godiya tak hunda teh utte chhiti tight  t shirt payi hundi, jis vicho usdi chauri chhati da pata lag riha si, halka gora rang, clean shave si munda,  umar simran deh nal di hi si, 26 saal teh raj naalo dedh ku saal ghat, square cut vich kate hoye vaal, simran osnu ik tik vekh rahi si bhave kuch seconds layi teh fer munda vi simran nu sirr toh paira tak changi tarah vekh smile kar dinda, simran bina kise expression toh os val pith kar laindi eh.
"ah fado cut ditte" guri neh simran di ubari hoyi bund nu vekhde neh kiha
teh rani nu piyaz fada dinda
"jah jaa ke naha dho ke kapde badal leh, guest aun wale hone" rani munde nu boldi
"ji aunty" bol munda chala janda
teh apne kamre vich jah ke kapde chuk sidha bathroom vich chala janda
bathroom vich nanga ho nahunde hoye apne lann nu fad oh simran vaare sochda "saali hun teh muth maari si, tu fer khada ho jah, tera vi ki kasooor, saali bomb hi aa poori, uddo changi tarah face ni disiya si, par eh teh vaadi vaadi heroine nu maat paundi eh, kiine sohna rang roop aa, momme kive saali deh kase si suit vich, bhainchod ghut ke marne dass, thoda khula suit paa lave banda" apne hath nu lann toh hataunde hoye "bhainchod fer muth vajj jani" teh nahun lag painda
simran rasoi vich ghobi di sabhji banaunde hoye hune hune hoyi ghatna vaare soch rahi si "kidda halke kutte vaang biter biter vekh riha si, udda hain sohna munda, pata nahi rajiv uncle uhna varga teh lagda nahi, eh kidda deh teh oh kinna takda teh sohna eh, chhad mein ki laina" teh rani nu boldi "aunty sabji teh tyaar aa, roti vi lah layiye"
"nahi dheeiye mein pehlay hi pooriya lah layiya si"
es vele darwaje teh dastak hundi teh rani vekhdi ke aand gwaand deh 10-15  ku bande jananiya aa gayiya si teh naal bache vi si
rani sabh nu mil ke uhna nu drawing room vich bithaunde hoye rasoi vich aa ke "simran putt tu vi beh mein, pakode banundi a"
simran nahi tuc baitho mein bna dindi aa.
ese vele munda rasoi kole aunde hoye "aunty ji koi kam teh dasso"
rani "tu edda kar pehlay teh aa coka fda aa sabh nu, fer cha teh baki saman vi dena eh"
"ji aunty ji" kehnde hoye oh glassa naal bhari plate leh bahar chala janda
ese vele rajiv ghar aa janda, usde hath vich kuch whisky di bootla hundiya teh rani nu kehnda "aa gaye sare" 
"hanji bass hune aye, coka ditta, hun cha pani tyaar kar rahe aa"
"mein kiha, sabh teh khan peen wale neh, cha choo rehan deh tu kudiya nu teh apni saheliya layi bana deh, bandiya nu rehan deh, teh aa chiken fad pehlay thode pakode shakode leh avi, teh thoda time nu eh chicken deh davi, 2 4 koliya vich paa ke" rajiv rani nu bolda
simran val vekh "putt raj aa gaya"
simran rajiv nu vekh deh hoye "nahi ji haale teh nahi aye, mein call kar dini aa hune aa jaan gay" keh di hoyi mobile chuk number milaun lag paindi eh
rajiv drawing room vich jaa sabh nu milde hoye teh fer kudiya teh auntiya nu "tuc edda karo udar duje room vich beh jao, cha pani peo apdi aunty naal galla maro, asi apniya galla baata marr lainde aa"
teh eh sun surunder, jehdi ke 50 55 ku saal di si ravi nu tichhar karde hoye "pata bhaji tuc kehdiya galla karniya, sooraj teh dubb lain dinde"
rajiv vi hasde hoye "sooraj vi dubb jana 7 teh vaj chale hor 10 minta nu"
rajiv bandiya vich behnde hoye "mitro ajj khushi bahut aa kasar reh nah jave koi" teh kole khade munday nu "guri, khada ki aa payi, jah leh aa rasoi vich payiya bottla, teh soda"
guri rasoi vich aa bottla chukde hoye rani nu kehnda "aunty ji, khan layi paa deo, uncle mangwa rahe"  
"thhek aa putt, (bootla val ishara karde hoye)tu ahh ghar-fookni nu teh fada ah pehlay" rani guri nu jawab dindi
putt aa pakode teh thoda teh ik koli vich eh chicken rakh paa deh, mein ayi 2 minta vich" kehndi hoyi duje kamre val tur paindi eh jithe sabh jananiya teh bache baithe si

[Gillsaab13]

Suoerb update veere

Teri kahani pyar jo xossip te chldi c hje tk yaad aa

Bhtt sohna likhde o j ho skeya ta oh kahani v jrur restart kreyoo

Bki waiting for next veere

[Sarpanch]

Wow simran dekhde aakhir kis agge pingaldi a....intresting

[Neo_]

Kainth update bro. Nice build up

[fudditerifruitvargi]

kadra keemta update 3

guri kitchen vich aunde hoye ruk ke thoda time simran di pith teh bund nu vekhda teh usde clip lah khule vaal jehde usdi hip line toh 2 ku inch utte mukde vaal nu vekhda hoya "oh uncle ji khan wala saman mangwa rahe neh"
simran jawab dindi hoyi "ji, ik mint bass"
guri simran deh kole aa us deh bilkul naal khad deh hoye "koi help karwava"
simran guri deh val vekh "nahi, bass paun laggi aa"
guri simran deh bulla nu jehde ke lipstick karke halke lal si, vekhde hoye "tuhada naam ki eh"
simran pakode teh chicken plate vich paa guri nu fadaunde hoye "simran, ah lavo" 
guri simran di akha vich vekhde hoye "mein guri" teh smile kar utho chala janda
peg da daur chal riha hunda teh raj vi aa janda teh raj guri deh kole beh janda.
simran jannaniya teh bachiya nu cha teh snacks den jandi teh wapis aundi hoyi vekhdi ke raj teh guri hass hass galla kar rahe hunde
simran mann vich "kidda lagga raj naal, raj ni ki pata thode time pehay kidda ghoor riha si mainu"
ose vele raj rasoyi vich aunda teh simran nu "chiken paa deh 2 3 koliya vich"
simran hasde hoye "suru ho gaye, mauka chahida tuhanu naale aa uncle deh relative naal, nave bihari jihenaal bahut jaan pehchaan ho gayi tuhadi, edda gal kar rahe jive pata nahi kado deh jande ik duje nu"
raj "oh uncle da koi reltive nahi, kirayedaar aa, ethe job layi aya patiale toh, naale bihari nahi jatt aa, gurjot singh"
"jo vi aa hai, teh jaldi khatam karo, ghar chalde aa" simran kuch sochdi hoyi boli
teh tray vich 4 koliya paa raj nu fada dindi eh
raj tray fad jande hoye "chalde aa, pehlay baki loka nu vi teh jaan deh, fer chalde aa"
15 ku minta baad jado simran vi baki kuriya teh jananiya naal baithi hundi eh, teh kanna vich gaane di awaz paindi eh 
teh rajiv uhna deh kamre vich aunde hoye "thoda nach gaa lao, khushi di gal aa, nana ban gaya mein"
teh saare ghar deh vich aa jande neh teh mil ke nachan lag painde neh
simran side teh baithi mobile teh kuch kar rahi hundi teh rani mobile hath vicho kho ke "dheeye nach tap leh, ke aunty di khushi vich shamil nahi hona" teh simran deh mobile nu sofe teh hi rakh simran n naal leh jandi eh.
guri jehda simran nu hi vekh riha si sofe teh behnde hoye simran deh mobile toh jehda lock nahi hunda, toh apne number teh miss call marr lainda.
rajiv jehda nach riha si "guri sofe teh ki karda baitha, edar aa jah"
simran kole nach rahi si sofe val vekhdi teh osde hath vich apna mobile vekh hairaan hundi par chup chap nachan lag paindi
guri vi simran deh mobile nu sofe teh rakh nachan layi vich aa janda
guri teh simran kole kole nach rahe si
teh haal chhota hon karan oh kade kade bilkul simran deh kole ho janda eh.
simran nu vi guri di har harkat nu note kar rahi si teh haal chhota hon karan kade kade oh guri deh app nere ho jandi eh, so normal smajh kuch jiyada dhiyaan nahi dindi
guri nachde hoye rajiv nu "uncle mein gaana chamge kar deva"
rajiv "pucchan wali gal aa putt, jehda dil karda lah leh"
guri apne mobile teh gaana change kar dinda jehda ke home theater naal connect hunda teh guri gaana lah dinda "kuriye ni tere brown rang neh, munde patt teh ni sare mere town deh"
teh simran jehdi gaana chalan teh guri val vekh rahi si, nu guri apna mooh band kar bulla teh jeeb fer sexc ishara karda
jisnu vekh simran deh mukh teh gussa  jiha aa janda teh apna mooh duji side kar nachan lag paindi eh
raj simran deh kole ho nach riha si teh guri simran deh pichhe ho nach riha si, mauka milde hi simran di pith nu hath naal chhoh lainda eh, simran jidda hi picche vekhdi guri usnu akh marr dinda

simran gusse vich mooh jiha bna teh fer mooh duji pase kar ke muskra nachan lag paindi eh 
jidda hi gaana mukda teh rani "bass bahut ho gaya, hun roti kha lavo" teh ese vele guri simran deh ik chittar nu fad ghutt dinda teh simran gusse vich os kolo dur ho jandi eh
bande mud daru peen lagde teh jananiya roti khan lagdiya neh teh kha apde apde ghar val tur paindiya neh
"bass karo hun, roti leh ava"rani drawing room vich jah boldi
"mein aunda aunty ji" kehnde hoye guri khada ho janda teh rani pichhe tur painda
"ah guri nu roti fada deh simran, mein ayi 1 mint vich" kehndi hoyi rani bathroom val tur paindi eh
guri kitch vich jah ke tray chukde hoye "sorry ji, oh nachde pata nahi lagga"
simran guri val vekhdi par boldi kuch nahi
guri tray nu drwaing room vich khali kar mud kitchen vich aa ke "tuc maaf ni kita mainu" tray vich koliya rakhdi simran nu guri puchda
simran bina guri val vekhe "maafi vali koi gal hain, edda di ghatiya harkat layi"
guri masoom jihe bande hoye "sorry keh teh ditta,  hun dasso kive bola"
simran tray vich samaan rakhdi hoyi "bass karo, ghatiya harkata mainu pasand nahi"
"maafi teh har gall di hundi, maaf karan wale da dil vadda chahida," teh simran di hikk nu vekhde hoye "tuhada dil teh udda vi bahut vadda eh"
simran guri di nazar nu fad, ignore kardi hoyi tray fadaundi hoyi "ah lavo, teh mere naal gal karan di lod nahi"
 raj simran toh tray fad deh hoye usde hath nu chhoh lainda teh jande hoye "kar deo maaf vadde dil walio",
guri dei gal teh halka jiha simran hass paindi eh teh sochdi "kutta jinna sohna, unni sohniya galla karda teh unni gandiya galla, ganda"
guri tray khali kar mud kitchen vich aunde hoye "maaf kita ke nahi"
"simran bhande savere sambh lau mein, dhak gayi koi help chahidi ke mei  java soan dheeye, sona teh ki ah skfe teh behndi aa" rani kitchen deh darwaje toh boldi
"nahi ji, tuc karo araam, kam teh muk gaya" simran jawab dindi
rani jande hi "jatt enniya maafiya kise toh nahi mangda, hun maaf kar deo" apne kan fade hoye bolda
simran "teh jatt sabh naal edda di ghatiya harkata karde, main koi maaf nahi karna, please"
guri ik vaar drawing room vich gera maar vekhda ke sabh roti kha rahe teh kitchen vich aa ke simran kole khad "hun maaf kar deo"
simran "please jao, main nahi karna"

raj simran nu fad jaffi paa lainda teh usde bulla nu bulla vich kaid karde hoye "maafi nahi jeh milni, teh galati teh changi tarah kar lava" teh usde bulla nu choosan lagda
simran chutan di koshish kardi eh par 6 foot deh jatt agay ki zor chalda usda teh guri usde ik chittar nu hath vich fad ke teh duje naal usde lakk nu fad bull toh bull ik pal layi hataunde hoye usdi akha vich vekh "jatt neh dhaka nahi kita kade, sorry" bol mud osde bull choosan lagda
simran osde modiya teh muke mardi teh guri chiitar nu chhad simran deh momme nu fad ke zor naal ghut dinda
enni zor naal momma ghute jaan naal simran deh sareer vich dard teh maje di ik lehar uthadi eh teh oh zor naal guri deh mode teh muka mardi eh
"guri, payi ah table khali kar, samb bhande" rajiv di awaz aundi eh
guri simran deh bull chhad "aya uncle ji"
rajiv nu jawab deh simran nu chhadan toh pehlay momme nu 3-4vaar poori zor nal napp dinda jive purane tyme vich dojhi apde horon nu ghutde si, teh simran dand ghut dard nu bardashat kar jandi eh, teh guri simran di akha vich dekh "sorry ji" kehnde hoye guri kitchen vicho chala janda eh. 
teh simran self naal lag apne momme nu sehlaundi hoyiaukhe aukhe sah laindi hoyi "kinna ganda eh, dubara ehde nere ni lagna, raj nu dasdi jo hoya, uncle nu vi shikayat karu, par dassu ki, ke mainu jaffi pa bull choos laye, momma ghut ditta, kinni zor naal ghutiya, hayye jaan hi kad ditti si meri teh"
guri tray vich khali plata rakhda hunda teh raj vi naal help karwaunde hoye kitchen vich aa janda teh simran nu  "ki sochi jani aa,  party muk gayi, chalo chaliye"
simran raj val vekhde hoye "chalo chaliye, mein aunty nu mil lava" simran rasoi vicho raj teh guri kolo langhdi hoyi guri val vekhde boli
raj guri naal hath milaunde hoye "avha bhara fer milde, chalde hun"
guri vi hath milaunde hoye "jaroor veere"
simran rani kole jah "aunty ji,  chaldi mein, fer auni kise din"
"jaroor dheehe,  tera hi ghar aa" simran deh sirr teh hath ferdi hoyi boli
simran rasoi val aundi "chaliye ji"
raj "haan haan, chal, ok guri fer milde" kehnda hoya rasoi toh bahar nu nikal painda, ose vele guri simran nu vekh akh marr dinda, teh simran mooh ghuma raj naal ghar val tur paindi eh
ghar puj raj kamre vich jande hoye "bahut thak gaya ajj"
simran apni lower teh ik khuli jahi tshirt chuk bathroom val jandi hoyi "mein vi bahut dhak gayi "teh bathroom vich varh jandi eh
apna suit utar jad simran bra kholdi teh lal hoye momme nu vekhdi hoyi "kidda ghutiya gande jihe neh, enni zor naal ghuti da, ghuti da eh ki sochi jani aa, osdi himmat kive hoyi mere gubariya nu ghutan di ganda nah hove teh" teh tshirt teh lower paa kamre vich aa jandi eh

simran raj deh naal bed teh lami painde hoye "party kive si"
raj simran nu jaffi paunde hoye "bahut sohni si"
raj siman deh bull chumde hoye "neend bahut ayi, good night"
simran jehdi ke guri vaare gal karan di soch rahi si, vi "good night"  bol sohn di koshish kardi par osde mann vich guri di hi gal chal rahi si.
duje din simran tyaar ho guri nu utha roz vaang hi office layi tur paindi eh teh jidda hi gate toh car bahar kad di eh sahmane rajiv deh ghar guri gate teh khalota hunda
guri ase pase vekh simran hi karda teh simran mooh bna car drive kar office nu chale jandi eh. shaami vi guri simran deh aun teh gate utte hi khalota hunda. 


4 ku din edda hi chalda, teh 4 dina baad raati 

[DRAGON WOLF]

Write long story. The short stories sometimes lack characterisation and sex appeal.

[The Blue Prince]

Write long story. The short stories sometimes lack characterisation and sex appeal.

There is no problem in writing short stories. I have myself written many short stories. There is no restriction of characterisation and sex appeal in them. Moreover every person has different taste, so I would request the writer to continue writing short stories.

[Sunny12]

update plz

[Terra_daddy]

Att story

[Dhana amli]

Ghaint story...keep writing

[Kamboj saab]

Ghaint story

[Neo_]

Bahut achhe veer. Nazaara lya ditaa...