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Great, hope she is a buxom woman. There was a classic "mom treatment at hands of commoners" but was unfortunately left unfinished by its author.
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Eager to know what happened then....
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wow. gr8 start man. please continue
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Excellent series. Eagerly waiting in anticipation for the next update.
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Aslam will now blackmail her to sex with him......waiting.....
Waiting.........
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You are extremely talented with your narration. Great going. By the way, a small request from me. Can you have phone conversations with Aslam and Praveena in which Aslam forces her to talk dirty
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Would be great if you could make it third person instead.of first. Also describe her figure more as in huge boobs, big round ass etc. Currently, she seems to be an easy lay, make it more reluctant.
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(16-08-2020, 02:19 AM)Newboy Wrote: You are extremely talented with your narration. Great going. By the way, a small request from me. Can you have phone conversations with Aslam and Praveena in which Aslam forces her to talk dirty
Yes.
Also, if Aslam could talk dirty about her whole family as he does her
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Your writing style is and details is excellent. Super erotic. Just don't make it monotonous with sex between one type of male, let her enjoys rough sex from different type of male, lots of male.
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Your writing style is great, erotic, with needed details. Kindly don't make this story monotonous with sex between only one type of male. Kindly let your heroine have rough sex from different types of male, lots of male.