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Is kahani ko del kar diya laga ab intrest nahi hai... Isi kahani ko comman banaonga shadi shuda ladki ki par jo kahani ko socha hai waise hi banaonga
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Kahani chal na pane ki wazah se band kar ke new pari se karonga
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Ye kahani laga chal nahi payegi isiliye mai yaha kuch carecter ka badlae kar raha ho yaha mai dono ko devrami jhethani bana kar longa
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Lao bhai devrani jhethani ko ab wo khani bhi thk thi pr apne delete kr di
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I think ye story ko start hone mein kuch time baaqi hai
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Kam se kam thoda start up toh dedo