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erotic/adultery/incest thriller or a normal thriller story?
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Fir of all congratulations for new story.....
I think story bahut seductive kuch new style me likhna...
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Bohot achi suruvaat hai bhai kahani kuch alag type ki interesting lag rhi Or apki pehli update bohot achi lagi aage ki updates ka intezaar rhega Or ummeed karta hu ki aapki kahani me thriller k sath sath adultery bhi padhne ko mile agle update ka intezaar hai jaldi dena update
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Acchi story hai. Good writing
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बहुत ही शानदार शुरूवात है |
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Update dijiye. Good start.Lalaji suspense and mystery woman.
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Bohat he lajawab update hai bhai padh k maja aa gya aap bohat mast likh rhe ho update ko bhi bohat ache se arrange kr dete ho jo padhne me acha dikhta bhi or lgta bhi hai or ek ek choti se choti detail bhi aap ne likhi hai woh padh kr visualize karne me aasaani hoti ese jese padh nhi rha hu dekh rha hu sb..Sunita Gagan-Pur me nayi nayi aayi hai or lagta hai ye apni kahani ki heroine hai kavya ka kya role hai or ushka sunita ki ish nhi gaav ki life me kya role hoga ye janne ka intezar rhega or HAWA k sath sath mujhe bhi sunita ke lalaji ki dukaan par aane ka intezar hai aap ish intzaar ko jada lamba na kre bhai
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Keep it up ? adding pic makes story more fantasing.
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Bro nice please add some dirty character