[LODY BHAI]

Dosto aajtak mai bahut saari story padhta aaya hu , Lekin ab mai ek story likhna chahta hu jo meri pahli kahani hone wali hai.....Isliye mai aap sab se nivedan karta hu ki aap mujhe jaldi se jaldi comment karke apni apni raay bhejiye aur bataiye ki aap kaisi Story padhna pasand karege.....




Aap mujhe aaj raat 10 baje tak comment karke bata sakte hai ki story kaisi likhu uske baad mai apne hisaab se story likhuga......

[Transformers]

Dosto aajtak mai bahut saari story padhta aaya hu , Lekin ab mai ek story likhna chahta hu jo meri pahli kahani hone wali hai.....Isliye mai aap sab se nivedan karta hu ki aap mujhe jaldi se jaldi comment karke apni apni raay bhejiye aur bataiye ki aap kaisi Story padhna pasand karege.....




Aap mujhe aaj raat 10 baje tak comment karke bata sakte hai ki story kaisi likhu uske baad mai apne hisaab se story likhuga......

Bhai aap pahli story likhne ja rahe ho ye jaan kar achha laga lekin mai aapko bata du ki aap bhi meri ya baaki ke writer ki tarah story ko beech me hi chhod doge kyoki yaha koi bhi reader support nahi karta hai


Sab story pad ke chale jaate hai lekin na to koi like karta hai aur na hi koi story ke baare me comment karke apni raay bhejta hai


Best Of Luck For Your First Story.

               

[dannyboy0755]

ek beta jo apni maa ko shareef samajhta tha wo usko randi ki tarah jawan ladke se chudta hua dekhe

[Rajaalfa]

aunty ki story

[Vihaan]

Bhai aap pahli story likhne ja rahe ho ye jaan kar achha laga lekin mai aapko bata du ki aap bhi meri ya baaki ke writer ki tarah story ko beech me hi chhod doge kyoki yaha koi bhi reader support nahi karta hai


Sab story pad ke chale jaate hai lekin na to koi like karta hai aur na hi koi story ke baare me comment karke apni raay bhejta hai


Best Of Luck For Your First Story.

               

Bhai aapne 2 update dekar update dena bnd kr diya ye toh galat baat hai or ish site pr members se jada toh guest viewers visit karte hai to comments toh kam aayenge yeh apki sahi baat hai pr agr kuch readers bhi appreciate kr rhe hai toh apko unke liye toh story continue karni chahiye

[Kishore12]

Low class men aur bade ghar ki aurat ki story likko bro

[Faizi610]

Adultery interfaith low class men and Hot white creamy sexy ameer wife

[Faizi610]

Interfaith kaise low class men ki tadp hot ameer wife k liye hoti hai ek hot shareeef ameer wife k low class lund ka swad batado kaise kaise aake badke sharif se rand banti hai

[Faizi610]

Story mein gif pics add kr k likhana

[amzad2004]

Cuckold mom-son.

[LODY BHAI]

Bhai aap pahli story likhne ja rahe ho ye jaan kar achha laga lekin mai aapko bata du ki aap bhi meri ya baaki ke writer ki tarah story ko beech me hi chhod doge kyoki yaha koi bhi reader support nahi karta hai


Sab story pad ke chale jaate hai lekin na to koi like karta hai aur na hi koi story ke baare me comment karke apni raay bhejta hai


Best Of Luck For Your First Story.

               

Bahut Bahut dhanyawad bhai aapka...Comment karne ke liye

Ab bhai maine story likhne ke liye bol diya hai to ek story to likhne wala hu , uske baad dekhne agar achha response mila to aage aur likhege......

[LODY BHAI]

aunty ki story

Ok Thanks Bhai...Mai kosis karta hu

[LODY BHAI]

Story mein gif pics add kr k likhana

ok Bhai story ke hisaab se mujhe jaise pics aur gif milege mai add kar dunga...


Thanks

[LODY BHAI]

To Dosto aap sab ne jo sujhav diye uske liye bahut bahut dhnywad...


Mujhe jyadatar request aayi hai ki aap aisi story likho jisme ek low class aadmi , bade ghar ki aurato ko apne jaal me fasata hai....


Lekin saath hi mujhe ek reader ka private message bhi aaya aur usne jo sujhav diya vo mujhe bahut jyada achha laga .

To ab mai aapke liye aisi story lekar aauga jisko padhkar aapka rom rom hil jaayega aur story padte samay aap bass apna lund pakadkar hi baithe rahoge aur jab tak update nahi milega aap aage hone wali ghatna ke baare ne sochoge....


Mai thodi der me Story ka Title batane waala hu....


Thanks

[Transformers]

To Dosto aap sab ne jo sujhav diye uske liye bahut bahut dhnywad...


Mujhe jyadatar request aayi hai ki aap aisi story likho jisme ek low class aadmi , bade ghar ki aurato ko apne jaal me fasata hai....


Lekin saath hi mujhe ek reader ka private message bhi aaya aur usne jo sujhav diya vo mujhe bahut jyada achha laga .

To ab mai aapke liye aisi story lekar aauga jisko padhkar aapka rom rom hil jaayega aur story padte samay aap bass apna lund pakadkar hi baithe rahoge aur jab tak update nahi milega aap aage hone wali ghatna ke baare ne sochoge....


Mai thodi der me Story ka Title batane waala hu....


Thanks

Jaldi karo bhai

[Newdevil]

Bhai aap pahli story likhne ja rahe ho ye jaan kar achha laga lekin mai aapko bata du ki aap bhi meri ya baaki ke writer ki tarah story ko beech me hi chhod doge kyoki yaha koi bhi reader support nahi karta hai


Sab story pad ke chale jaate hai lekin na to koi like karta hai aur na hi koi story ke baare me comment karke apni raay bhejta hai


Best Of Luck For Your First Story.

               

I agreed with you... Yahan par aisa hi hota hai... Meri 2 stories chal rahi hai bit readers ka support bahut kam hai... First story to super flop gai hai... Readers aise behave karte hai jaise ke story reading ke baad unko paisa dena padega... Hum new writer apna time nikaal kar long long update dete hai aur ye readers se ek do line ke comments tak nahi hote... 

[LODY BHAI]

To Dosto mai ab kahani ki suruaat karne jaa raha hu , mera aapse nivedan hai ki agar kahani achhi lage to like aur comment jaroor kar dena.....



Aapke like aur comment se mujhe bahut khusi hogi....







Story Name - " Vasant-Vihaar "







                                                                             

[Vihaan]

Pehle update ka intezaar hai.. Story Adultery ya Incest hai ye toh mention kar do bhai

[LODY BHAI]

Pehle update ka intezaar hai.. Story Adultery ya Incest hai ye toh mention kar do bhai

Bhai mai abhi nahi bata sakta ki story kaisi hai agar maine vo mention kar diya to story ka poora romanch khatam ho jaayega.....Abhi kewal aap pahle update ka luft uthaiye aur kahani ke aage badne ka intezaar kariye


THANKS 

[LODY BHAI]

...................Vasant - Vihar.................









Sardiyan khatam hoke vasant ritu suru ho gayi thi.....pedo ke patto ka rang peela ho chuka tha....ab in patto ke jhadne ki baari aa chuki thi.....naye patte aur nayi kaliyan phir se pedo ko naya jeevan dena suru karne waale the....




Vasant ritu ka mahol hi alag tha....charo taraf koyal ke gunjne aur Pakshiyo ki chahchahat ki madhur aavaj aa rahi thi.....




Aise hi subah ke samay ek gaav " Maan-Pur " riyasat me ek badi si aalisaan haweli par kuch 15-20 logo ki bheed jama ho gayi thi aur vo sabhi kisi baat ko lekar paresaan lag rahe the....





HAWELI KA NAAM - " VASANT VIHAR "




Kuch der khade rahne ke baad haweli se ek 55-60 saal ka aadmi kurta pajama pahankar bahar aaya.....uske bahar aate hi sab logo ne jhuk-kar uska aadar kiya...aur unke muh se nikla - pranaam Thakur Shahab....




Thakur ne kaha - Pranaam bhaiyon.....tum sab bade chintit lag rahe ho.....batao kaise itni subah subah yaha haweli par aane ka kast kiya.....




Ek aadmi ne kaha - thakur sahab aapko to pata hi hai kuch dino se gaav me bahut si choriyan ho rahi hai....aaj raat phir se ek chori ho gayi hai......hume to kuch samjh nahi aa raha thakur sahab ki gaav me ye sab kya ho raha hai ab aap hi iska kuch hal nikal sakte hai.....




Thakur ne kuch socha aur kaha - tum logo ne security officer station jaakar Daroga se baat ki kya....




Ek aadmi bola - thakur shahab 2-3 baar daroga ko shikayat bata chuke hai lekin vo kuch kar hi nahi raha.....humse bolta hai tum ghar jaao mai sab dekh lunga...lekin usne kuch kiya nahi abhi tak...




Ye baat sunkar Thakur gusse me aa jaata hai aur bolta hai - us daroga ki ye himmat....Thakur Indrajeet Singh ke gaav me choriya ho rahi hai aur vo kuch kar nahi raha.....hum abhi us daroga ki khabar lete hai.....




Ye baat bolkar Thakur Indrajeet Singh andar haweli me jaakar ek tauliya laata hai aur use apne kandhe par taank-kar jor se aavaj maarta hai - Bheema....Bheema.....o Bheema jaldi se gaadi taiyaar kar daroga se milne jaana hai.....




Thakur Indrajeet Singh ki aavaj sunkar ek aadmi jiski umra lagbhag 42-45 saal hogi haweli ke peeche se bhagta hua aata hai aur jaldi se jaakar gaadi nikalta hai.....




Thakur Indrajeet Singh bade gusse me lag raha tha....usko gusse me dekh gaav waalo ko dar bhi lagne laga tha aur vo sab apne man me soch rahe the - aaj to gaya daroga kaam se thakur sahab use jinda nahi chorne waale....




Gaadi full speed me sadak ki aur nikali jisme aage ki sheet par Thakur Indrajeet Singh baitha tha aur vo aadmi Bheema gaadi chala raha tha....




Thodi der me Thakur security officer station pahuch gaya , vo bahut gusse me lag raha tha..... security officer station ke bahar kuch aadmi aur hawaldar baithkar chaay pee rahe the.....




Jaise hi un logo ne thakur Indrajeet ko itne gusse me aate dekha ve sab dar gaye aur jaldi se khade hokar apni gardan neechi karke thakur ke saamne jhuk gaye....




Thakur Indrajeet ne un sab ko dekha aur kaha - kaha hai tumhara daroga....



Ek hawaldar bola - thakur sahab vo andar hai....



Thakur aur Bheema apna seena taane andar pahuch gaye jaha vah daroga " Saket Kumar " ek file pad raha tha.....jaise hi usne thakur ko dekha vah apni kursi se khada ho gaya aur use pranaam kiya.....




Thakur Indrajeet Singh bahut gusse ne lag raha tha usne apna haath table par jor se patka aur kaha - kyu be madarjaat daroga....tu mere gaav ke logo ko chor pakdne ke naam par chutiya bana raha hai....




Thakur ki baat sunkar daroga Saket Kumar ko unki baat buri lagi aur bola - maaf karna thakur sahab pahle to aap ijjat se baat kijiye....




Bheema - kyu be tu ijjat sikhayega maalik ko....teri itni himmat , tu jaanta hai na kisse baat kar raha hai...




Saket Kumar ne Bheema ki baat ka koi jawab nahi diya aur kaha - dekhiye thakur sahab aap chor pakdne ki baat kar rahe hai na to aaiye aur ye dekhiye......mai 4 chor to pakad chuka hu....lekin abhi bhi aapke gaav me choriya rookne ka naam nahi le rahi hai...mai abhi bhi apni poori kosis kar raha hu baaki ko pakadne me.....




Thakur Indrajeet ne un choro ki aur dekha aur kaha - maaf karna daroga meri baat ka bura laga to mai bahut gusse me tha.....lekin ye choriya rook kyu nahi rahi hai.....




Saket Kumar - aaiye thakur sahab baithkar baat karte hai.....daroga ne thakur ke liye chaay mangai aur vo baithkar iske baare me baat karne lage.....




Unki baate thodi der aise hi chalti rahi....Jab ve uthkar jaane lage to Bheema ne Thakur Indrajeet ke kaam me kuch kaha.....




Bheema ki baat sunkar Indrajeet bola - daroga ek chor ko bahar lekar aa....mujhe usse kuch baat karni hai...




Daroga Saket Kumar ne ek chor ko bahar bulaya jiski umra lagbhag 30-32 saal aur shareer se bilkul pahlwan jaisa lag raha tha.....us chor ko dekh thakur bola - kya naam hai tera....?




Chor - thakur sahab mera naaaaam " Laalu " hai....




Thakur - dekh Laalu mai tujhe jail se bahar nikal raha hu...lekin tujhe mera ek kaam karna hoga....




Laalu Chor thakur ke pairo me gir gaya aur bola - thakur sahab mujhe maaf kar dijiye....ab mai dobara ye sab kaam nahi karuga.....aur aap jo kaam bataoge mai karne ko taiyaar hu....




Thakur - to sun tu jab jail se bahar nikle to tujhe ye khabar aas-paas ke gaavo me failani hai ki agar koi bhi aadmi Thakur Indrajeet Singh ke gaav Maan-Pur me chori karta paaya gaya to use sidha goli se uda diya jaayega.....uski koi bhi baat nahi suni jaayegi , sidhe bandook se hi faisla hoga uska.....




Laalu , thakur ki ye baat sunkar chauk gaya aur vaha se nikal jaata hai......uske jaate hi Thakur daroga se uska picha karne ke liye bolta hai.....aur vaha se nikalkar vaapas haweli aa jate hai....




Haweli par aakar Thakur Indrajeet Singh sofe par baithkar bolta hai - Bheema kya lagta hai....ye yojna kaam karegi , kya chor isse dar jaayege.....




Bheema - are maalik aap chinta mat kijiye....maine ye sab yojna kuch soch kar hi aapko batai thi aur mera vaada hai ye ki jab ye soochna sab sun lenge to gaav me dobara chori nahi hogi....




Indrajeet - Chalo dekhte hai phir bheema kya hota hai...




 Unke beech ho rahi baato ko sunkar ek aurat paani laate hue bolti hai -  Bheema kaha gaye the tum thakur sahab ko lekar itni subah subah.....?




Bheema - Pranaam maalkin....vo gaav me choriya ho rahi hai to usi ke baare me baat karne daroga ke paas gaye the......



( Haweli ki Malkin Gayatri Devi )

Gayatri Devi - to phir kuch samadhan nikla.....




Bheema - ha nikla to hai.....ab dekhte hai aage kya hoga....


Indrajeet Singh - Thakurain ji agar khana ban gaya ho to laga dijiye....hume shahar me bhi jaana hai kisi kaam se....kahi der na ho jaaye




Gayatri Devi - ji mai abhi dekhti hu aap rookiye thodi der.....aur phir Gayatri Devi rasoi ki aur dekhti hui bolti hai - are kanta ban gaya kya khana.....ban gaya ho to laga do thakur shahab shahar jaane wale hai , unhe der ho jaayegi......




Kanta ( Haweli me khana aur saaf safai ka kaam dekhne waali ) - ji maalkin....rookiye mai abhi lekar aati hu....



Aur phir Kanta jaldi se apne haatho me khane ka saman lakar table par rakh deti hai aur Thakur Indrajeet aur Gayatri devi ko parosh deti hai....




Jab thakur indrajeet khana khane lagte hai....tab Bheema bahar aakar paudho me paani dene lag jaata hai....




Kanta khana laga kar bahar aa gayi....saamne Bheema baniyan aur dhotti me paudho ko paani de raha tha aur kanta usko dekh man hi man muskura rahi thi.....




Thodi der Bheema ko aise hi dekhne ke baad vah Bheema ke paas jaati hai aur kahati hai - are Bheema tu bhi kha le khana....nahi to maalik ke saath chala gaya to shaam ko hi vaapas aana hoga....




Bheema - koi baat nahi mai shaam ko kha lunga....abhi maalik khana kha kar aane hi wale honge.....agar mai khane laga to unhe der ho jaayegi , isliye mai baad me kha lunga....





Uske baad Kanta andar aa jaati hai aur kaam karne lag jaati hai.....Bheema , Thakur indrajeet ko lekar shahar ki aur nikal jaata hai....




Unke jaane ke baad Gayatri Devi andar baithi hui Kanta se bolti hai - Kanta....


Kanta - Ji malkin



Gayatri Devi - Ek thali me khana taiyaar kar aur mujhe de mai upar kamre me bahu ko khilakar aati hu.......



Kanta - malkin aap rahne dijiye...vo pahle hi khana kha chuki hai....



Gayatri Devi chaukte hue - kya sach me...!!..kis ne khilaya use khana.....?



Kanta haste hue - ji malkin maine.....



Gayatri Devi - tumne.....?



Kanta - Ji malkin....



Gayatri Devi - aur usne kha bhi liya.....?



Kanta - Ji ha malkin....



Gayatri devi ye sunkar bahut khus ho gayi....aur tabhi  apne payal ki madhur aavaj karte , sundar saree pahne ek aurat sidhiyon se niche utrti hui aati hai aur Gayatri Devi ke pair chhu ti hai....



Gayatri Devi usko aasirwad dete hue bolti hai - jeeti raho bahu....aur use apne gale lagate hue rone lagti hai.....



Gayatri Devi ki aankho se aansu jaroor nikal rahe the lekin saath hi uski khusi ka thikana nahi tha.....Gayatri Devi ke saath saath Kanta bhi usko dekh bahut khus ho gayi thi.....



Aur vo khus ho bhi kyu na....aakhir uski bahu 3 saal baad pahli baar apne kamre se nikal kar bahar jo aai thi.....



( Kanta un dono ko gale milte dekh man hi man khus hote hue sochne lagti hai - badi maalkin aapne jo jimmedari mujhe di thi vo mai poora karke rahugi.....ab chhoti malkin apne kamre se bahar aa gayi hai to mai dhire dhire unko pahle jaisa hasta khelta bhi bana dungi )



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