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Do comment your opinions. I shall decide whether to continue or not based on those.
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Very Good Start Please Continue
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Good start bro, go ahead. But please don’t stop story in middle. Better give some conclusion before end of story. Seems most of the stories starting well and most are failed to continue.
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Very nice and interesting bro
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Good start. Involve other actress too
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Wow storyline is going study and good
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Samantha is back home. She decides to think of today's incident as a dream that she needs to forget. Her husband returns home in the evening. Samantha doesn't wanna make him upset by telling about Mr.Akash offer and so she keeps quiet...Everything seems to be back to normal and the next day she leaves to office and as she enters the factory, a lorry from MP group of companies is leaving the factory. Usual they come to collect goods every evening. After parking the car Samantha goes to her and her husband's cabin... They hav 2 separate small cabin in the factory to use as an office room
S(samantha) : "hey raj....didnt they send a truck for pickup last evening"(asking she enter the room and takes her seat)
R(raj) : "no...they sent and they r saying all the stuff we sent yesterday were faulty"
S : "What ? but how?" (asking in shocked tone i take a seat infront of my husband raj)
R : "how do i know?" (in an upset irritated tone)
S : "but u were here yesterday na? didnt u do the quality check for every batch?"
R : "of course i did"
S : "then how come they r faulty?" (i get little suspicious if all this was Mr. Akash's plan)
R : " I DON'T KNOW" (i reply in an irritated tone as Samantha isnt understanding my words or she thinks i m lying)
S : "ok ok wait....did u check the returned items"
R : "no they sent back after marking them all as damaged and those hav to end up in trash.....and the best part is they sent them to us dispose as well as gave us a warning letter"(i respond in an irritated angry manner)
S : "what letter? " (mv...dont tell me they want me to come and meet them in person as I have signed the deal with them)
R : "they r saying they will cancel the deal if this were to happen again" (in a very upset tone)
S : (shocked) "what? how can they? we can sue them..."
R : "don't be so dumb samantha....do u think we can win them in court battle.....even if we file a case against them we will be unofficially blacklisted and our lives will be doomed"
S : "true...isnt there anything we can do?"
R : "i m trying to reach their procurement manager and he isnt picking my calls"
S : (mv.....maybe i should speak to Mr.Akash's secretary i m sure either they r involved or they could help) "ok i will check do the quality check on today's lot" (saying i get up from the chair)
R : "Ok"(saying i dial again)
S : (i hurry to my cabin and i look for Mr.Akash's personal secretary's num and i call her) (she picks the call in a few ring) "hello....is this Mr.Akash's personal secretary?"
PS : "yes mam....how are you today? have u changed ur mind? r u accepting the deal?" (i shoot multiple questions at u not letting u speak a word)
S : "noooo...no way....."( i reply coldly and then realizing it is a bad idea I control my temper and continue) "no...i didnt call for thattt..."(i say calmly)
PS : "ok mam...so tell me how i can help u?"
S : "i feel like our company is being targeted" (i say in a hesitating tone as i dont want to beat around the bush)
PS : "ofcourse mam, y would u doubt that?"
S : "WHAT? HOW COULD YOU DO THAT? WE WILL SUE YOU?" (I cant control my temper anymore and i literally scream at her)
PS : "sure mam....u can do as u wish but I m sure you remember the deal u signed....it clearly says MP group of companies has all rights to reject ur supply if it isn't of good quality"
S : "but those were as per the standards"
PS : "maybe but we rin't satisfied....."
S : "so what do u want us to do? lose the deal, close the company and lose our hard earned money"
PS : "ohhh comon mam....i have nothing against you....and Mr.Akash wants u to have the best and thats y he offered u the deal"
S : "really? how could u speak like this knowing everything about the deal" ( i ask in a helpless tone)
PS : "mam all I tell from the my experience working from Mr.Akash is that u better take the deal within a week or your contract with MP Group of Companies will be terminated" (saying i disconnect the call as i have said what i need to say)
As PS disconnects the call samantha burst out crying both in grief as well as anger...She is now fully aware that nothing and no one can help her. She decides not to give in hoping a miracle will happen within a week and her life will be back to normal.
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For the next two days everything is normal. The items produced by Sam Industries is accepted as usual. But deep inside Samantha is very worried and hopes that some miracle will happen. It is normal morning and samantha is rushing getting ready to go to the factory....she receives a call from an unknown number. The caller identification app in her mobile phone detects it as a call frm Government Hospital.
(Unsure of what it is samantha picks the call in a hurry)
S (samantha) : "hellooo"
R (hospital staff) : "hello....we r calling from government hospital...r u Mr.Raj's wife?"
S : "yes madam....wat happened?"
R : "mam ur husband met with a minor accident and is getting treated here...it will be better if u come"
S : (i don't know how it happened) "how is he? is he fine) (i ask in panic) (mv....cheh this is why i ask him to drive carefully)
R : "nothing to worry mam....he is fine but unconcious so we are doing the necessary tests...it will be better if u come soon"
S : (mv...uffff thank god) "i will come immediately" (saying i hurry to the hospital)
Samantha reaches the hospital in 20 mins and she rushes to the front desk.
S : "excuse me...... i got a call from here.....where is my husband raj?"
R : "wait a min madam...." (saying i come out of the front desk and take samantha inside the hospital)
(after 2 mins walk we r in the third floor of the hospital and there r rooms for in patient on either side and a security officer officer is standing there)
R : (walking close to the security officer officer) "inspector sir...she is the patient's wife" (saying i leave the place to the front desk)
S : (i m confused now as to y a security officer officer is here when it is only a minor accident) "sir....where is my husband? what happened?" (in a tensed tone)
I(inspector) : "he just got a minor injuries like scratches but is unconscious and will wake up soon...the doctor didnt want anyone to disturb him"
S : "thank god....but sir what happened?"
I : "based on cctv camera evidence your husband had stopped on the side of the road to buy something at the departmental store in AV road and then a speeding truck hit ur car as it ran out of control......"(after a pause) "ur car is completely damaged"
S : "thats ok sir atleast my husband is safe...thanks to god"
I : "you should thank Akash sir mam not god"
S : "what the hell? what r u saying sir?" (is this also his work? how dare he?)
(his phone starts ringing before he replied) (he hurriedly picks the call)
I : "good morning madam....
(after a pause) samantha madam just came....
(after a pause) no madam...no majoy injuries just minor scratches....
(after a pause) yes madam....i asked the doctor to do a full body checkup
(after a pause)ok madam....sure madam...
(after a pause)yes madam....just a moment.... here madam please speak" (saying i stretch the phone towards you)
S : (i m trembling with anger and fear...i get the phone and move it towards my ear....controlling all my emotions) "helloooo...."
PS (personal secretary of Mr.Akash) : "good morning mam"
S : (i recognise her voice and before she could even speak an another word i interrupt "how dare you? how dare you try to kill my husband and how dare u tell me good morning ?" (i shout in rage)
PS : "calm down madam he is alive and all thanks Mr.Akash"
S : "He is the reason for all the problems.....such a pervert he is"
PS : "MADAM mind your words.....your husband is alive only because of him"
S : "what do u mean?"
PS : "don't u realize madam..... if the truck had hit ur car 20 seconds earlier your husband wouldnt be alive now....Mr.Akash was considerate enough to let him live"
S : (PS words make me fear more) "(i stammer in fear) butttt....but this is so wrong....u tried to kill my husband....i will go to the security officer"
PS : "there is an inspector right next to you madam....please understand....dont make this worse.... Mr.Akash is very much interested in you...It is only a matter of few days....you better take the deal or the consequences will be very bad"
S : (i can't control my tears any longer and a drop of tears runs down my cheek as i stand motionless unsure what to do and what to say)
PS : "It is all upto you now madam....we have our ways madam....no matter how much u resist you will accept the deal happily in the end....u better do it without ruining anything for you...it is only a matter of few days"
S : "I need to thinkkkkk" ( i say in a confused tone)
PS : "Sure madam...take your own time .....but Mr.Akash is very interested in you and we will make our next move tomorrow" (saying i disconnect the call)
S : (i feel helpless.... there was a murder attempt on my husband and he is hospitalized .......a very powerful man is cornering me to be his wife for a while ......... they r gonna shut down my business soon and a cop who should protect me is standing next to me and dancing to their tunes and the worst part i m informed that i will be damaged in some way tomorrow) (unable to process all this i hand over the phone to the inspector and sit on the chair outside the room were my husband is admitted all alone and helpless)
After a few hours and few visits from the nurses and doctor....they allow Samantha to see her husband.... He is fine except for a few scratches...he is discharged....the couple reach home by around 8....samantha's husband falls asleep soon. Samantha is trying to make a decision or convincing herself to accept reality.
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Very nice going waiting for next
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Interesting, ..
& good that Mr. Aakash is like Greek God Sonu Sood.
Road to hell is paved with good intentions.
Know the why before what. We cause pain to ourselves by our own ignorance.....
Correcting mistakes won't save you from impact of the mistake... my bad
Our behavior drives our motivation, You are what your deep driving desire is.
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Time is around 11 PM. Samantha is unable to sleep for she is scared as to what Mr. Akash has planned for tomorrow. Finally realizing her situation she picks her phone and dials to his personal secretary.
PR(Mr.Akash's Personal Secretary) : "hello...good evening mam"
S(samantha) : "good evening....mmmmm" (i dont know how to start)
PR : Is everything ok mam? U still are awake? (I ask in a professional way)
S : "yeaahhhhhh.....yes...... i mean nooooo" (i can't hold it anymore) "is there anyway for me to get out of all this mess? y mee?" (i speak in a tensed fast tone with mixed feelings of sadness and anger)
PR : "mam please calm down....this isn't as bad as u think"
S : "what do u mean by this isn't as bad as u think? i m married woman and u people are cornering me to sleep with ur boss" (i reply angrily)
PR : "true mam but please understand Mr.Akash has enough power to destroy you traceless" (after a pause) "mmmm mam....i m telling this for your own good....u have no choice....u have to do this to save you and RAJ" (i stress on the word "raj" to hint the treat he has)
S : (i totally know how capable Mr.Akash is and how the entire system supports him) "how long will this last? will it be over in a day?"
PR : (in a excited tone i reply immediately) "r u accepting the deal mam?"
S : (in a weak a tone) "do i have a choice....." (after a moment's pause) "the won't harm my husband if i come na?"
PR : "offcourse not mam and usually Mr.Akash loses his interest over the woman that he brings within a week"
S : "WHAT? A WEEK? why a week? he just wants my body na, pervert?"(out of control i speak my heart)
PR : "control urself mam.....he doesn't want just ur body....he wants the experience of having you as his wife"
S : (mv(mind voice) crazy asshole ...... but i hav no choice) "but what will I tell my husband?"
PR : "thats simple mam....we have it planed already....write a letter saying u just spoke to ur parents over phone and that they asked u to come home and so u r going to meet them and will be back soon....also write that u will make them accept Raj and ask him not to call and disturb u when u r away"
S : (mv...really they have everything planned) "ok and thennnn"
PR : "and u should leave immediately... a car is already waiting to pick u...I will meet u and brief you about the rest in person mam"
S : (i seriously can't process everything that is thrown at me...but i m very clear that not listening to these crazy assholes will only turn my life upside down for the worse) "ok i will start the packing at once"
PR : "no mam u need not bring anything we will have it all sorted and our team was just waiting for your consent"
S : "so u want me to write the letter and just come? " ( i ask in a confused tone)
PR : "YES mam....u have any doubts?"
S : "no" (i reply in a weak tone realizing what i m getting into)
PR : "ok mam... come soon....I will also inform Mr. Akash about you accepting the deal"
S : "ok" (i say in a weak tone)
Samantha is left with no choice and she isn't ready to lose her dear husband. Being left with no other choice she writes a letter as instructed and places it in the coffee table of the living room. She opens the bedroom door and has a peek at Raj who is sleeping motionless, a drop of tear rolls down her cheeks, wiping it off with her hand, putting a brave face....she turns around closing the door and head to the ground floor. The same black BMW she was picked up a few days back is waiting for her...She walks to the car and the bodyguard opens the door for her....turning and looking up at her apartment balcony once she gets into the car. The car starts moving. Preparing herself mentally for the worse Samantha is sitting motionless like a corpse in the car. The whole city is calm with very few vehicles and car literally sails through the well laid roads of the city center.
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In a few minutes the car arrives at one of the city's most posh 5 star hotel, the same hotel where Mr.Akash hosted the dinner event about a week back. His PS is already there waiting for Samantha's arrival. The car stops in the grand portico of the hotel and the security opens the door for her. Mr.Akash's PS walks towards the car.
PS: "good evening madam...please come" (with a bright smile)
S : (not speaking a word controlling all the emotions I get out of the car lifeless and walk behind PS) (I also notice that i m escorted by two body guards who are coming behind me)
PS : (as we get into the lift while the body guards take the other lift) "Sir is very happy with ur decision mam....he is excited to meet you in person but we are going to make everything perfect for him)
S : "ok....do whatever u guys want but make it fast and don't disturb us hereaft"
PS : (I realize that u had accepted this unwillingly and so i just keep quiet)(The lift opens in the top floor of the hotel)"please come mam" (saying i lead to the presidential suite of the hotel and i open the room door)
S : (i follow ps into the room)(the room is bigger than my entire house it is almost like a 2BHK flat except that it is very posh) (i just stand in the living room of the suite)
PS : "you better take some rest mam, i shall meet u tomorrow with ur support team " (i say in a professional tone)
S : "what do u mean support staff?"
PS : "you will have a team of staff of to help u out mam....it will have a costume designer, a beautician, a makeup artist, a saree drapist and if u want we can hire anymore staff....afterall u r our queen now" (i say in happy tone trying to make u c the good part of being Mr.Akash's wife)
S : "seriously?"(i ask in an irritated tone)
PS : (i understand that u r no mood to get carried away) "i shall leave for now mam...tomorrow is going to be ur big day....i shall meet u in the morning"(Saying i step back facing towards the room door)
S : "ok"(i have no choice and have to accept it)
PS: "good night mam"
S : "good night"
PS: (i smile and leave the room)
This is not my first time.....I have brought in numerous woman to this room whom later gave different experiences to Mr.Akash....though initially most hesitated later we had to kick them out when Mr.Akash was bored of them. But I kinda feel different about samantha mam. i don't think she will ever give in. But this ordeal will be over for her only when she starts accepting Mr.Akash. I am sure Samantha mam won't sleep for the night...I atleast hope she will make her mind to do what needs to be done.
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