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Woww so erotic just loved ot
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Tiger bro i am not a writer so can't edit but your story was very erotic but last paragragh was a bit fast according to situation you can edit it by yourself because your concept is very unique it will be blockbuster story if you make it some slow moving
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Tiger - I can help you with formatting the story. Let me know. Just share the text before posting.
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Uff!! Need a break after these long episodes!
thoda chota karo.. or make them narrative mode!
great story by the way
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What a erotic story, will definitely read it again, once it is re-edited.
Nice erotic story Author.
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Please continue the story
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our friend ashuezy2 edited the first post