05-11-2025, 08:51 PM
Sorry.
Adultery Field of Forbidden Touch
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06-11-2025, 06:28 AM
Hey folks!
This is my first time writing a story, so I know the first chapter might feel a bit slow since it’s mostly setting things up. But trust me — from the second chapter onward, things will definitely get more exciting!
The beginning may take its time, but if you stick around for a few chapters, you’ll start to see everything fall into place.
Also, this chapter is a mix of some real-life experiences and a bit of creativity.
And one more thing — let me know what you think about the Hinglish dialogues. Do they make the story feel more natural, or should I skip them in future chapters?
This is my first time writing a story, so I know the first chapter might feel a bit slow since it’s mostly setting things up. But trust me — from the second chapter onward, things will definitely get more exciting!
The beginning may take its time, but if you stick around for a few chapters, you’ll start to see everything fall into place.
Also, this chapter is a mix of some real-life experiences and a bit of creativity.
And one more thing — let me know what you think about the Hinglish dialogues. Do they make the story feel more natural, or should I skip them in future chapters?
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