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Nice Start!! Please Give Regular Updates!!
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Very nice start .....well written ...this font looks good but I find difficulty in reading with this font please change this font
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Can you repost the story with normal.font unable to read
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Corrected the font. I don't know how it got switched to this weird one. Was looking fine on pc, but messed up on mobile view
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Amazing start garammohan sir. Always been a fan of your creativity and contribution to this world of erotica. Eagerly waiting for next updates.
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Please do not forget to add pics and gif for making story even sexier and engage reader more......
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Good start. Eager to read the pain/suffering of Son and Enjoyment of Mom
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Finally u have started.
I like the way of ur telling stories in a non consensual way...as in the beginning woman will be doubtful, unwilling and somehow after some scenarios they will happily mate with them...leaving the family members in jolt
One of the underrated writers u are...Just Keep going
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All eyes were fixed on me; full of hope. It was the last ball and I had to drive it across the boundary to win. I had beaten a good 16 runs on the last five balls, and this victory would have been celebrated for days, if it happened. I could feel my palms sweating as I reassured my grip, whirled my eyes to look for the gap, as the bowler started the run.
“Common Rohan… You can do it man,” Cheering from the team standing by the boundary on the other side.
I concentrated, took a deep breath, and positioned myself to take a big hit. Unexpectedly; it came as a full-toss, and I struck it with full might. The crowd chirped like anything - clapping, yelling; and I started running – relieved – looking at the ball that was bound to cross the line as a fielder hopelessly followed it.
And suddenly he came as an obstacle!
“Iski maa ki…” He signed.
(“Aaah fuck..” He signed.)
The opposite team started laughing and dancing next to us, celebrating the saved boundary and I started walking, frustrated, clutching my teeth and holding the bat tight, thinking of giving that bastard some good whipping.
“That the fucking Rambo guy it seems… that bastard.” A couple of my team members fiercely ran toward him and I followed. By the time I reached him, my friends were tussling with him and he was pushing them apart. He wasn’t saying a word and just hissing as he pushed them while my friends were slagging on him.
“Matherchod… match hara di tune,” my friends were cursing him.
(“Motherfucker… you caused us to lose the match.” my friends were cursing him.)
I whirled my bat in full force and I was to hit it on his leg and suddenly our eyes met.
His eyes! There was something odd and wild in his powerful eyes that paralyzed me. I was standing like dumb as my heartbeat rose up.
And I just stood there watching him. Dressed in old and torn clothes, and discoloured dirty jeans, that broke-man, whom the boys used to tease as a Rambo , walked carelessly on his path, flicking away my friend like flies. He didn’t appear particularly hygienic. His skin was rough, and scaly, probably due to extreme weather and his own negligence. White hairlines were visible on his messy hair, but still it was difficult to guess his age, especially due to the physique he has got. While it was pun to say him Rambo, he has got lean and strong build like a martial artist. While he used to beg, I had also seen him picking up grain sacks in the market.
I left the ground with my friends, full of grief and a strange feeling of curiosity about that man.
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It took nearly an hour to track down everything on Mummy’s list, navigating the crowded stalls until the bags on my shoulders felt heavy with the weight of potatoes and grains. Task complete, I decided I deserved a reward. I headed straight for my favorite pani-puri stall, the alluring scent of tamarind water was pulling me in like anything.
"Make it as spicy as you can," I told the bhaiya, desperate for the burn of the chili to distract me from the lingering frustration of the match.
I was just about to pop the first hollow, water-filled shell into my mouth when a heavy hand slammed onto my shoulder, nearly making me choke.
“Akele akele? Eating all by yourself?”
I spun around to find Vicky and Sumit standing there, wearing identical, devilish grins. I groaned inwardly, but I couldn't help a small smile. "Fine, fine," I muttered to the vendor, gesturing for two more plates.
We stood around the thela, the evening air cooling our skin while the fiery pani-puri heated our palates. We talked about everything and nothing—the neighborhood gossip, a movie someone had seen, a joke from class. And suddenly Sumit burst into laughter. We turned our heads in the direction he was looking at.
There he was - about twenty feet away - the man we teased as Rambo stood facing a brick wall. A bright, Hindi movie poster had been pasted there, and he was staring at it as if he had lost himself in another world.
It was obvious what he was looking at. The poster showed the movie's actress in a bold, revealing backless blouse, looking back with a seductive expression. He stared at her so hard it seemed like he had forgotten the noisy market was even there.
Vicky made a crude joke and started laughing, and Sumit joined in. But as they laughed, I felt an uncomfortable knot in my stomach.
I knew it was just a natural human instinct, but seeing it felt strange and wrong. It was jarring to see a man in such a miserable, broken state; someone who barely had a roof over his head; still having the same desires as any other man. Seeing him dream sexually about a woman like that while standing there exposed me to the reality I didn't want to think about.
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Very nice buildup bro ....nice update
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Very well written brother.....your writing skills are always best ....keep going