[Saloni]

Thread Name - ANHONI - that changes everything
Category - misc. Erotica

Hello everyone I am going to start a new story...
Is story ki Main character ka nam Saloni h ....jo ki ek bahut hi Sidhi shadi ladki h ...jiski Age h ...25 sal ...Aur aab wo apni life ke ek naye mood pe khadi h ...Yani ki shadi ....uske ghar wale uske liye ladka dudh rahe h ...
Kahani ke other important characters
Simran - Saloni ki behan
Shagufa - Saloni ki best friend
Neelima ji - Saloni ki mom
Pramod ji - Saloni ke dad ..

Hone wala sasural

Abhinav - hone wala husband
Vikram - devar
Anita - Sashu maa
Balwant - Sasur ji

Story me agar aur bhi characters aynge to unki intro usi time kar dungi ...

[sarit11]

my dear

here is your new thread

[Saloni]

Ye story mai chapters me likhne wali hu ...jo ki ek chapter denote krega ek day ko ...Puri story around 30-35 chapters ki hogi ...aur har chapter kisi ek person ke POV se hoga ... Jadatar chapter to humri story ki main character Saloni ke POV se hi hoga ..but kuch chapter alg character ke POV se bi honge ...jo ki aap Story ke sath samaj jaoge ...

Is story mainly 2 family ke around hi hogi ...
Family 1 - Saloni family
Family 2 - Saloni Sasural
Sabka short me introduction taki story me hum sabko ache se samaj sake ....

Pramhod - Age 52 sal ..... height 5.8" ....sarir se na jada mote na jada patle ... jadatar clean shaved hi rahte h ..bas muche rakhte h ..inki ka chota sa business h ..ya kahe ki ek dukan h....jisko ye pichle 20 sal se chala rahe h ...aur usi se inki family chalti h ..ye bahut hi mehnati h . Inka Nature bi bahut hi acha h ..inki dukan bakiyo se achi chalane ki wajah hi yahi h ..ki sabko inka nature bahut pasand aata h ...mohale me sab inse pyar krte h...kuki ye bi kabhi kisi ki help karne me piche nhi rahte ...

Neelima - umar 48 ... figure 34-30-34 ... height 5.1".gol chera aur pyari akhe ...ye apni age ke hisab se abhi bi bahut sundar lagti h ..nature wise ye bi bahut achi h ..but jaisa hota h..ki bacho ko sambhalane ke liye ek parents ko strict hona pdta h ..to strict parent ka kam inhone hi utaya h. .but inka gussa bas thodi der ka hi h ..ye ek housewife h ..

Saloni - umar 25 sal .. figure 32-28-32 .. height 5.3" ...gora chera ..lambe ball ..kajal lagana bahut pasand h inko ...ghar me sabki Ladli...aur hoti bi kyu nhi ... humesha se apni mom dad ki bat manane wali ladki jo h .... teachers ki bi fav .. college ke dino me padai me achi ..but abhi 2 mhine pehle hi inka b.sc ka course katm ho gya h....ye college me padne ke sath sath ..bacho ko tution bi padati thi ..jisse inko itne paise mil jate ki ..apne college ki fee khud bar leti thi ...aur ha inka na college me koi bf tha ..na college me....Aisa nhi tha ki inko koi proposal nhi mile...but bahut hi pyar se sabko mana kr deti thi ..jiske 2 reasons the ..ek to inki parents ki sikh ..ki ye sab galat h ...aur dusra...ye dekhti thi ki kaise jinki bf h ..wo bas ladyi karte h....ek din ruthate h...ek din manate h ... Inko chiye tha koi aisa jo inse sacha pyar kre ..aur abhi tak aisa koi Mila hi nhi ...jisse wo feeling aye ..jiski bajh se ye abhi tak virgin thi .. virgin hi nhi..inhone to abhi tak kisi ko kiss bi nhi kiya tha ....

Simran - umar 23 sal ... figure 34-30-34 ... height 5.6" ...jo bi ihne dekhta ...yahi samjta ki ye saloni ki badi behan h ..inka nature saloni se bilkul alag tha ...ye ek extrovert thi ...ye bi padai me apni behan ki tarah hi bahut hi achi thi ...aur sabse badi bat ...dono behno me bahut hi jada pyar tha ...inka sapna tha ki life me kuch alag karna h ..aur Saloni bi inka isme pura sath deti thi ...Aur jab 2 sal pehle ..inka Delhi University ka entrance exam nikal gya tha ...to ghar wale inhe bahar bhejne ke liye bahut dar rahe the ...phir Saloni ne hi apne mummy papa ko samjya...jiski wajh se ye Delhi University me pad rahi thi ...waise to ye college se hi bahut Stylish thi ...Aur apni behan se offside inko Western kapde pehne ka bahut sauk tha ...but chote sehar me inko wo freedom nhi milti thi ...lekin Delhi jake is problem bi solve ho gyi thi ...aur college me 6 mhine me hi inka bf ban gya tha ..jiske sath ye 1.5 sal se relationship me thi .... Aab aap log ye mat samaj Lena ..ki ye bahut buri ladki thi ..aisa bilkul nhi tha ...but inko apni life apni sarto pe jina pasand tha ...apni behan ki tarah nhi ..ki jo ghar walo ne bola ..wahi sahi h ...ye chijo ko question karti thi ...jis bajah se ye bahut budde logo ko pasand nhi ati thi ....

Sasural family

Balwant - umar 55 sal ... height 5.10" ...ye ek government employee h ...aur kuch hi salo me retirement hone wali h ....Nature wise ye bahut hi sarif h ...
Jiski bajh se log inhe joru ka gulam bi bolte h ...but ye un bato ko has ke tal dete h ...

Anita - umar 46 sal ....height 5.6"... Figure 36-30-36 ..ye h is ghar ki asli Malakin ...ghar me inka hi chlta h ..ji ha ...ye apne husband se 9 sal choti h ..jiski bajah thodi alag h ...Shadi ke 3 sal bad hi ..Balwant ji ki pehli wife Sunita ka dehant ho gya tha ....unka tab ek beta bi tha ....jab Balwant ji ki shadi hui thi ...to unke pass government job nhi thi ...but shadi ke 1 sal bad hi unki government job lagi thi ...biwi ke maut ke time ...unka ladka 1 sal ka tha ...jiski wajah se .. family ko ye bada faisala lena pada ...aur Balwant ki shadi ... Sunita ki choti behan ..Anita se ho gyi ...Anita shadi se utni dhuki nhi thi ...kuki usse itna acha pati jo mila tha ...bad me Anita ka bi ek beta hua ..aab unke 2 bete the ...Aisa nhi tha ..ki Anita dono beto me koi bhedbhav karti thi ...

Abhinav - ghar ka bada beta ...Umar 28 sal .height 5.10" .. athletic body ....ye ek software developer h ...isme Apni padai ...IIT Kanpur se ki h ...Aur aab Google me kam karta h ...Ye bi apne dad ki tarah se bahut hi ache nature ka h ..aur padai me humesha se acha hone ki bajah se ...sare rishtedaro aur...mohale ke logo me Abhinav ki bahut hi ijjat thi ..aur sab log isse hi puchte the ..ki apne beto ko kaha padaye ...kya padaye ...jiska answer Abhinav humesha yahi deta tha ..ki jisme uska intrest ho wahi padiye ...but ye bate kaun sunta h...sab usse exact puchte the ki kya pad ke acha career ban jayega ...

Vikram - Ghar ka chota beta ...Umar 25 sal ...Jaha bhai ne IIT se b.tech ki thi ...wahi inka admission private college me bi karne ke liye donation dena pada tha ...aur kisi Tarah se...bahut sare back paper ke sath sath ...inhone apni b.tech complete kar li thi ...but inka job krne me koi intrest nhi tha ...inka intrest tha body building me....inki body bi mast thi ....aur college katm hone ke bad ..aab ye khud ka gym chalte h....aur sath sath body building competition ke liye preparation bi karte h ...Nature wise ye thode extrovert h ...apni mummy ke ladle h ...aur ha Apne bade bhai ko bi bahut hi jada mante h
...
Ye hi main character h is story ke....aur ha ek aur h

Shagufa - ye Shivani ki best friend...dono ke sath me college ki h. ..dono alag alag Daram ke hone ke bad bi bahut hi jada achi saheliya h .... Shagufa ki shadi 2 sal pehle hi Hui h ... Shadi ke bad bi unki frndship me jada distance nhi aya h .kuki Shagufa ka sasural bi same hi city me h ... Shagufa ne college katam hone ke bad padai continue nhi ki ...usko makeup artist banana tha ...to usne usi ka course kr liya ...aur aab wo ek beauty parlour me kam karti h ..uska sapna h ..aage chal ke apna Beauty parlour kholna...

[Saloni]

Mere pass aap logo ke liye ek bahut hi important questions h ...

Mujhe aisa lagta h ..ki jab hum ek story padte h ..to unke character ki ek image bana lete h....dimg me ....aur wo sabke liye alg alag hota h ...to mai chati hu ..ki Mai is story me koi bi gif ya images ka use na kru ....kya aap logo ko ye idea sahi lgta h...ya aap log gif and images ke sath jada enjoy krte h ..Mai 4 option deti hu ...pls aap log apni pasand bata de ...

1- just story ..no images and gif
2- only images ...like what the person is wearing..
3- only gif ....during sex parts ..no images .
4- use both images and gif

Please sab log comment kare...mai usi ke according sochungi mujhe kya Krna h...

[hot_stories]

Good start

[Hotgiri]

Use both image and gif it will make story more interesting

[NishaP]

Congrats for starting the new story.

I would say use both images and gifs.

[Saloni]

Everyone please tell

[Hotgiri]

Gif and pics both are heart of story so please use both of then

[Shiva reddy]

Write story with pics or gif otherwise no need. You need to understand reading story would be boring now a days without pics and gif. It hits our brain in different way, gone are the days of dry story without pics or gif.

Please use pics and gif

[dragonslair]

both pics and gifs
ek request hai ki apni surbhi wali story ko ignore na karein

[Saloni]

Okay mai wo story bi likhungi...aur kosish krungi ki wo katam kr du jaldi hi ...

[qazmlp]

I am a traditionalist,so option 1 is enough for me. But aajkal ke trend ke hisab se mujhe adjust bhi krni aati hai,so have started liking 4 too.That said, it takes a lot of time for writer to choose the right images, so I get concerned if the quality of story plot is not upto level desired.
Main thing to get right is the plot of story n editing n buildup n dialogues.
If thats all great,90% work is done, gifs n images are just the icing on the cake.

[xf123]

add pictures to make story interesting

[Saloni]

Does anyone know how to write in bold ..in quick reply section

[Saloni]

**** Update 1 ( 2 july 2022 - Beginning of something new )****

Mai Sheeshe ke samne baithi thi . Simran mera makeup kar rahi thi .Maine aaj apne jeewan me pehli bar sharee pehni thi .
Akhir ye sab itni jaldi kaise ho raha tha . Abhi 2 hafte pehle hi to papa ne pehli bar mujhse first time is bare me bat ki thi . Kya papa pehle se hi ladka dekh rahe the mujhe bina batye .Mai ye sab soch hi Rahi thi ki meri behan Simran ne mujhse apni akhe band krne ko boli....
Mai - itna sab mat kr yr
Simran- Are bahut pyari lag rahi ho...acha lagega ..ruko aap
Mai kuch ni boli...aur ankhe band kr li ...usne meri ankhe ke upar thoda sa makeup kiya ...Maine aajtak kabhi bi itna makeup nhi kiya tha ...na mujhe utna pasand tha .. makeup Krna ...
Hum ye sab kar rahe the tabhi mummy humre room me ati h....aur wo mujhe ek smile deti h ...iska kya mtlb h ...kya mai mummy ko sundar lag rahi hu ...
Mummy - bahut pyari lag rahi ho ..
Mai kuch nhi bolti ..
Mummy - Chlo kitchen me kuch aur Kam h...simran ho gya na makeup...aab aao mera hath batao ..
Simran ( haste hue ) - but mummy mai bi to tyar hui hu ...mere kapde gande ho jayenge
Mummy - Are to usko dekhne aa rahe h na ..chal jaldi jada natak mat kar ..
Simran bi samaj jati h ...ki jada majk karna thik nhi h ...wo kitchen me chli jati h ....

Aab Mai Akeli hu ...aur soch rahi ...yr ye sab kaise hoga ...Kaise bat krungi . Wo log mujhse kya puchenge..phir mai apne aap ko samjati hu ...Are bas bat hi to krenge ...aur mai nhi pasand ayi to acha hi h na ...mujhe kaunsa shadi krni h abhi ...papa ne bi to yahi bola tha ..ki bas dekh lo...pasand ayega tabhi Krna ....
Tbhi mera phone ring hota h ..aur mai thodi si garba jati hu..mai itna gabra kyu rahi ..pagal ho gyi hu mai ..yahi soch kar mai phone utha ke dkhti hu ..aur khus ho jati...kuki ye meri dost Shagufa h ...jisko mai soch rahi thi...ki aaj ke din mere sath ho ..but mummy ne mana kr diya ..ki kisi ko mat bulao ..shadi fix nhi hui to sabko pata chal jayega ki ladke ne reject kr diya ...
But aisa nhi tha .. Shagufa meri bahut achi dost thi...wo kisi ko nhi batati ....

Maine phone uthaya .
Shagufa - hello....tyar ho gyi tu
Saloni - ha tyar ho gyi
Shagufa - tu bahut pyari lag rahi hogi ..jada preshan mat ho...sab acha hoga ..
Maine to shagufa ko nhi batya ki mai preshan hu...syad wo meri Awaj se smj gyi hogi ..akhir 15 sal se meri dost h ..
Saloni - ha mai preshan nhi hu ...but sab kuch bahut jaldi jaldi ho raha h ...
Shagufa - acha sun ...ghabrana nhi ...jo man me ayega sab puch lena ..mujhe to mauka nhi mila tha ...but tu puch lena ...
Saloni - ok thik h
Shagufa - video call utha mai dekhu kaisi lag rahi h ...
Maine video call utha li ... Shagufa mujhe thodi der tak dekhti rahi ...
Saloni - kya hua achi nhi lag rahi
Shagufa - bahut pyari lag rahi h ...ekdm pari jaisi ...
Maine smile ki ...tabhi Simran daud kar room me ayi ....aa gye wo log ..aur ekdm se mere chere ki smile tension me badal gyi...
Maine Shagufa ko bye bola ..aur phone cut kr diya ...mai apne bed pe baithi thi ...
Mai - kitne log aye h ..
Simran - 4 log h ...aur wo h papa ke dost ..
Mai - acha
Simran - papa ne photo bheji thi tumhe ladke ki
Maine apne phone se papa ki WhatsApp pe bheji Hui ..photo dikha di ...jo maine Abhi tak simran ko nhi dikhyi thi .kuki wo aaj subah hi to pauchi thi ...wo Delhi se ayi thi ..bas mere liye
Simran - ha smart to lag raha h ....iske sath me iska bada bhai bi aya h syad ...
Papa ne mujhse btya tha ki ladka sbse bada h ..ho skta h .koi cousin brother aya hoga ...mai ye sab soch hi Rahi thi .ki mummy ne simran ko bula liya ...aab Mai phir se room me akeli thi ...waise to mujhe akele rahna pasand h ...but aaj mujhe ye akelepan acha nhi lag raha tha ...mai bas baith kar soch rahi thi ..ki kaun mujhse kya puchega ...Maine mummy se bahut pehle pucha tha ki unki shadi ke time unse kya pucha gya tha to mummy ne batya tha ..ki unse gana bi gawaya gya tha ..but wo sab purani bate thi...aab aisa nhi hota hoga ...mai ye sab soch rahi thi ...tabhi simran room me ati h ...aur ekdm se mere pass aake baith jati h ...wo bahut excited lag rahi h

Simran - didi ...tumne batya nhi ki ladka IIT se pada h ...
Maine han bola ...
Simran - yr mujhe to acha lag raha h ..ladka ...bahut ache se bat bi kar raha h ...yr lekin ye IIT se hoke bi arrange marriage kyu kar raha h ...
Maine man me socha ki kyu Arrange marriage me kya dikkat h ...but kuch bola nhi ..
Simran - didi yr...hum log to IIT ke bare me soch bi nhi pate the ... aur pata wo Microsoft me job krta h ...
Papa ne mujhe IIT wali bat to batayi thi but unhe bola tha Engineer h ...wo company bhul gye the ...
Mai - acha ..
Simran - ha yr ..paisa hi paisa
Mai - chup kar pagal...tujhe itna pasand aa raha to tu hi krle..
Simran - Are yr..mai to apko motivate kr rahi...mai to love marriage krungi
Mai - acha bf bana liya kya Delhi me.
Simran - nhi ..but bana lungi na
Mai - acha thik h ...
Simran - aap itni kyu preshan ho rahi ho ...apka to bf bi nhi h ..jo usse Krna h ...
Bat to wo sach hi bol rahi thi ...but syad mai abhi shadi ke liye ready nhi thi ...
Tabhi bahar se Awaj ati h..Simran bahar jati ..aur thodi hi der me wapas aati h ..aab wo mujhe bula rahe h ...mai Simran ke sath bahar jati hu ...meri ankhe niche h ...aur mai Simran ke sath sath chal rahi thi ....

Tabhi mere kano me ek Awaj sunai di ..."Are wah...beti to bahut sundar h " ...pata nhi kyu ...but mujhe ye sunke bahut acha laga ...aur meri nervousness thodi Kam ho gyi ..


Aur mai aur Simran Khali pade sofe pe baith gye ...ek sofe pe ...ladke ke mummy papa aur ladka baitha hua tha ...aur ek single wale sofe pe ek aur ladka baitha hua tha ..jisko syad Simran bada bhai bol rahi thi ...mummy papa ek sofe pe baith the ..papa ke bagal me unke dost baithe the ..unhone ne hi is riste hi pehal ki thi ...wo dono family se close the ..unka nam mujhe nhi pata tha ...bas mai unhe MISRA uncle ke nam se janti thi ....
Humre ghar me sofe ki setting aisi roj nhi rhti thi...ye setup papa ne bas aaj ke liye hi kiya tha ...

Tabhi uncle bolte h ...dekh lo beta .. kismat to tumri bahut achi h .kitni Sundar ladki mili h. .
Maine socha abhi to humne bat bhi nhi ki ...ye log pehle hi Aisa kyu bol rahe h ...
Aunty - ha ladki to bahut sundar h ....
Maine notice Kiya mere mummy papa bas smile kr rahe h ...Maine ek bar ladke ko ache se dekha ...


Usne white shirt pehni thi ...clean shave tha ...aur smile kar raha tha ..uski smile bi bahut achi thi ....wahi uski bagal me baitha ladka jiski beard thi aur wo bahut muscular lag raha tha ...usne half shirt pehni thi ...

Tabhi wo ladka bol padta h - Hello babhi ji ...aap to kuch bol hi nhi Rahi
Maine uski taraf dekha aur apne hoth hilye...hello bolne ke liye...but syad hi mere muh se koi Awaj nikli ho ...
Aunty - Are beta daro nhi ...
Mai - ji Aunty
Aunty simran ki taraf dekhti hue - aap choti Behan ho ..aap hi Delhi University me pad rahi ..
Simran - ji Aunty ..mai 3rd year me hu ...
Uncle - ye to bilkul humre Ghar jaisa h ...bada beta ..chota ladka ..aur chota bada ..
Room me sab haste h ..Mai bi smile krti hu ...aur samne dekhti hu ...wo mujhe hi dekh rahe the but jaise hi maine unhe dekha ..unhone najre hata li...
Aunty - beta apki padai complete ho gyi ..
Mai - ji ..mera graduation complete ho gya
Aunty - abhi apka age padne ka man h
Mai - mai UPSC ki preparation kar rahi hu ...
Mummy - ha aab padai complete ho gyi h...to kuch na kuch Krna tha ...to beti ka UPSC preparation ka man tha ...to humne kara diya ...padai me bahut achi h humri beti
Mujhe samaj nhi aya ..ki mummy ne meri preparation ko safai dete hue kyu bataya ...kya in logo ko housewife chiye ...
Uncle - ye to bahut hi achi bat h ....mai bi government job krta hu....
Aunty - ha inki aur inke bete ki humesha yahi behas chali h..ki government job achi h ..ya private...aunty mere mummy papa ko dekhte hue bolti h ye
Pata nhi yr log yaha ye sab bate kyu kar rahe the ...mai ye sochti hu...lekin aur kya bat krni chiye inhe ...
Uncle - beta apko jitna padna h pado ...humre ghar me iski koi rok tok nhi h ...
Mai thoda khus ho jati hu ...pata nhi kyu ...kya kisi ko hak h ..ye decide krne ka ki mujhe padna chiye ya nhi ...but abhi ke halat to yahi bata rahe the ...ki uncle ne mujhe permission di ..ki mai pad skti hu ...
Aunty - ha Abhinav to 5 din office jata h ..aur Sam ko hi ata h ...Vikram bi subah sam gym me hi rhta h...
Vikram - Are mummy unhe ye bi btao...gym h humri ..nhi to sochenge mai din bhar exercise hi karta hu...
Aunty - ha inka padai me utna man nhi lagta h...to inke liye ...gym open Kiya h humne...
Uncle - ha aab sare bache ek jaise nhi hote ...sabki apni apni pasand hoti h ...
Papa - ha ye to h...humri ek beti ko UPSC clear krke government job krni h ..to choti ko Journalist banana h ..to delhi University se usi ka course kar rahi h ...
Aunty - Are wah ..ye to bahut achi bat h. .
Maine notice Kiya sab Simran ki taraf dekh rahe h ...
Aunty - ha beta Microsoft me engineer aur Bahu agar UPSC nikal le....phir to kitna badiya ho jyega sab ...
Mujhe bahut acha lag raha tha ki kitne supportive log h.....
Uncle - waise agar ye log chahe to akele me bat kr le...
Aunty - ha ... Abhinav to tabse ekdm chup hi h ...isko bahut dar lag raha tha ...Arrange marriage se ...aap logo ko to pata hi h .. aajkal ke bache ....
Mummy - ha beta...aap log chaat pe jake ..Aram se bate kr lo ...Simran beta ...jao dikha do ...
Simran uthi..aur chat ki taraf jane lagi ..mujhe samaj nhi aya ..ki mai uske piche jau...ya Abhinav ke utane ka wait Karu ...wo uth nhi rahe the ..to mai khud chli gyi ... Abhinav mere piche piche aa rahe the ...hum chat pe pauch gye ...sham ka time tak to dhup ekdm halki ho gyi thi ...
Simran mere kan me bolti h ..ok all the best ...
Hum dono thodi der to ekdm sant thi ..syad ye soch rahe the ki kaun pehle bolega ...

Abhinav - hello
Mai - ji
Abhinav - apki graduation kab complete hui .
Mai - last year
Abhinav - uske bad se aab preparation kar rahi h .
Mai - ha
Abhinav - online
Mai - ha
Abhinav - kahi bahar jake kyu nhi Kiya
Mai - wo Simran pehle hi bahar padti thi ...isliye mummy akele ho jati ghar pe...to online hi kar rahi thi ...
Abhinav - ok
Phir hum thodi der ke liye sant ho gye ...
Abhinav - aap bi kuch pucho na ..mai hi bat kar raha bas
Mai - aunty ne bataya ..aap ko jabardasti laya gya h .apka bhi shadi ka man nhi h abhi
( Shit ..Maine apka bhi kyu bola )
Abhinav - nhi aisa nhi h ...but thoda ajib lagta h ..aise ek bar milke shadi kr lena
Mai - ha
Abhinav - but jab gf nhi h ..to aise hi Krna pdega ..apka koi bf h
Mai - bf..nhi nhi mera koi bf nhi h ..
Abhinav - Are apne bola na ..ki apka bi shadi ka man nhi tha to mujhe laga ..
Mai - nhi ...wo mai shadi ke liye abhi ready nhi hu...papa ne abhi ek hafte pehle hi mujhse pehli bar is bare me bat ki
Abhinav - oh acha ..to aap pehli bar kisi se mil rahi....
Mai - ha
( Kya mtlb....ye bahut logo se mil chuke h kya )
Abhinav - oh acha ...
Mai - aap ( akhir maine himmat krke puch hi liya ...)
Abhinav - sach kahu...to mai 3-4 ladkiyo se mil chuka hu ..
Mai - ok ( ek bar ke liye mere man me aya ..ki sabko reject kyu kr diya ..but maine nhi pucha ..)
Abhinav - ha unme se to 1 ne khud hi bola ...ki mai mana kr du...kuki uska ek bf h. ...
Mai - acha
Abhinav - aap bi bata sakti ho .agar aisi koi bat ho to
Mai - nhi nhi Mera kbhi koi bf nhi Raha h ...
Abhinav - kyu ... Abhinav ne shocked hote hue pucha
Mujhe to ye lag raha tha ...ki ladko ko ye bat pasand ayegi ...ki unki hone wali biwi ka koi bf nhi Raha h ..but ye shock kyu ho rahe ...
Abhinav syad samaj gye ki unka reaction thoda jada hi shocking tha ...I mean apko kabhi koi pasand nahi aya ..
Mai - nhi ... Actually maine kabhi bnya nhi bf
Abhinav - ok...meri gf thi college me...but humra break ho gya tha ...4 sal pehle hi .
Mai - okay
Waise mai Abhinav ke sath bahut comfortable feel kr rahi thi ....jitna mai aaj Subah se dar rahi thi ...waisa kuch nhi nhi ho raha tha .. Abhinav bahut soft spoken tha...
Mai - Aap IIT se ho ...apne kisi IIT wali ladki se shadi kyu nhi kr li ...
Abhinav - umm batya to IIT me meri gf thi ..but humra break up ho gya ...aur mai college me aisa nhi tha ...Mai bahut mota tha ...
Mai - i mean .. breakup ke bad...kisi aur ladki se ..
Abhinav - IIT me itni ladkiya nhi hoti h ...haste hue bola unhone
Mai - but maine to b.tech bi nhi Kiya h ...Maine to B.sc ki h
Abhinav - to kya hua ..Apke to 10 aur 12th dono me...90% se jada score the ...
Mai - ha ye kisne bataya
Abhinav - mishra uncle ne..aap khud ko underestimate mat kijiye ...aapne bi to Lucknow University se padai ki h ...
Mai - ha wo apne hi city me tha..to acha option laga .
Abhinav - hmm..
Maine dekha simran chat pe aa gyi h ..kya hum bahut der se bate kr rahe ...syad Abhinav ne bi yahi socha ..kuki phir hum dono thodi hi der me niche chale gye ..sab humri taraf hi dekh rahe the ...syad humra face read kar rahe the ...ki hum kitne khus lag rahe h ...

Phir unlogo ne thodi der aur baith kar bate ki ....mai aur Simran kamre me aa gye the ...

Simran - kaisa laga bat krke ..
Mai soch me pad gyi ...ki acha to lag raha tha ..but ye bi to ho skta h .ki wo bas aise hi ..achi achi bate kr raha ho ...
Mai - acha tha
Simran - wow ...pasand aa gya kya
Mai - pata nhi yr
Simran - kyu. ..tujhe pata aunty bata rahi thi ...55 lakh ka package h uska ...
Mai - acha
Simran - but mujhe phir nhi smj aa raha h .ki itna mast life h ..to Arrange marriage kyu kar Raha ...bate bi achi kar raha tha ...koi lakdi nhi pati kya
Mai - tu na kuch bi bolti h ...gf thi unki ..but breakup ho gya
Simran - acha..kab
Mai - 4 sal pehle ..
Simran mere kan ke pass ake puchti h ..sab kuch kiya tha kya uske sath ...
Maine usko deere se mara....ye sab puchta h kya koi
Simran - Are waise aajkal sab common h ...sab krte h .gf - bf ...
Mai - acha ...
Tabhi mummy ki bhar se Awaj ati h ..Simran ko bula rahi ..syad wo log aab ja rahe h ...simran bahar chli jati h ...
Sab log 10-15 min Tak bahar hi rhte h ...tabtak maine apni sharee nikal di ...aur wapas se .. t-shirt aur pajama pehan liya ...
Mai table se sab kuch kitchen me rakh rahi thi...tabhi sab aa jate h ...

Papa - saloni beta ..kaisa laga ladka tumhe
Mai - mai kya batau papa ..but mujhe abhi shadi nhi krni thi
Papa - mujha pata h beta ...but MISRA ji ne ...bataya ladke ke bare me ..itna acha ladka tha ..to mai mana nhi kar paya ...
Mai - acha ( syad papa apni jagah pe thik the )
Papa - Mera beta gussa h kya mujhse
Mai - nhi papa ...aur maine papa ko gale laga liya ...
Papa - beta tum aram se batao ...hume koi jaldi nhi h ...apne man se Krna h to bi bi bata dena
Mai - papa ...aap aise kyu bol rahe h ..Mai kuch chupati hu kya apse ...
Papa - nhi beta ...lekin phir bi ..mai to yahi chata hu ..tum khus raho ..
Mummy - mujhe to ladka bahut acha laga ...kitne ache Sanskar h uske ..itni achi job h ...lekin bilkul bi ghamand nhi h ...
Papa - ha ye to h .. Parivar bi acha hi lag raha tha ...
Simran - mujhe wo chota wala nalayak lag raha tha ...kitna bol raha tha
Mummy - ha bilkul tumri tarah hi tha ...nalayak ekdm
Simran chid jati h ...aur mummy se Vikram ki burai batiyane lagti h ...

Rat ko maine shagufa ko phone karke sab bataya ...humne karib 1 gnte bate ki ..wo bi mujhe ha bolne ko bol rahi thi ...kuki usse bi pata tha ..ki mera koi bf to h nhi ...aur arrange marriage hi krni h ..to agar itna acha ladka mil raha h ...to na kyu bolna h ...wo mujhe padne ke liye bi ha hi bol rahe h ...sach to ye h.. ki mere pass na bolne ka koi reason nhi h ...
But ha bolne ki meri himmat nhi ho rahi h....waise to mai 25 ki ho gyi hu ....but mujhe lag raha tha ki abhi bahut jaldi h ..shadi ke liye...papa mummy bi khus lag rahe the ....but mai itna kyu soch rahi hu....kya pata .. Abhinav khud hi mujhe reject kar de....usne 4 ladkiyo ko pehle bi to kiya h ....

Maine rat bhar soch ke apna Decision bana liya tha ...mai HA bolne wali thi ...but kya Abhinav bi ha bolega ..

[Hotgiri]

Nice start

[Arti Joshi]

Dhamaka update yaar!
Super excellent writings

[Celestina]

bahut badhiya ek aur mazadar mast update dala aapne dost.

[Zareen]

Bahot badhiya update hai ye
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