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Thriller RAHGEER ( JEEVAN KAA SAFAR )
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“Insaan ghar se aksar ek sapna lekar nikalta hai, lekin use kya pata hota hai ki raaste mein milne wala koi anjaana chehra uski zindagi ki sabse gehri kahaani ka pehla panna ban jayega.”

Ek Nayi Kahaani Ki Shuruaat

Namaskar dosto!

Main Bhavik Singh Chouhan, ek baar phir haazir hoon aap sabke saamne apni zindagi ka ek aisa kissa lekar, jise yaad karta hoon toh aaj bhi mann mein kai sawaal ek saath uthne lagte hain.

Yeh kahaani aaj se 12 saal pehle ki hai. uss wakt meri age 18 baras thi..

Us waqt main zindagi ke us padaav par tha jahan bachpan dheere-dheere peeche chhoot chuka tha aur jawaani apne darwaaze khol chuki thi....

Lund apne charam per khada hota tha aur aankhein jawan aur khubsurat maalo ki talash me rahti thi..

Aaj June 2014 se saal bhar pahle tak me ak sajjan balak tha..me kisi aurat per galat najar nhi dalta tha..

Me wo tha, Jo apni padai, papa aur maa ki madad, chhote bhai ko padane aur khusti, kabbadi, did jese khelo ke liye jana jata tha..

Lakin saal bhar pahle ak jawan maal ne mujhe apni hawas kaa sikar bana liya..

Ye aur koi nhi mere gaanv ke Pandit ki biwi, humari panditain thi..

Uss wakt me Jawani me kadak rakh chuka tha, Mera sharir jawan ho chuka tha..

Meri kad kathi, chehra aur rang roop kisi ko bhi meri aur aakarshit karne ke liye kaafi hai, khaskar meri nasili aur kisi ko bhi apna bana lene ki kala rakhne wali hai..

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Character Profile: Bhavik Singh Chouhan

The Brilliant Mind, The Fearless Fighter

1. Basic Introduction

Full Name: Bhavik Singh Chouhan

Age: 18 years

Hometown: A small village in India

Education: Recently passed Class 10 with excellent marks; preparing to continue his studies in the city.

Personality: Intelligent, confident, disciplined, courageous, observant and fiercely protective of his loved ones.

Mein, Bhavik Singh Chouhan koi aam satrah saal ka ladka nahi tha. Meri umar bhale hi abhi sirf satrah saal thi, lekin mere andar ek alag hi tarah ka aatmavishwas, tez dimaag aur kuch kar dikhane ka jazba tha.

Mein un ladkon mein se nahi tha jo sirf apni taakat ka dikhawa karte hain. Meri asli pehchaan mera dimaag, meri physical ability, mera discipline aur mushkil waqt mein khud ko sambhaalne ki kshamata thi.

Gaon ke log  mujhe ek honhaar ladke ke roop mein jaante the. Mere teachers meri intelligence ki tareef karte the, mere dost meri sports skills se prabhavit rehte the, aur jo log mujhe kareeb se jaante the, woh samajhte the ki Mujhe kamzor samajhna bahut badi galti ho sakti hai.

Meri kahaani abhi shuru hi hui thi. Lekin mere andar woh saare gun maujood hai, jo aage chalkar mujhe ek yaadgaar kirdaar banaane wale hai.

2. Physical Appearance — Ek Attractive Aur Impressive Personality

Meri personality mein ek natural attraction tha. Mujhe logon ka dhyaan kheenchne ke liye na toh mehange kapdon ki zaroorat thi aur na hi kisi tarah ke dikhave ki.

Mera aatmavishwas, meri body language aur mera khud ko carry karne ka andaaz hi mujhe doosre ladkon se alag banaata tha.

- Face: Young, masculine features ke saath ek well-defined facial structure aur expressive aankhein.

- Eyes: Tez, satark aur observant aankhein, jo saamne wale ke expressions aur body language ko jaldi notice kar leti thi.

- Hair: Ghane, dark hair, jo uski youthful personality ko aur attractive banaate the.

- Physique: Athletic, fit aur naturally strong body, jo regular physical activity aur sports mein bhaag lene se develop hui thi.

- Posture: Seedha khada hone ka andaaz, balanced movements aur ek confident presence.

- Overall Appearance: Ek attractive, energetic aur physically capable young man, jiske andar teenage innocence aur ubharti hui maturity dono nazar aati thi.

3. Intelligence — Tez Dimaag Aur Brilliant Thinking

Meri sabse badi taakat sirf mera sharir nahi, balki mera dimaag tha.

Mein academically brilliant tha. Kitaabon mein padhi baaton ko jaldi samajhna, mushkil sawaalon ka hal nikaalna aur kisi topic ke peeche ka logic pakadna mere liye comparatively aasaan tha.

Dasvi mein achhe marks laana meri mehnat aur samajhne ki kshamata ka nateeja tha.
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my dear writer

Under age is not allowed

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(04-11-2026, 01:33 PM)sarit11 Wrote:  my dear writer

Under age is not allowed

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Aaj me bus stop per khada hun aur bus kaa intejar kar rha hun..

Lakin me bus ke aane tak aur bus me bethne se pahle aap logon ko me jara apne sajjan se kamuk banne aur bus stop tak pahuchane ki kahani sunata hu..

Baat piche saal ke June ki hai..Jab pandit ji ke Ghar kuchh kaam se mujhe khud pandit ji ne bheja tha..

Darasal me electronic chijon me agar koi chhoti moti dikkat hai to unhen sudhar leta hun..

Pandit ji ke kahne per me unke ghar gyaa, uss din se suruaat huyi mere andar badlav ki..

Jab me pandit ji ke Ghar pahuncha to Ghar per mujhe mili Panditain..

# Character Profile: Shalini Sharma — Gaon Ki Panditain

## 1. Panditain Shalini Sharma Ka Parichay

Shalini
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**Poora naam:** Shalini Sharma

**Umar:** 42 saal

**Vivahit*

** Koi bachcha nhi hai, pandit aur panditain kaa**

**Pehchaan:** Gaon ke mandir ke pujari ki patni, jise poora gaon Panditain hai.

**Swabhaav:** Milansaar, hansmukh, samajhdaar, observant aur rahasyamayi.

**Public image:** Sanskaari, zimmedaar aur gaon ke logon se achhe sambandh rakhne wali mahila.

**Private personality:** Emotional taur par akelapan mehsoos karne wali, apni zindagi se kuch had tak asantusht aur kamuk aur bistar me kisi raand ki tarah chudne wali..lund ko chus chus kar nichod dene me mahir..

Shalini Sharma gaon ki un mahilaon mein se thi jinhein log naam se kam aur rishte se zyada pehchaante the. Iss liye pure gaanv ke liye woh Panditain thi..

Kyuki ki uska pati humare gaanv kaa iklota pandit hai..

Uski shaadi gaon ke mandir ke pujari se hui thi. Uske pati ka adhiktar samay pooja-paath, '. anushthaan aur gaon ke logon ki samasyaayein sunne mein guzarta tha. Ghar mein zimmedariyon ki kami nahi thi, lekin pati-patni ke beech khulkar baithne, apni bhaavnaayein saanjha karne aur ek-doosre ko samay dene ki aadat dheere-dheere kam ho gayi thi.

Iska karan itne salo ki saadi ke baad koi bachcha naa hona bhi tha..

Darasal pandit bistar me kachcha tha, uske lund me dam hi nhi tha, lagbhag 4 inch kaa lund hoga, aur wo baap banne me saksham nhi tha, jo mujhe Shalini se hi pata chalega aage iss story me..

Shalini apne ghar ko sambhaalti thi, logon se hanskar milti thi aur har mauke par apne vyavahaar se achha prabhav chhodti thi. 

Lekin uski zindagi ka ek aisa pehlu bhi tha jise gaon ke log nahi jaante the—uske andar bhi kuch adhoorepan, kuch dabi hui ichchhaayein thi. use kisi mard ki talash thi

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