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Romance PYAR RULATA HE…..
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PYAR SIRF RULATA HE…..
 
Mera naam sunny he. Me ye bata du k me kisi kahani ka hero nahi hu.
Kuch din pahele mujhe ek kitab kahi se mili. Abhi nahi bataunga ki kahase mili. Lekin mujhe pata chala ki vo kahani, kaiyo ke liye bahot mayine rakhti he. Kyunki usme kai jindgiyo ki puri dastaan likhi he….
 
Aaj kal meri bhi chuttiyan chal rahi he. Isliye mene socha ki me us kitab ko aap sabko padhke sunau.
Lekin pahele hi bata deta hu meri chuttiya jarur chal rahi he. Lekin itna me bhi free nahi hu ke ye kitab aapko roj sunau. Isliye jab jab me free ho jaunga. Aapko kahani sunata rahunga.
 
Yaha koi introduction nahi he jaise jaise kahani aage badhti jayegi aapko sabka introduction milta rahega. Aisa iske frist page ma likha huva he.
 
To phir Chalo saru karte he….
 
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Ladki : utho beta aaje tumhe mandir bhi jana he..
Ladka : sone dona mom. Thodi der me uth jaunga vaise bhi chuttiya chal rahi he.  (YE LADKI IS LADKE KI MOM HE.ABHISE HAM BHI USE MOM HI KAHENGE)
mom : tumhe pata bhi he ya nahi. aaj tumhara result aane vala he..
Ladka : fatak se beth kar. O teri… me to bhul hi gaya k aaje mera result he. Jaldi se ghadi ki aur dekhta he..  aaj mujhe late nahi hona he.
Mom : Abhi 6 baj rahe rahe.
Sam : thik he mom. Me abhi ready hoke aata hu.
Mom: sam beta , pahele mandir jana aur bhagwan ka ashirvad le lena. bhagwan tujhe acha result se pass kar denge.
sam : mom usse kya hoga. Result to utna hi milega jitna mene likha he. Aur mom aapko mere pe thoda bhi bharosa nahi he. Me vaha nahi jaunga.
Mom : tujhe meri kasam tu vaha par jayega. Mujhe aur kuch nahi sunnna.
sam : aap har bar aisa hi karti he. Thik he abhi ready ho jau uske bad jata hu.
 
Kuch der baad….
 
Ladki : mom , daffar utha ki nahi.
Sam : kya kaha tumne. Abhi batata hu tumhe. Aur uske piche dodne lagta he.
Ladki kisi aadmi ke piche chup jati he.
Aadmi : sam choti bahen he who tumhari… tumhe uska dhyan rakhna chahiye aur tum usko mar rahe ho.
Sam : me kaha use mar rah ahu.
Divya : to phir piche kyu pade ho.
Sam man me: is bar to dad ne bacha liya agli bar bol tab tumhe dekh lunga.
Mom : sam beta , chalo breakfast karlo phir tumhe mandir ke liye bhi niklna he.
Sab breakfast karne beth jate he..
Dad : mujhe urgent meeting he.. mujhe jaldi niklna he.
Ladki : dekha mom dad kese mandir na jane pade. Isliye meeting ka bahana bana rahe he…
Mom : Rishi , ye kya kah rahi he.. 
(Sam ke dad ka naam Rishi he lekin ham use dad hi kahenge)
Dad : wo to Mazak kar rahi. hena beta…. Ghur kar divya ki aur dekhte huye.
(divya sam ki bahen he)
Divya : ha mom. aap bhi na… me to sirf Mazak kar rahi thi.
 
Sam : chalo me niklta hu. Dad nahi aa rahe to apni baik leke nikal jata hu. Aur mandir  hoke jaunga mom…
Mom : ruko , apni bahen ko bhi tumhe sath le jana he.
Sam : kya , use kyu. me use nahi le jaunga.
Mom : tum use le jaoge aur use tumhara school bhi dikhao ge. Kyunki  wo apna high school ka last year wahi par padhne vali he…
Sam : mom ke samne to kuch bol hi nahi sakta chalo le hi chalta hu… chal divya chalte he.
 
Sam apni bike nikal ta he aur divya ko piche bitha kar dono nikalte he.
Mandir pahuch kar bhagwan ke aashirvad leke vahase wo log school ki aur nikal jate he.
 
Raste me divya kuch soch rahi hoti he. Wo kuch bolne hi vali hoti he ke tabhi school aajata he. Aur wo kuch nahi bolti.
 
Sam gadi ko park karte..
Sam : chalo uatro andar chalte he…
Divya : hmm……
Sam man me :  hmm… kaha usne. aaj to gaya bhai jab bhi ye hmm.. karti he.kuch na kuch to gadbad karti hi he. Chalo ise busy rakhta hu sayad bach jau.
Sam : chale andar, mujhe aapna result bhi dekhna he..
Divya : ha ha kyu nahi..
 
Divya school ko dekh rahi hoti he tabhi vaha ek ladki usse puchti he..  tum sam ki bahen ho.
Divya : ha lekin. Tum kon ho..
Ladki : me uski friend hu.usi ke sath padhti hu. Oh.. sorry uske sath padhti thi.kyunki ab to school khatam ho gaya he. Aur kal me bhi apne ghar jane vali hu. wese Congratulations kah dena tumhare bhai ko tumhara bhai pure college me second aaya he. Me chalti hu mujhe kuch kaam he. Itna kahekar wo waha se chali jati he..
(ye uski konsi friend aa gayi jo use mile bina hi chali gayi. Kya pata ?? )
Divya man me : daffer hamnesa second hi kyu aata he.. woh to padhne me bahut hi hoshiyar he phir bhi second aata he.
 
tabhi sam samne se chala aaraha tha. Uska result uske hath me tha aur who bahut khush lag raha tha.
 
Divya : ye second aakar bhi khush he.. daffer kahi ka..
Sam pass aakar :  kya bol rahi akele akele kahi pagal to nahi hogay.
Divya : kuch nahi… itni der kyun lagayi vapas aane me..
Sam man me : tujhe kese batau wo kahi mili hi nahi. isiliye uska wait kar raha tha shyad aaj usse bat ho jay…
Divya : sam ko kuch na bolte hu dekhar , kaha kho gaye..
Sam hadbada kar : apne dosto se mil raha tha. Chalo ab ghar chalte he..
Divya has kar : thik he..
Sam man me : ye has kyu rahi he… chalo jo bhi ho yahase chal te he..
 
Parking me aakar sam gadi start karta he aur divya ko bethne ko kahata he…
Divya side me khadi hokar sam ki aur dekhti rahti he..
 
Sam divya aur dekh kar : janta tha kuch to locha he hi.. bolo kya kaam he.
Divya : thank you bhaiya. Aaj tumhara result aaya he aur usme bhi tum pure school me second aaye ho to…
Sam : uski party chahiye…
Divya : ha.. chalo na movie dekhne jate he ukse baad lunch karke hi ghar chale jayenge.
Sam kuch sochte huye : aaj nahi phir kabhi. Aaj mujhe kuch kaam he.
Sam man me : aaj to kuch bhi karke mom se baat kar hi lunga.
Divya : tumhe mujhe ghumana hi padega.
Sam : mana kiya na. phir kabhi chalenge.
Divya : thik he to me mom ko bolungi ki tum ne mujhe schoo thik tahrse dikhya nahi aur….
Sam : thik he meri maa, chal chalte he…
 
Phir us din kuch khass nahi hua dono bhai bahen ghume aur ghar chale aaye.
Sabne sath milkar khana khaya sam ne socha kal savare savere mom aur dad se baat karlung phir dekhte he kya reaction aata he…
 
Waah kitab to achi he. Aapko maza aaye naa aye mujhe padhne maza aa raha. Lekin aur nahi kyunki…
 
Aurat : chalo bhi kitna padhoge dopher se saam ho gayi chalo lunch karte he.
Sunny : sabko ko bula lo sath me hi lunch karte he.
Aurat : sab to kabke aachuke he sirf tum hi baki ho.
Sunny : thik he chalo me abhi aata hu.
Aurat : jaldi aana.
 
Phir woh Aurat chali jati he.
 
Isiliye kah raha tha aage ki kahani phir jab me free hot hu tab padhnge.
Baki sab to thik he lekin is kahani me mom ka naam kyu abhi tak nahi bataya.ye to silly question tha.
Lekin who ladki jisne divya ko sam ki friend bataya tha woh kon thi.. jo hoga aage pata chal hi jayega. Ek baat aur abhi ek ka bhi introduction nahi diya gaya. So mujhe nahi pata ke who kese dikhte he aur kya kaam karte he. Sirf itna pata he sam ab college me jayega aur divya ko high school me last year he. Are ha rishi ka bhi koi business he ya phir woh job karta he ?? ye bhi mujhe nathi pata.
Aur sabse badi bat sam kya baat karna chahta he apne mom dad se ??
Chalo dosto abhi ke liye itna hi kyun ki ab mujhe bhi dinner karna he.
Aage ki kahani jald hi padhenge….
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UPDATE-2
 
Intro Sam
Age : 19 years
Sam padhne bahut hi hoshiyar he. Dikhne me bhi hatta katta. Sabhi ladkiya use apna bana ne ke liye tayar hi raheti thi. Lekin wo kisiko bhav nahi deta. Wo bas padhne me hi dhayan rakhta tha. Uske parivar me sabhi use bahut pyar karte he.
 
Sam ki maa  kajal singh 
Age : 39 years
Dikhne me bahot hi khubshurat. Ek samjdar aurat Aur ek house wife. Padhi likhi he par ghar pe hi raheti he. Baki ka intro aage mil jayega.
 
Sam ke pitaji  Rishi singh
Age : 42 years
Ek business man he. Aur apni khud ki company chalate he. Unka business bahot bada he aur pure desh me fela huva he. Lekin usne kisiko nahi bataya. Yaha tak ki kajal singh bhi nahi janti k wo utne paise vale he.
 
Sam ki bahen  Divya singh
Age : 18 years
Bahot hi pyari ladki. Apne bhai aur parivar se bahot pyar karti he. lekin kabhi bhi wo jatati nahi he.hamesha khush raheti. Koi bhi uske aankho me aansu nahi dekh sakta sab use bahut pyar karte he. aur hamesha sam ko chidhati raheti he.
 
Sam ka bachpan ka friend Sandy
Age : 19
Dil ka bahut acchha he. sam ko apna bhai jese manta he. dikhne me achha he lekin sam jesa nahi. Aur color thoda sawla he. bachpan se sam aur sandy sath hi padhte he.  
 
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Uske baad wo sone chala jata he. Lekin uske aankho se nind gayab hi thi kyunki use dar tha ki kahi mom and dad uski baat na samjhe. Isliye vo isi vakht baat karne ki sochta he.
Wo uthke unke kamre ki aur badh raha tha aur soch raha tha ki aaj kuch bhi ho jaye vo baat kaeke hi rahega. Tabhi use divya ke kamre se aavaj sunay deti he. Sam kamre pass jata he aur awaj sunne ki kosis karta he.
 
Divya : tum jante ho. Me tumhe bachpan se chahti hu. Lekin kabhi tumhe bataya hi nahi. Na jane kab tum miloge. Mujhe apni baho me bhar ke I LOVE YOU kahoge.
Sam man me : divya kisi se pyar karti he aur kisiko bataya hi nahi.
Divya : mujhe us din ka intjar rahega. Lekin yaad rakhna me tumhe pakar hi rahungi.tumhare bina me jee nahi sakungi.
Sam kuch sochne ke baad door open karke andar chala jata he..
Sam banavti gusse me : ye kya bol rahi ho.. aur kis se pyar karti ho.
Divya : gussa kyu kar rahe ho. kya pyar karna gunaah he.
Sam : jo bhi he abhi batao varna me mom and dad ko sab bata dunga.
divya : bhai me usse pyar karti hu. Aur bachpan se uske liye tadpati hu. Aur apni ungli upar chand ki aur karti he.
Sam : ye kya behuda Mazak he. Sach sach batao kon he who.
Divya : me sach kahe rahi hu. Yakin nahi aata he to mom se puchlo mene unhe bhi bataya he ki mujhe chand par jana he. Me astronaut banana chahti hu. Aur waha jana chati hu.
Sam khush hoke : waah mujhe to pata hi nahi tha meri bahen k itne bade spane he. To phir mujhe bhi waha le chlna ek din.
sam has ke good night karke waha se bahar nikal ta he aur mom and dad ke kamre ki aur nikal padta he.
 
Sam darwaja pe knock karta he. Andar se mom darvaja kholti he. Sam ko samne dekhkar wo use andar bula leti he. Sam vahi bed pe bethkar..
 
Sam : mom-dad mujhe aapse kuch kahena he.
Dad : ha bol. Kya kahena chahta he.
Sam : wo me ye kahena chahta tha ki mujhe..
Mom : jo bhi he bol de.
Sam : mujhe bahar padhne jana he. me vaha raheke padhna chahta hu.
Mom : kya , tum hame chodkar jana chahte ho.
Sam  : nahi mom sirf colleg puri hone tak padhne jana chahta hu. Uske baad wapas aapke sath hi rahunga.
Dad : thik he..
Mom : kya thik he. Me nahi jane dungi use. Pichli bar jab gaya tha tab do hafto me kya hal bana liya tha apna. Is bar me use nahi jane dungi.
Sam : wada karta hu is bar apna khyal rakhunga. Aur aapko koi shikhayat ka mauka nahi dunga.
Mom : me tumhe nahi jane dungi.
Dad : kal baat karenge sam is bare me. Abhi tum jao aur so jao.
 
Sam dad ki aur dekhta he. Dad isharo me sam se kahte he ki me baat karunga tumhari mom se.
Sam uthkar chala jata he.
 
Mom : aapne kyu kal ka kaha abhi k abhi faisla kar dete. Me aapko kah deti hu me use jane nahi dungi.
Dad : kajal ,tum janti ho , usne tumse aaj tak kuch nahi manga phir bhi use mana kar rahi ho.
Mom : wo waha khush nahi rah payega. Pichli bar bhi wo bal bal bacha tha.
Dad : lekin tab wo chota bacha tha. Ab vo bada ho gaya he. Usne kuch soch samaj ke hi ye faisla liya hoga.
Mom : aap to jante he ab mera sirf ek hi beta he. Phir bhi aap aisa kah rahe he.
Dad : janta hu ki wo tumhare liye sab kuch he. Tum usi ke liye ji rahi ho.agar use kuch ho gaya to tum sambhal nahi paogi.
Kuch der chup rahne ke baad.
Dad : lekin phir bhi me tumse yahi kahunga ki use jane do. Jaha wo jana chahta he.
Mom rote huye: aa aisa kyu kah rahe ho. Kya me uska khyal nahi rakh sakhti.
Dad : asi baat nahi he. Tum janti ho wo pahle bhi galat faisla le chukka he. Kahi aisa na ho hum mana kare aur wo ghar chod kar chala jaye.
Tabhi divya andar chali aati he.. jo dono ki puri baat sun chuki hoti he.
 
Divya : mom , papa sahi kah rahe he. Use jane dena chahiye. Aur wo hamesha ke liye nahi ja raha he. Wo apni padhay puri karke vapas chala aayega.
Mom : baat tumhari sahi he. Lekin wo kese waha….
Dad : tum uski chinta mat karo is bar me uska dhyan rakhunga. Aur use waha koi taklif nahi hogi. Mera yah sara paisa sirf usi ke liye he. Me use kuch nahi hone dunga ye mera wadda he. Rishi singh ka wada he ye.
Divya : ab to jane dijye bhai ko.
Mom : thik he. Lekin pahele me usse bat karungi us ke baad wo jana chahta he to chala jaye…
Divya : papa lagta he mom bhai se koi promise lene vali he.
Dad : sahi kaha divya tune. meri bachi ab badi ho gayi he.
Mom : ha mujhe bhi yahi lagta he. Tabhi to bina kahe sab kuch samaj jati he.
Divya : me kaha badi hui hu. Me abhi choti hi hu. Aur apne mom dad k gaal par kiss karke.
Divya waha se apne kamre me chali jati he.
 
mom : mere ye dono bachhe hamesa khush rahe.
Dad : chalo ab so jao. Kal tumhe sam se bat bhi karni he.
Mom : hmmm…
 
Uske baad wo dono aur divya so jate he.
Lekin sam apne kamre me abhi bhi jag raha hota he.
 
Sam apne man me apne atith ke bare me soch raha hota he.
Use dar tha kahi maa use jane se mana na karde. Dar kyun na ho. Kaam he aisa kiya tha.
 
2 saal aur 2 mahine pahele
 
 
Sandy : yaar sam kuch to madad karde yaar.. lagta he is bar to me fail ho jaunga.
Sam : sale.. tujhe kuch yaad to raheta nahi he. Phir padhke kya karega.
Sandy : tu mujhe kuch padhayega to shayad pass ho jau me.
Sam : thik he. Padha dunga lekin abhi vaha se hat ja aur mujhe dekhne de.
Sandy : ha ha tu bhi kya yaad rakhega. Le hat gaya. Lekin yaad rakhna mujhe padha padega. Aur mana kiya to me jakar us riya ko….
Sam : kya bola phir se bol to. Kuch riya ke bare me kah raha tha.
Sandy dar ke mare : me to….. me to bas ye kah raha tha ki usse kuch help le lunga. Agar tu mujhe nahi padhyega to….
Sam sandy ki ek bhi baat nahi sun raha tha…wo to bas riya ko hi dekhe ja raha tha.jo first bench par bethi thi. Aur padh rahi thi.
Chalo riya ka intro de deta hu..
Riya age 18 , dekhne bikul pari jesi lagti he. Ekdam gora rang. Us pe uski woh sweet si simle kya baat karu uski. Agar koi dekhle to bhi uske pyar me pagal ho jay. Lekin abhi tak uska koi boyfriend nahi tha.
Kyuni wo kabhi bhi kisi ladke se bat nahi karti thi. Aur agar kisine uske samne pyar ka izhar kiya to uski kher nahi.kyuki use pyar se bilkul nafrat thi.
 
Sam ne kabhi bhi usse bat nahi ki who bas use dur se hi dekhta rahat tha. Wo bachpan se hi usse pyar karta tha. Lekin darta tha ki kahi use ne mana kar diya to.
 
Kyunki riya jab paheli bar school me aayi tab kisi ladke ne uske samne apne pyar ka izar kiya tha to riya ne use dho dala tha. tabhi ye baat sam ko pata chali k kisi ladki ne apni class ke ladke ko mara he Aur wo ladka apni jaan dene ke liye school building se kudne vala he. sam bhag kar school ki chat par jakar use bachne ke liye use kahata he.
Sam : tu kyu apni jaan de raha he.
Ladka : me riya se pyar karta hu aur uske bager me ji nahi sakta.
Sam : are uske jesi kamini kitni aayi aur gayi. Tu tension mat le tujhe koi aur mil jayegi.
Ladka : mujhe wo bahut pasand he. mujhe usse paheli bar dekhte hi pyar ho gya.
Sam : are dekha mene abhi usko (bas ase hi phenk raha tha) are usse achhi to kai ladkiyan hamare class me he.
Ladka : lekin me uske liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu.
Sam : are aisi kamini ladkiyaan aati rahegi. Jo kabhi kisi se pyar nahi kar sakti. Unke liye pyar bas ek khilone jesa he. uske liye tu apni jaan kyu de raha he.
Ladka : mujhse koi pyar nahi karta. Wo bhi nahi karti.me bas mar jana chata hu.
Sam : jese tu uske liye kuch bhi kar sakta he.apni jaan tak de sakta he. lekin tujhe pata he is duniya 7 billion se jyada log rahete he. tujhe koi to asi ladki mil hi jayegi jo tuhare liye apni jaan de sake. Tu us chudel ke liye kyu apni jaan de raha he.
Ladka : kya mujhe koi asi mil sakti he.
Sam : are kyu nahi mil sakti. Jarur milegi tu jaan dega to nahi milegi.kyuki jaan dene ke baad tu rahega hi nahi. Aur koi ladki tumhe milegi hi nahi.
Aur uske baad wo ladka niche utar jata he..
Lekin sam ko kya pata tha ki riya vahi piche khadi thi aur usen sab kuch sun aur dekh bhi liya he..
Dusre din jab riya class me aati he tab sam use dekhta hi rah jata he. yay u kahe ki sam ko riya se pyar pahele si ha tha. Riya ko sam pahele bhi kai bar apne mama ke ghar ke pass dekh chukka he. lekin vo kabhi usse mil nahi paya nahi uska naam jan paya. Use ne socha tha agli chutiyyo me vo apne mamu ke ghar pe jakar uska pata lagayega. Lekin vo to aaj samne se chali aa rahi thi. Use dekhkar sam bahut hi khush hota he.
Wo jab riya ki aur dekh raha hota he tab sandy kaheta he ki yahi vo ladki jisne kal apne dost ko jaan dene pe majboor kar diya.
Sam ka dil ek dum tham jata he…
Sandy : aur achha hua tune use sab suna diya. Ab vo hamari aur dekhe gi bhi nahi. Are class me bethne layak nahi choda tumne use.. aur sandy hasene laga..
Sam : ye kya kah raha he. mene kab use kuch kaha.
Sandy : kal tum jab use ladke ko bacha rahe the tab vo vaha piche he khadi thi.
Sam : to kya hua.
Sandy : wahi to riya he. jisne kale apne dost ko pit dala tha.
Ye sunke sam pe jaise bijliya gir gayi ho. wese bhoot banker khada rah gaya.
Vo vaha se siddha ghar ki aur nikal gaya. sandy uske aawaj deta rah gaya aur lekin sam nahi ruka..
Ghar aakar sam ne apne aap ko room me bandh kar liya.  aur apne aap ko kosne laga. Us lagne laga jese uski duniya hi khatam ho gayi he. wo ab jina nahi chahta tha. Use lagne laga ab riya use kabhi maff nahi karegi. Yaha tak ki wo usse bat tak nahi karegi. Uska pahela pyar hi uski aur dekhega tak nahi. Uska man apni jaan dene ko kar raha tha.
Wo ghar se bahar nikal kar apni jan dene ke bare me sochta he. tabhi divya uske pass aati he aur sam ko kaheti he bhai meri help karoge.
Sam : abhi nahi mujhe jana he.
Divya : please bhai sirf aaj help kardo nahi to mujhe bahot bura lagega.
Sam : thik he batao kya karna he..
Divya : tumhe mere liye mom ka gussa sant karna he…
Sam : kyu maa kyu gussa he tumse. Aisa kya kiya tumne..
Divya : maa hamesha mujhe padhay karne ko kaheti he. isliye aaj jab mom ne mujhe khelne nahi diya to mene mom par khbu gussa kiya. Gusse me kuch jyada hi bol gayi..
Sam : thik he. jav mom se jakar kaho ki tumhe pet me dard ho raha he. itna kahete hi unka gussa dur ho jayega. Thodi data khani padegi juth bolne ke liye lekin mom ka gussa utar jayega. Aur who tumhe maff kar degi.
Divya : kyu maaf kar degi ??
Sam : maa apne bachho bahut pyar karti he. aur jab koi kisi se pyar karta hota he to.. wo jyada der tak tumse gussa rah hi nahi skata. Phir chahe vo kisi bhi bat par gussa kyu na hua ho.
Divya : to phir tum kyu apni jaan dena chahte ho. tum bhi to usse pyar karte ho.. agar wo tumse gussa he to kya hua. Jab use tumse pyar hoga tab vo tumhe maff kar degi.
Sam aakhe fad kar divya ki aur dekhta he : tumhe kese pata chala. Ki me riya se pyar karta
hu. tum to mere school me bhi nahi padhti.
Divya : jab tum rote huye apne kamre me gaye tab mene tumhe jate huye dekh liya tha. Jab me kamre ke pass gayi tab mene tumhari baat suni jo tum rote huye bol rahe. Aur mujhe pata chala ki tum apni jaan dene k liye ja rahe ho.
Sam : isliye tum ne ye natak kiya.
Divya : ha, sirf tumhe bachne ke liye. Lekin me tumse bahut naraj hu tum mujhe kyu chodakar jana chate the. Kya me tumhari kuch nahi lagti, divya ki aankh me aansu aa jate he. me itni buri hu ki mera bhai mere liye jib hi nahi skata.
Sam : nahi aisa nahi he, vo me uske bina nahi ji sakta. Jab se use dekha he sirf uske bare me hi soch raha hu.
Divya : aab kabhi mujhe chodkar gaye to me tumhe kasam deti hi ku. Me bhi apni jaan de dungi. Iske baad jo karna he vo karna. Apni jaan…
Sam divya ko apne gale aga leta he aur use sorry kaheta he.aur wada karta he ki ab kabhi bhi apni jaan dene ki nahi sochega. Kuch bhi ho jaye vo kisi bhi aafat se ladega.
Dono ghar me chale jate he aur ek dossre se promise karte he ki ye baat kabhi kisiko pata nahi chalegi.
Sam apne kamre jakar sochta he ki me ab me riya se kese baat karunga. Phir dusre din wo school me sabse pahele pahoch jata he aur riya intjar karne lagta he lekin riya us din nahi aati he.
Agle din bhi sam pahele pahoch jata he aur riya ka intejar karta he. tabhi use riya aati huyi dikhti he. vo riya ki aur jese hi jata he. riya muh ghuma kar dusri aur chalne lagti he. phir school ki bell bajti he aur sabhi class me chale jate he. sam kai dino taka aese hi koshish karta raha lekin riya ne uski aur dekha tak nahi. Sam ka dil tut sa gaya. Use apne PYAR NE RULA DIYA. Phir usne riya se baat karne ka irada chood diya. Lekin ab usse aur jyada pyar karne laga. Din bit te gaye aur sam ka pyar badhta gaya. Lekin vo kabhi bhi riya baat nahi kar paya. Ab vo riya ki bat karne ke liye bhi nahi jata.
 
Use lagata he ki ab agar me riya se bat karunga to who mujhse kabhi baat tak nahi karegi. Isiliye wo usse kabhi baat nahi karta tha. Wese riya bhi sam ko bhav nahi deti thi. Woh uske samne bhi nahi dekhti thi.
Isliye sam ne kabhi usse bat nahi ki.
 
Sam riya se pyar karta he ye sirf sandy hi janta he. Kyunki sam aisa nahi dikhata ki wo riya se pyar kakrta he. Usne sandy ki dosti riya se karva di thi. Dosti kaho ya phir kabhi kabhi baat ho jati thi un dono ke bich. Wo bhi sirf aur sirf padhay ki.
 
Din khatam hota he aur sab ghar chale jate he. tabhi sandy bhagta hua sam ko batata he ki ek is bar exam jaldi he aur wo bhi ek hafte ke baad. Mujhe kuch bhi karke bacha le.
Sam ko koi tension nahi thi wo to padhne bahubali tha. Isliye wo kuch nahi kaheta.
Tabhi use riya dikhay deti jo kisike sath principle office se bahar aa rahi thi.
 
Sam : ye riya principal ki office me kyun gayi thi…
Sandy :  wo is saal school chodke ja rahi he. uske papa ka ab acha business chal raha he pune me to shayad vo vaha ja rahi he.
Sam : tujhe kese pata wo ja rahi he.
Sandy : abhi mene do lalkiyo ko baat karte huye suna ki apni Bhabhi yaha se ja rahi he.
Sam ek ghuma ke sandy ko marta he aur kaheta he.
Sam : kaminey tu bhag kar yaha aakar mujhe ye bata ta he ki hafte baad exam he. lekin pass aakar bhi nahi batata ki riya school chodkar ja rahi he..
Sandy muh fula ke : maar kyu raha he . ab bata to diya.
Sam : daffar kahi ka.
 
Sam : wo kab jane wali he aur kaha jane vali he.
Sandy : pata nahi shayad exam ke baad apne pita ke pass pune ja rahi ho.
Sam : sari baat pata kar aur mujhe puri baat batana.
Sandy : thik he, lekin mujhe pass jarur karva dena.
Sam : thik he.. chal ghar par milte he. wese bhi ab hafte bhar chutti hi he.
Sandy : tere ghar par aata hu sath me padhenge.
 
Din aise hi nikal jata he.sam riya se bahot pyar karta he. wo har vakht uske bare me hi sochta raheta he. uske liye vo uski jindgi ban chuki he. lekin sam ne abhi tak usse bat tak nahi ki thi.
 
Ab hafte bhar riya se nahi milne vala tha. Isliye sam bhi udas tha lekin usse bhi Jayda usse dar tha ki kahi riya school chodakar yaha se chali gayi to vo kabhi usse nahi mil payega. Nahi usse bata payega ki wo usse kitna pyar karta he. uski aakh me thoda pani ki bunde aa jati he. sochte sochte vo kab nind ke aagosh me chala jata he use hi nahi pata chalta.
 
Maza aagya dosto aage ki kahani phir kabhi aaj keliye itna he time mila he…
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UPDATE-3
 
Kai dino baad aaj hum apni kahani aage badhyenge….
 
 
Agle kuch din aise hi bit jate he. sam aur sandy apna pura din sirf padhne me hi nikalte he. aur aaj exam ka din he. har bar ki tarah aaj bhi sam riya ka hi intzaar karta he. aaj ek hafte baad wo riya ko dekhta he. aur har bar ki tarah aaj bhi sam ko riya utni hi sundar lagti he jab riya ko paheli bar dekha tha tab lagi thi. Aur is tarah exam bhi khatam ho jate he aur riya apne ghar chali jati he. jab sam ko ye pata chalta he ki riya ab pune me hi rahne vali he to vo bhi apni maa se jidd karta he ki use bhi pune me padhna he. isliye vo puna padhne ke liye chala jata he. ya yu kahe ki wo riya ke piche chala jata he.
 
Lekin lagta he kismet ko kuch aur hi manjoor tha. Riya jisne school badla tha wo aur sam jise pyar karta tha wo riya dono same nahi thi balki woh to riya agrwal thi jo riya ki hi best friend thi.
 
Isliye use din principal ki office me dono friend riya Agarwal ka leaving certificate lene gayi thi. Lekin sandy ne aadhi baat sunke hi ye lafda khada kar diya.
 
Aur isliye jab sam ko ye baat pune jakar bata chali tab use kuch hosh hi nahi raha. Aur usi bich uske  sath ek accident ho gaya. Aur is accident se sam bahot bura ghayal huva. Vo marte marte bacha. Kai dino tak woh hospital me raha.
 
Isliye aaj kajal sam ko bahar nahi bhejana chahti ti. Lekin sab ke kahene pe who bhi maan gayi. Aur sam ko apne se dur bhejne ke liye tayaar ho gayi.
 
PRESENT DAY
 
Subah subah aaj sam jaldi uth jata he. aaj use nind hi nahi aati. Who bas apne maa ke javab ka intzaar kar raha tha. Ke jab kajal singh sam ko pune jane de.
 
Sam jaldi hi niche jakar dinning table par beth jata he….
 
Jab tak sab log aate he tab tak uske ghar ka intro de deta hu.
 
Sam ke pitaji ache businessmen the to unka ghar bhi bahot bada he..
Ghar ke niche ki aur 3 kamre he. jaha sam ke mummy papa ke bed room he aur uske sath bathroom attached he, dusra kitchen aur ek guest room he aur iske sath bathroom bhi he.
 
First floor pe, sam aur divya ka kamra he. uske sath do aur room bhi he. lekin who abhi khali he. second floor pe kuch khass nahi he. lekin waha bhi kuch kamre he. jo aise hi pade he Aur ha sam ke pita ka ek aur  ghar unke ganv me bhi he. jo bilkul ek bade se mahal jesa he. wo mahal sam ke dada ne banaya tha. Kyunki who log pahele se hi paise vale the.
 
Lekin sam kabhi bhi vaha par nahi gaya. Aur use ye bhi nahi pata ki uske dada uske ganv me rahete he.
 
Present………..
Breakfast ready ho chuka tha aur sabhi breakfast kar rahe he.
Sam man me : maa kuch kah kyu nahi rahi he..
Sam : maa aapne javab nahi diya ke me ja sakta hu ya nahi.
Maa : ha ja sakte ho..
Sam man me bahot khush hota he lekin dikhata kuch bhi nahi.
 
Maa : lekin meri kuch sart he. agar vo sab manoge to hi tumhe me jane dungi.
Sam : kesi condition.
Maa : paheli , tum vaha jakar hafte me ek phone to mujhe karna hi hoga.
Sam : thik he..
Maa : tum apna dhyan rakhoge. Aur agar kuch bhi taklif ho jaye to hame bataoge.
Sam : thik he mujhe ye sab manjoor he..
Maa : aur sabse badi baat tum apni padhay me nuksaan nahi hone doge. Aur accha result laoge. Aur is baar clg khatam hone par tumhara pahela number aayega.
Sam : mujhe ye bhi manjoor he. aur kuch he to abhi batato.
Divya : ha mujhe har roj phone karoge.
Sam divya ko chidhate huye : pahele phone to lele…
 
Aur isi tarah din nikal jata he. aaj sam bahot khush tha kyunki aaj uski maa sam ko pune jane ke liye maan gayi thi.
 
Saam ke vakht sam ready hoke sandy ke ghar ki aur jata he.
 
 Sam sandy ke ghar ki bell bajata he..
Ghar ka door sandy ki maa kholti he. aur sam ko dekhte hi sam ko ghar me aane ko kaheti he.
 
sam : sandy kaha he. mujhe usse kuch kaam he.
Sandy ki maa : wo apne kamre me he. tum wahi chale jaav.
sam : thik he unty..
 
Sandy ke family ka intro abhi nahi diya. Kyunki abhi uska koi kaam nahi he.
 
Sam sandy ke kamre me jakar wahi beth jata he.
Sandy : kya baat he. aaj hum garib ke ghar kese aana huva.
Sam : kaminey har roz to aata hu . abhi chutiyya chal rahi he isiliye kam aata hu. Tu kaheta he to yahi ruk jata hu.
Sandy : iski koi jarurat nahi. Waise kaam kya tha jo tum yaha chale aaye.
Sam : yaar wo baat aisi he ki, maa pune jane ke liye maan gayi.
Sandy : kya baat kar raha he. sach lekin ye huva kese. Aur tune aunty ko kab bataya.
Sam sandy ko puri baat batata he..
 
Sandy : teri to lottery lag gayi..
Sam : sahi kaha tune.
Sandy : ye baat to tu phone pe bhi bata sakta tha. Lekin ghar pe kyu aaya. Kuch aur kaam he kya.
Sam : waah tera dimaag bhi ab chal raha he.
Sandy : tera sath jo raheta hu. Bata kya baat he.
Sam : dekh hum bachpan se hi saath me he. aur ab me jab pune jane waala hu to tubhi mere sath waha chal sath me padhenge.
Sandy : baat to tu sahi kar raha he. lekin mujhe ghar par baat karni padegi. Uske baad hi kuch kah paunga.
Sam : to aaj hi baat kar lena. Kyunki ab jyada der me yaha nahi rah ne wala. Agle Sunday hi me vaha jane vala hu.
Sandy : aaj rat ko hi baat kar leta hu. Agar mujhe aane denge to Sunday ko sath me hi chalenge. Aur waha maze karenge.
 
Phir kuch der dono dosto ki baat chalti he. aur phir sam apne ghar chala aata he.
 
Raat ko sandy ka phone aata he. aur wo bhi pune clg ki padhyi kar ne aane vala he sam ko batata he.
 
Sam apne mummy-papa ko ye baat batata he ki sandy bhi aane vala he. Is baat par sabhi khush ho jate he.
Papa : sam tum pune to ja rahe ho. Lekin tum waha jese yaha raheto ho wese nahi rah paoge.
Sam : me kuch samjha nahi. Kya waha koi problem he.
Papa : mera matlab he, me tumhari rahne ki sari seting kar dunga lekin uske baad sab tumhe hi manege karna ho.
Sam : uski fikar aap mat kariye me sab dekh lunga. Wese mujhe rahna kaha he.
Papa : waha jaha tum pichli bar ruke the. tumhare chacha ke yaha. tum usi ke ghar par rahoge. Baki sab wo hi dekh lenge.
Sam : thank you papa. meri baat ka support kar ne ke liye.
Phir dono baap bete ki baate chalti raheti he. aur uske baad do din bhi nikal jate he.
 
Sunday morning…
Sam ke papa ki car me woh dono pune jane wale the. Sam fresh hoke ke niche aata he.waha sab uska hi intzaar kar rahe the.
Divya : kya baat he aaj kuch jyada hi chamak raha he.
Maa : kyu na chamke. Mera beta he hi aisa.lakho me ek he.
Papa : sahi kaha tumne. Aaj aisa lag raha he mera beta bada ho gaya he.
Maa : bas bhi karo ab use nasta to kar ne do. Phir use niklna bhi he.
Sam : mom me jaldi hi apni padhyi puri karke laut aaunga.
 
Phir sab sath beth kar nasta karte he..
 
Papa : driver sam ka sara saman car ki dikki me rakh do..
Driver : ji malik.
Sam ghar se bahar aakar apna sara saman driver ko deta he.
Aur phir saru hoti he. aasuo ki dhara. Jo sam ki maa ke aankho me se bah rahe hota he. tabhi sandy bhi apne papa ke sath waha aajata he.
Sam apni maa ko sant karta he. aur use vaada karta he ki vo apna dhyan rakhega. Aur sabko bye bol kar wo dono apni car me beth jaate he.
 
Sam aur sandy dono hi nikal padte he pune ki aur.  
 
Sam aaj bahot jyada khush tha ki is baar vo kuch bhi kar ke riya ko apna bana hi lega. Aur dusri aur sandy pune sirf aur sirf ghumne ke liye ja raha tha. Lekin sath me use padhyi bhi puri karni thi. Iske sath hi dono pune pahoch jate he.
 
Pune pahoch kar sam sandy ko uske mama ke ghar par chodta he. aur wo bhi waha se apne chacha ke ghar ki aur nikal jata he.
 
Chacha ke ghar ka intro:
 
Ajay Singh
Age : 41 years , Sam ke chacha. Unka bada achha sa business he pune me. Pune me unka bahot naam he. Kai bade bade businessman unke talve chate he. dil ke bahot hi ache he. lekin jab apni aukat par aate he to is par kuch kaheno ko kuch bachta hi nahi.
 
Amrita Singh
Age : 38 years , sam ki chachi. Wo jyada padhi likhi nahi he. lekin sabka dhyan achhe se rakhti he.
 
Diya Singh
Age : 18 years , sam ki bahen. Dikhne me bahot hi khubsoorat he. iske sath hi uska nature bhi bahot achha he. wo hamesha sabko khush rakhna chahti he.
 
Singh Village
Age : 128 years , ye ajay singh ke ghar ka naam he. aur ye ghar ek samay  bahot bade khandan ka tha lekin uske baad se hi singh parivaar yaha raheta he. uske naam me village likha huva he. kyunki ye ghar bhi sam ke ghar jitna hi bada ya u kaho ki usse bhi bada he. ghar ke aage bahot bada garden he. aur piche bhi swimming pool aur garden he. ghar do manzilla he. ghar ke niche ki aur ajay aur amrita ka karma he. aur upar diya raheti he.  uske sath hi guest room aur waha par kaam karne valo ke liye rahena ka room piche ki aur he.
 
Baki ka intro baad me aata rahega.
 
dopher ke 3 baj chuke he. kyunki sam ka ghar pune se kafi dur tha. Isliye pahochne me 6 ghante nikal gaye.  Sam apne chacha ke ghar par pahuchta he. driver sam ka sara saman ghar me pahocha kar vapas nikal jata he.
 
sabhi log sam ka hi intzaar kar rahe hote he. ek min yaha diya kahi dikh nahi rahi he.
ajay and amrita singh sam ke aane ke intzaar me hall me bethe hote he.
 
sam : chachi , me aa gaya.
Chachi banavti gusse me: besaram ab aa raha he. pichli bar jab gaya tab se yaha vapas nahi aaya. Tujhe humari yaad nahi aayi.
Sam : mujhe bhi aapki bahot yaad aayi lekin me bhi kya karta padhyi ko chodke to nahi aa sakta tha na.
Chichi : lekin….
Chacha baat ko bich me hi kaat te huye : bas bhi karo ab wo lamba safar karke thak gaya hoga. Use kuch aaram to karne  do. Uske baad uske piche pad jana. Aur vaise bhi woh ab yaha hi rahne vala he.
Chachi : mera raja beta , chalo tumhe apna kamra dikha deti hu. Tum ab vahi pe rahoge.
sam : thik he…
chachi sam ko uska kamra dikha ke chali jati he. kyunki chacha aur chachi dono ko kahi bahar jana tha.
sam bahot thak gaya tha isliye vo apna bag aise hi rakh ke apne kamre me so jata he.
 
saam ke 6 baje uski aankh khulti he. vo fresh hoke niche chala aata he. vaha use diya dikhay deti he. jo sofe pe beth ke apne phone me kuch kaam kar rahi hoti he.
 
sam : hii ,diya.
Diya hadbada kar : hii sam , kab aaye tum.
Sam : abhi dopher ko hi aaya.Me jab aaya tab tum ghar pe nahi thi.
Diya : ha vo..a..vo..a...vo me apne friends ke yaha kuch kaam ke liye gayi thi.
Sam : kya kar rahi ho abhi. Kahi admission liya ke nahi.
Diya : nahi abhi to kahi nahi liya. Lekin soch rahi hu ki kal hi achhi si clg me jake admission le loo. Kyunki ab to result bhi aa gaya he.
Sam : me bhi tumhare sath chalunga. Mujhe bhi admission lena he. dono sath me hi le lenge.
Divya khush hoke : ye achha rahega. Kal subah hi chalenge. Meri ek friend ko bhi admission lena he.
Sam : done. Mera bhi ek friend he use bhi admission lena he.
Diya : wo bhi tumahare sath admission lega ??
Sam : wo me jis bhi clg me admission lunga wahi par aajayega.
Diya : accha kal subah chalenge.
 
 
Tabhi chacha aur chachi bahar se aate he.
Chachi : kya baat chal rahi he dono bhai bahen me.
sam : kal hum clg me admission lene jane vale he. dono ek hi clg me admission lene vale he.
chacha : ye to acchi baat he. dono sath padhoge to hame bhi diya ke padhne ki fikar nahi rahegi.
Chachi : sahi kaha aapne..
Sam : chachi bahot bhukh lagi he.. dopher se kuch nahi khaya. Aap jaldi fresh hoke aa jao sath me hi dinner karte he.
 
Dinner time
Sabhi log dinner pe bethe he. chacha aur chachi ek side me aur diya and sam ek side me bethke dinner kar rahe he.
Sam : chacha yaha sabse achha college konsa he.
Chacha : tum aisa karna mera friend hi ek college ka principal he. tum usi college me jake admission le lena. Wo college bhi achha he. uska naam bhi bahot bada he.
Sam : thik he to tey raha wahi college me admission le lenge. Kyu sahi kaha na diya.
Diya : me tumhe vahi par le jane vali thi. Mujhe bhi vahi par admission lena he.
Tabhi sam ko sandy ka call aata he. aur wo uth ke bahar chala jata he. waise bhi uska dinner ho chukka tha aur use garden me ghumna bhi tha.
Sandy : kaisa chal raha bhai.
Sam : ek dam thik thak . kal hum college admission lene jane vale he. tum taiyaar rahena subah subah hum nikalenge.
Sandy : isliye hi to mene tujhe phone kiya tha.
Sam : me janta tha isi liye tujhe mene pahele hi bata diya.
Sandy : thik he. me ready rahunga. Bye.
Sam : bye.
 
Phir sab apna apna dinner karke apne room me chale jate use din aur jyada kuch nahi hota he. aur sab apne apne kamre me sone chale jate he.
 
 
Dekhate he naya din kya naya leke aata he unlogo ke liye. Abhi tak to kahani me kuch jyada musibat nahi aayi apne hero pe. Lekin aage kuch kah nahi sakte Kuch bhi ho sakta he.
To dosto jaldi hi milenge ek nayi subah ke sath. Good night…..
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good work
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(08-02-2019, 03:25 PM)rabiakhan338 Wrote: good work

THANK YOU SO MUCH DEAR  Rolleyes Rolleyes
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UPDATE – 4
 
Subah subah 6 baje sam ki ankh khulti he. who uhtke apne aap ko aayne me dekhta he aur apne bite kal ko yaad karta he. uske baad sam garden me jata. Uski purani aadat thi har roj subah thodi bahot kasrat karne ki. Isiliye aaj bhi wo jaldi uth gaya tha. Garden me kasrat karne ke baad ghar me aata he. waha use chachi dikhti he. jo abhi abhi ready hoke ke apne room se bahar aayi thi.
Sam : good morning chachi….
Chachi : good morning beta….
Sam : kya baat he aap itni jaldi uth gayi, kahi bahar jana he kya.
Chachi : nahi who to me har roj 6:30 time pe hi uth ti hu. Who kya hena mujhe khana banana achha lagta he. to sabke liye khana me hi banati hu.
Sam : ye to bahot achhi baat he. aap khana banaiye me chala ready hone. Mujhe aaj diya ke sath college bhi jana he.
 
Sam apne kamre me chala jata he. waha jakar wo pahele to nahane jata he. uske baad ready hokar apni maa ko phone karta he. aur un sabka hal chal puchta he. thodi der apni maa aur papa se baat karne ke baad nasta karne ke liye niche chala jata he.
 
Diya : sam uth to gaya hena maa. Kahi hame jane me der na ho jaye.
Chachi : wo uth chukka he. aur abhi who aata hi hoga.
Sam : naam liya aur banda hazir. Batao kese yaad kiya.
Diya : waah isne to ab acting le sath sath dialog marna bhi chalu kar diya he. ab to college me aur maza aayega.
Sam : who to bas aise hi. Kabhi kabhi kar leta ho.
Chacha : tum log nasta kar lo. Me office ja raha hu. Mujhe ek urgent meeting attend karni he. tum dono college me jake admission le lena. Mene principle se baat kar li he. unhe sirf tumhara naam bata dena.
sam : ok chachaji, thank you for everything.
chacha : are isme kesa thank you ye sab to tumhara hi he.
 
fir ajay singh waha se apne office ki aur chale jate he.
 
Sam and Diya ghar se bahar nikalte he. dono car me beth jate he. sam drive kar raha hota he uar diya uske pass vali seat pe beth jati he.
Sam : to batao ab kaha jana he. aisa karo pahele mere dosto ko lene chalet he. baad me waha se college chale jayenge.
Diya : to tumhare dost ka ghar kaha pe he.
Sam : ……………’
Diya : aisa karo pahele meri dosto ko pick up karte he uska ghar bich me hi aata he.
Sam : done.
 
Sam gadi ko diya ke raste par chala deta he. 10 min gadi chalane k baad diya sam gadi rokne ko kaheti he.tabhi ghar me se koi ladki bahar aati he. use dekhkar diya gadi bahar niklti he aur uske gale milti he. aisa lag raha tha ki dono kai dino baad mil rahi ho. Sam ko kuch ajeeb lagta he lekin wo sochta he aise hi mil rahe honge. Dono gadi me piche beth jati he. aur sam gadi aage badha deta he.
Diya : sam ye he meri dost vidya. Ye mere sath hi padhti thi. Aur ab hum sath me hi college padhne vale he..
 
Vidya Intro :
Vidya dekhne me ekdam simple lagti he Aur who simple hi raheti he. vaise khubsoorat bhi he. agar koi use dekh le to kuch der ke liye vahi ruk jayega. Apne maa baap ki ek lauti beti he. lekin phir bhi usme ego naam ki cheeze hi nahi he. 
 
Sam : diya  kal jab me ghar aaya tab tum apni isi dost ko milne gayi thi hena.
Diya : tumhe kese pata ki me yaha isse hi milne aayi thi.
Sam : bas aise hi guess kiya.
Sam man me : jaise tum gale mil rahi thi guess kar na to banta tha.
 
Phir aise hi baate chalti rahti he aur 5 min me sandy ke ghar par pahoch jate he.sandy bahar hi khada tha. Wo sam ke pass wali seat par beth jata he.
 
Phir sam sandy ka intro dono ladkiyo ko karata he.
 
Sam gadi ko collegele chalta he. college ke gate ke andar gadi ko leke jata he.
Sandy : college to bahot achha he. lagta he yaha bahot maza aane vala he.
Sam : sahi kaha tune bahot maza aane vala he.
 
Sam gadi ko parking me park karta he. sab bahar nikalte he aur college ko dekhte dekhte principle ki office ki aur chal ne lagte he. diya college dekha huva tha isliye ko taklif nahi hoti aur woh log office me jate he.
 
Principal : aao beta me tumhara hi intzaar kar raha tha. Tumhare papa ka phone aaya tha unhone bataya tha ki tum aane vali ho. Aur ye log kon he diya beta.
Diya : ye mera bhai he. aur ye dono hamare dost he.
Principal : tum sab ko yaha admission lena he??
Diya : yes sir.
Prinicipal : ok tum sab ka admission ho jayega tum sab apne apne document yaha saubmit kar do me dekh lunga aur tum sab college kal se hi join karlo.waise to college ek month ke baad start hota he lekin  Humari college me result ke do din baad hi padhana start kar dete he. taki jyada se Jayda result laya ja sake.
Diya : ok sir hum sab kalse hi join kar lete he.
 
Sab log waha se bahar aa jate he aur college ko achhi tarah se dekh rahe hote he. diya pahele bhi college aayi hoti he isliye who in dono ko college dikha rahi hoti he. aise hi college dekhte dekhte sab thak jate he. sab log waha se canteen me kuch khane ke liye jate he.
 
Sam aur sab canteen me bethe hi hote he. ke tabhi waha par ladko ka ek group aata he. jo unse dur jaake beth jata he. usme me se ek ladke ki nazar is table par padti he. aur who sam ke table ki aur dekhta he aur sabko dekhne ko kaheta he. sab is aur dekh kar haste he. aur kuch der me chale jate he.
 
Lekin isi bich sam ne notice kiya ki vidya ka chahere pe kuch tension dikh rahi thi. Aur diya bhi kuch nahi boli jab tak who ladke yaha par the.
 
Phir who sab ghar ki aur nikalte he. pahele sandy phir vidya ko chodke ke diya aur sam ghar pshoch jate he.
 
Sam ghar pahoch kar apne ghar room me ghuss jata he fresh hone ke liye. Uske baad who diya ke kamre ki aur jata he. diya apne kamre me bethkar kuch padh rahi hoti he. sam ko dekhkar who usse bethne ko kaheti he.
 
Diya : bahar kyu khade ho andar aajao apna hi ghar he itna bhi mat sharmao.
Sam : ji malkin ji galti hogayi agli baar dhyan rakhunga.
Itna kahete hi diya ki hassi nikal jati he.
Diya : sach me tumhe actor banna chahiye. Itni achhi acting to karte ho. Waise kuch kaam tha mera.
Sam : nahi nahi bas ise hi tumhare pass me bethne aaya tha.
sam : tumhe kuch ajib nahi lag raha ki tum apne bhai ke sath college jana hoga.
Diya : usme kaisi sharam mujhe to achha laggega ki tum mere sath hoge to mujhe apna homme work karna nahi hoga.
Sam : waah abhi se tayyari kar rahi ho mere pass likhane ke liye.
Diya has ke  : are isme to me expert hu.
Sam : tum school me bhi yahi karti thi.
Diya : me kai bar vidya se likhvati thi.
Sam : waise tumhare school ke bare batao kuch mujhe bhi pata chale ke tum waha kya karti thi.
 
Aur in dono ki baate chal ti raheti he. phir kuch der baaad sam apne kamre me chala jata he. aur apne admission ke baare me apne family ko batata he.
 
Uske baad sab rat ko sab sath me dinner karte he. phir us din kuch khass nahi hota he. sam apne kamre me jakar so jata he.
 
 
Aapko pahele hi bata du ke isme aur naye character aayenge. Unka intro kahani ke sath sath hi milta rahega. Aaj ke liye itna hi baki ka phir kabhi. Milte he ek nayi subah ke sath……….
 
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nice start
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(07-03-2019, 11:13 PM)raj500265 Wrote: nice start

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UPDATE – 5

 
Agle din subah subah ke 6 baje
(aage ki kahani sam ki jubaani)
Sam : abhi to bahot der he. abhi to sab so rahe honge chalo kuch der garden me jakar running hi kar lu.
Sam garden ki aur jata he : kya baat he aaj hawa ke kuch alag hi baat he. aaj subah se kuch alag hi feel ho raha he. aur who dodna saru karta he.
Sam dodte huye apne man me : yaha par har roj akele akele dodte bor ho jaunga agar aas pass koi public garden ho to achha rahata aaj hi chachi se puch lunga kal se wahi chala jaunga.
Koi 25 min dodne ke baad sam apne kamre me aa jata he waha par kuch der thodi kasarat kar ne ke baad wo fresh hone ke liye chala jata he.
jab who tayar hone ke baad who ghadi ki aur dekhta he toh ghadi me 7 baj rahe hote he. who breakfast kar ne ke liye niche chala jata he.
niche main hall me chachaji aur chachiji bethe huye hote he.
sam : kya baat he chachaji itni subah subah yaha par.
Chachaji : ha bhai me kyu nahi aa sakta. Abhi tumhari chachi bata rahi thi ke hamara beta roj subah jaldi uth jaata he. to phir mene socha me kyu na jaldi uth jau.
Chachiji : ye baat yaad rakhana sam. Bahot kaam aayegi kyunki aaj to office ka kuch kaam tha isliye jaldi uthe he kal uth te he ki nahi.
Diya sidiyo se niche aati huyi : ek shair kabhi bhi kal ki nahi sochata. Kal ki kal dekh lenge. Hum to present par jine vale he. sahi kaha na dad.
Chachiji : aa gayi dad ki chamchi.
Sam : chachi yaha pass me koi garden he kya.
Chachiji : ha yaha pass me hi he. tum waha chalk e bhi ja sakte ho.
Diya : tumhe waha kyu jana he.
Sam : tum jaldi utho gi nahi isliye mene socha ki garden me jakar hi jogging kar lau. Waha jyada log hongo achha lagega.
Chachi : achha socha tumne beta waha par tumari jan pahechan bhi badhegi isi bahane tumahare dost bhi banenge.
Chachaji : ha ye sahi kaha tumne.
Diya : baate hi karte rahenge sab ya phir me akele nasta karlu.
Uske baad sab nasta karne beth jate he.
Sam : chachaji aapke pass koi bike padi he.
Chachaji : hamare garage me bahot baki he lekin tum kyu puch rahe ho?
Sam : who kya hena mujhe bike chalana bahut pasand he. isliye me ab se bike par hi college jana chahata tha. agar aap permission de to me usme ja sakta hoo.
Chachaji : ha beta kyu nahi. Usme kya puchna jab bhi tumhe bike chahiye garage me se le lena.
Diya : nahi tum nahi ja sakte to mera kya hogaa.matlab me kese college me jaungi.
Sam apne man me : diya to vidya ke bina college jayegi nahi.
Sam : tum mere sath bike par chali aana. Hum sath me chale jayenge.
Diya : lekin mere sath to diya bhi he. hum dono bike me nahi aa sakati.
Chachji : tum hamari car lejana.driver tumhe chod dega waise bhi tum pahele bhi car me hi jati thi na.
Diya : thik he mom.
Diya : sam college me time se aa jana aaj sir group me divide karenge uske baad hamme project denge.
Sam : thik he me tumhe college me milta hu.
 
Sam breakfast ke baad apni bike leke nikal jata he sandy ke ghar ki aur.
Snady ko waha se pickup karke wo dono college ki or nikal chalte he.
 
Jese hi who log parking se bahar aate he unhe diya ki car nazar aati he. islilye wo dono thodi der ke liye ruk jate he. uske baad sab sath me chalet he class ki aur.
sam apne dosto ke sath class pahoch kar apni seat par bethta he. thodi der baad usi class me riya aa jati he. use dekhkar sam sabkuch bhul hi jata he. wo bas usse hi dekhta raheta he. use ye bhi nahi pata tha ki who kitni der uske sapne khojata he.
usi vakht sandy usse hilata he.
sandy : sale kaha kho gaya he tu sir kabse tera naam pukar rahe he.
sam : kyu??
Sandy : hame projects acchese kar paye isliye wo teams bana rahe he.
Sir : Sameer singh is present or not??
Sam : present sir..
Sir : sameer tumhe aur sandy ko diya aur unke group ke sath kaam karna he.
Sam bujhe huye man se : ok sir. Kaas riya ke sath mujhe rakh diya hota.
sam apne man me : aaj to pari lag rahi he meri riya. Achha hota agar me riya ke group me chala jata. muje kuch sochna hoga aaj usse baat kar ne ke liye. Kese  pata karu wo mujhse abhi bhi gussa he ki nahi. Usse baat kar ne ke liye kuch bahana mil jaye to aaj to maza aajaye.
 
Thodi der me class khatam ho gayi ab thodi der ka break tha isliye wo sab waha se canteen ki or chale gaye.
 
Sam : kya baat he aaj canteen bilkul khali he.
Diya : achha hena ab hamara raj chalega yaha.
 
Itni bhi kya jaldi he, abhi to ham medan me aaye hi nahi.
Piche se ek ladka chalte chalte  bolta he.
Kisi ka dhyan us aur nahi jata par sam use sun leta he.
 
Ye chal kya chal raha he kal who ladke aur aaj ye ladka.
Sam use ladke ki aur isara karte huye : kya tum dono use janti ho.
Vidya : haan who ladka hamare hi school me padhta tha. aur who to hamare diya madam ka special dost he.
Diya : kyat tum bhi, aisa kuch nahi he bhai meri aur uski banti nahi he. class me jab bhi me kuch bolti toh who bich bolta hi tha.
Vidya : isliye, ye bhi koi piche nahi thi jab bhi who ladka kuch karta ye bich me kud hi jati. Wo ladks wiase to bahot achha he hamari madad bhi kai bar karta he. uske baje se hi hum school ke last year hamara project pura kar paye the. Lekin na jane kyu a dono hamesha ladte hi rahete he.
Sam : iska matlab dono ke bich hathi aur chitti jesa mamla he.
Vidya : sahi kaha.
Diya : dekh lungi taumhe mujhe chitti bulayane tumne. Apna time aayega.
Sam : me to tumhe hathi bol raha tha lekin lagta he tumhe hi chitti banana he.
Aur who sab has ne lagte he. phir kuch der unki baate chalti he.
diya : chalo ghar chalte he.mujhe ghar thoda jaldi jana he. vidya chal niklte he.
Vidya : chal waise bhi ab koi lecture nahi he.
Sandy : chal sam hum bhi nikal te he.
Sam kuch sochne ke baad : yaar tu aisa kar diya ke sath chala ja who tumhe ghar chod degi. Me baad me ghar chala aaunga.
Diya : tumhe yaha kya kaam he. ab sare lecture to boring he.
Sam : kuch kaam to nahi he. bas aise hi thodi der college ghumna chahta hu. Me tumhe sam ko milunga.
Sab waha se chale jate he.sam waha se nikal ke college me ghum ne lagta he.
Thodi dur use who ladka dikhta he.jo abhi abhi use canteen me dikha tha. shayad who kisika integar kar raha tha.
Sam uske pass jakar hello mera naam sam me yaha par naya aaya hu.
Ladka : hello me janta hu tumhe tum use diya ke sath bethe the hena. Tum kese jante ho usse.
Sam : jab me admission lene aaya tha us din mujhe mil gayi thi. Achhi ladki he.
Ladka : kya khakh acchi ladki he. paise wale baap ki bigdel beti he.
Sam : tumhe aisa kyu lagta he. tum jante ho usse.
Ladka : who mere sath bachpan se padhti he. jab dekho tab who mujhe paresan karti raheti he.
Sam : lekin usne mujhe to pareshan kiya nahi.
Ladka : to phir tum yaha kya kar rahe ho. Uske pass hi rahena chahiye tha.
Sam : me usi ke sath tha lekin woh log ghar chale gaye to me college ghum raha tha tabhi tumhe yaha dekha isliye tumhare pass chala aaya.
Ladka : kya jante ho is college ke bare me.
Sam : kuch bhi nahi , abhi naya hi aaya hu is shahr me isliye kuch pata hi nahi.
Ladka : tabhi me sochu tum abhi yaha kya kar rahe ho.
Sam : kyu yaha kya buray he. achhi khais jagah he.
Ladka : nahi koy buray to nahi he. lekin is vakht yaha par koi nahi hota. Jaldi pata chal jayega.
Ladka : waise mera naam akshay he. lekin sab mujhe akki he bulate he.
Sam : akki tumse milkar accha laga. Baad me milte he bye.
Aur sam uske baad waha se nikal jata he.
Sam apne man me : ye to nahi ho sakta. Mera jasoosi man kaheta he ye to diya se dushmani ka dikhawa kar raha he. waise banda achha tha agar dosti hoti he to isme koi buray nahi he.
Aur uske baad sam waha chal ke apne ghar ki aur nikal ta he. kyunki car to diya leke chali gayi thi.
 
woh apne college ke gate tak hi pahocha tha ki tabhi waha ek ladki apni leke sam ko thok deti he.. end time pe sam koi ko bike ka pata chal jata he. aur who waha hat jata he . lekin who ladki apne aapko nahi bacha pati aur wahi par gir jati he. is wakht class abi chal rahi thi isliye campus me jyada log nahi the.
Us ladki ko girte huye dekhkar sam use bachane ke liye uski aur jata he. lekin tabhi who ladki bohot hi jaldi uthke khadi ho hati he aur apne kapde thik kar ke pahele apne aas pass me dekhti uske baad sam ki aur dekh kar kaheti he.
Ladki :dikhta nahi he kya. Aise koy raste pe chalta he.
Sam apne aap ko rok nahi paata he pahele uski harkte dekh kar aur uski baate sunkar who jor jor se hasne lagta he. who jab haste haste thak jata he. tab usse yaad yata he ki who ladki abhi waha khadi he aur uski aur hi dekh rahi he.
Sam apne aap ko sambhalte huye : I am sorry miss. Mujhe dhyan deke chalna chaiye tha. agli bar me ulta chalunga isliye mujhe piche ki aur bhi dikhay de sake. Aur who hasne lagta he.
Ladki : oyy, daffar dekh lungi tujhe.
Sam : na na aisa mat karna jitna dekhana he abhi dekh le baad me mujhe pareshan mat kar na me achhe parivar se hu.
Iske baad who ladki bahot hi gusse me apni bike leke waha se sam ki aur dekhte dekhte chali jati he.
 
Sam apne man me ab yaha se ghar kese jaya jaye. Koi auto bhi nahi he.
 
Sam ko sam ghar par aata he toh chachi rasoi me apna kaam kar rahi hote he. who sam ko dekh kar use pani pineka bolti he. lekin sam mana kar upar chala jata he.
Sam apne kamre me
Aaj to bahot thak gaya yaar, aaj phir riya se baat nahi huyi. Lekin seriously who ladki gajjab thi kitne din baad itna maza aaya. Kal mujhe kuch to sochna hi padega aur is baat ka bhi koi hal nikalana padega.
Aaj ka dinner upar hi kar leta hu. Lekin maa ne mana kiya tha jese ghar par raheta he waise har jagah nahi rahena chahiye. Chalo niche hi chala jaunga. Lekin usse pahele apne ghar par phone kar leta hu. Aur who apne ghar par phone ghuma deta he. Chalo inhe baat kar ne do milte he thodi der baad.
raat ko dinner ke wakht sabhi log dinning table par bethe huye he.
chacha : sam bhaiya bata rahe the. Ke tunhe business me bahot interest he. agar tum mere office aana chaho to aa sakate ho.
Sam : thik he chacha ji abhi to thode din is sahar ko pahele jan lu uske baad me aapki office bhi aaya karunga.
Diya : aur kya kya sokhe he tumhare.
Sam : sokh to hamare bahot he kudiye. Lekin hum sarif bande he. sirf wahi karte he jo sahi lagta he.
Diya : kya kahena chate ho.
Sam: bas yahi ki chachi kya khana banaya he. aaj to lag raha he. bahot jyada kha liya he.
Chachi : bahot bahot sukhriya beta. Aaj tak in dono mese kisine bhi khane ki tarif nahi ki tum ne sabit kar diya ki tum mere bete ho.
Diya : dekho papa ye sam hamara pata kat raha he.
 
Thodi der inki baate chalti raheti he. uske baad sab apne apne kamre me chale hate he. aur aaj ka din bhi khatam ho gaya milte he ek nayi subah ke sath….
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